||With your Oceaneyes...HealMeFOREVER|| Part 6 - pg55 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wow
chapter 1 was amazing
i loved it
specially the banners
they are wow...
this is the first work by you that i would be reading so im excited
thanks for the PM
update soon
i'm waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Waooo ==)) Nice postt ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
You guys started it in Swaron n KR FF :)) interesting part...
Edited by charmee_sammy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Ahem!! Uhmmm!!! 🤣

Alright!! I know this 'Friend' of your's Kinju Di , esa kuch woh he likh sakti hai šŸ˜†...
But mein apna mun yahan nai kholun gi , promise kita hai šŸ˜›...
Now about the review for this part...

Banners ke bare mein i did say before...
Both of them are Superb šŸ‘šŸ¼...

ABout the part mein kya kahun , can't stop 'Rolfing' 🤣...
The part was hilarious , a bit of romantic at the end , very 'Eww' in the middle N Dramatic as well ...
See apki dost toh multi-talented nikli , ek he part mein inna kuch šŸ˜‰ 🤣...

Alright!! All those restrictions about 'Not' touching 'The-Reyaansh-Singhania's' diary bohat 'Eww' thi...
Specially the second one 🤢 šŸ˜†...
Woh chapters k naam 8th wale k ilawa sab ajeeb and anokhe thay šŸ˜†...

Wah!! Acha tareeka hai apni wife ko surprise karne ka , aate he inni dramatic story l k baith gaya...
As if usne murder kiya hai...
N then woh dialogue ...
mein waha jail me Chakki pissing and pissing aur tum apne ghar pe ussi Chakki ka aata thussing and thussing "
Machar ko mar k inna bhara drama create kiya n bechari Kria ko dara diya šŸ˜†...
Phir woh uski ghatiya si poem 🤣...
"Machli meri rani hai jeevan uska Reyaansh hai fish bolo ge to darr jayegi gaana gaaoge to aapko maar jaayegi..
Phew!! halat buri ho gai , yeh parh k šŸ˜†...

Mast story hai šŸ˜Ž...
N yeh story romantic ho bhi nai sakti , ese he theek hai 🤣...
Sachi mein i'm loving it ā¤ļø...
N thank u Di for posting this ā¤ļø...

Waise apki yeh 'Friend' bohat he ziyada talented hai ya shayad farigh rehti hai jo essi poems n Story sochti hain 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

You guys started it in Swaron n KR FF :)) interesting part...

i started 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Very nice start! I agree, its quite differerent and interesting. The warnings in the diary were so hillarious...i couldnt stop laughing! šŸ˜†

Please update soon and please pm me...
Edited by kamlesh32 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow awesm kitni ache warning h. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-

i started 🤣 🤣

you started i meant.. sorry typo.. lol cell se mistake hota hai... anyways thanks for starting it in Swaron version too😳
Edited by charmee_sammy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Can this ff gets fdw more likes please
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

you started i meant.. sorry typo.. lol cell se mistake hota hai... anyways thanks for starting it in Swaron version too😳

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