||With your Oceaneyes...HealMeFOREVER|| Part 6 - pg55

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Manahil

@...Mallu...

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awesomee upd <333
Loved that part .. Amazing ..

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GARIMA

@grungta11

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awesome start...:)

luved it...:)

waiting fr nxt prt...:)

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awsome update...
Luvd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

I read both the chappys abhi pata hai.. Sorry.. 🤣
for the 1st chappy... I just laughed n laughed n laughed... Reading the warnings... By god... Kya mast warnings di thu Reyaansh ne... 🤣

and then woh macchar ko maar diya... And jail mei chali jaogi..OMFG... 🤣 ... Gosh... I soo just loved it.. 🤣

but this update was lil different.. A lil serius types... I just Loved how Rey spoke abt his life shuru mei in a philosophical way...n then like a small kid telling her abt his life... It was sweet... But his pain cud be felt all over...

I loved how he described evrything... That jahaag (ship) wala line was my favv...

and i Love the way they describe each other as "Mr.I--am-Stubborn" ... Etc... Lol... Ye mast hai... 😃

All in all... Story seems to be awesome indeed... Waiting for further updates... 😃

P.S. - I never knew ki u write *runs off* ... 😛

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Rey kinna bhara Nautanki-Baz hai 😆...

Kria is also no less 😉...

Kese kese naam hain dono k 'Mr. Bad-Pati' 'Mr. I-can-change-my-statement' 'Mrs. Silent-treatment' 🤣...

Haila!!! Kria and Rey senti bhi hote hain , as in sachi wala senti ...

Me-nu nai pata tha , i thought yahan par sirf Nautanki hoti hai ...

Kria Doctor hai , kya baat hai 👍🏼...

Akhir kria ne Rey se uss 'The Diary' ki baat kar he di N Rey after all of his Nautankis agreed to tell her 👍🏼...

Ahem!! Mujhe toh laga k raat k 2 baje ek Couple , Ocean k kinare sirf romance karte hain 😳...

But yahan toh ulta roya ja raha tha ...

Bara he emotional scene tha KR ka , Ocean k kenaare , where Kria promised to Heal him forever ...

Wah!! Senti hote hote kya dialogue mare Rey ne 😎...

Uski diary ka first chap interesting tha , i have experienced half of 😛..

Apki dost ne chun k likhi hain 😉...

Mast update tha 😃...

I'm loving this story even more ❤️...

Waiting to know k what is in this 'Mr. I-Am-Sinking-Still-In-Air' ...

N thanks for the PM Di 😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

lolzz... dramebaaz rey..😆

but ek baat h... jo log sabko hasane me lage rehte hai.. vo sabse zyada lonely hote hai..😳

aur rey ka toh past lag rha hai sad...😕

kriya bhi kam nhi h.. kitni tactfully rey ko ready kar liya batane ke liye..😉

his childhood had been too perfect...😊

thats where the problem starts... coz this perfection becomes too dangerous at times

wanna see.. what happened with him..😛

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

AWSummm workkk... kinjooo di... updateee sooon... <3

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

Achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha
okhh...!!!! frstly i hate u a lottt... huhhh...!!!!

nd now abt update...

its supr awsummm...
totally rockd...
nd yaa this is truelly diff. cncpt...
lovd d way kriya made her plan succesfull...
so this is frst chptr of his diary nd i loved it truelly...:) :)

now forgod sake reveal who is writer...??????

tu apni friend ka appreciation mt kha KJ...!!!!

nd no thnxx 4 link...jb pucha tb toh btaya ni...?!!!!!!

sorry for interrupting dear but we should not blame Kinjal for anything 😆

i know you were joking about "tu apni friend ka appreciation mt kha KJ...!!!!"

but sometimes it hurts that person darling .😆

I think you know her better than me .. she will never DO IT right?😳

May be we dont know reality 😃

Edited by MSmyworldMS - 12 years ago

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

wow. . Superb update..
Loved it. .

Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

sorry for interrupting dear but we should not blame Kinjal for anything😆

i know you were joking about "tu apni friend ka appreciation mt kha KJ...!!!!"

but sometimes it hurts that person darling .😆

I think you know her better than me .. she will never DO IT right?😳

May be we dont know reality 😃

chill maar
hum mazak kar rahe the
tu jyada...tension na le re
humare beech aisa tp chalta rehte hai

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago