||With your Oceaneyes...HealMeFOREVER|| Part 6 - pg55

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awesome start...loved it

waiting for next update

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

res...😳
unres,,

sowwiee buhat zayda time baad karing main...😕

where were you all this while?? (TM ask this from writer)

that was just fabulously written i mean all those teasing and little romancing between a young couple you catched the thread perfectly... i loved that scene really to the end when rey was messing with kriya about her statement of asking permission...

i can truly imagine him doing those antics... and then that kriya instigating rey by crying and asking him she hasn't right to know... har ladki ka bhramastar hota hai yeh toh...😳

i am viewing it as the real way only till know you have excelled in way of narrating things brilliantly be it rey's childhood and things related to his time spend with his sister or mischief around school... i loved it to the bits...👏

Update soonish...

loved it...

thanks for pm...😆 🤣

PS:sorry for bakwas comment...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Totally Amazing Di ... !!!

awesome start ...

loved kri'a understanding nature and rey's naughtiness 😳

thanxx for the om and do continue soon

will be waiting

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

beautiful update👏👏

well-described👏

loovveedd ittt😊

waiting for d nxt part😳

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

superb update di

i totally loved the way u potrayed everything

loved it

thanks for pm

m like button isn't working count this one as my like

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

for chappy 1 and 2 both
hmm di
sorrry for late comment
and
hmmm
kya update
and
concept soching
awesome di
really nyc
do update next part soon and mane lyk kardiya