Thread 1 : Arshi Fantasy FF : Trapped Soul || Completed !!!!!

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

I was so excited to read this update and the story and I really loved but I still got scared sometimes

So arnav is gonna free that spirit from that mad spirit and he will be living in that haunted place and may be in love with ghost haha!!! But I really liked the concept and the banner is awesome

Arnav listened to that mad woman/beggar and she even bandaged him without any ointment...arnav found speaking skull in the drawer am shocked he is still alive I would be dead till now if something happens like this

Hope to get more scary and interesting updates

Thanks for pm

Update soon

Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

this is ramanchi...!
that was a very short update...!

please do continue soon...

and thanks for the pm!

Edited by sanjanaseth1994 - 12 years ago

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Nice update.

Arnav will release that girl's soul from the evil spirit..

Waiting you to reveal the story of the girl (Khushi?)

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@Shinning_Angel

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

First of all bhai I am sorry,I Didn't Comment on last chapter.

We had a family gathering so you see :P I Hope I am forgiven.

This is definitely DAMN SCARY

What on earth is this yaar? I Definitely Got scared

Shyam has Kept Khushi trapped in the Hotel?

Arnav will be the one to save her right?

That Old Beggar is also Pretty scary.

A TALKING SKULL

If it was me I Would Be Dead scared.

Please continue soon,Cant wait to read more

Love Marrie x

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-himu-

@-himu-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

oh... i got sared by hearing the musuc... but i like it more than shattered heart

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arshi16

@arshi16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

i absolutely love ur ff ! its tooo good !

i guess the mad spirit is shyam

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

I lovd this story...
Very very very intrstng...!!!
So that was Khushi's lettr...
Y that spirit s followig her...???
Waitng 4 d nxt update...Cntinue soon

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Pizookie

@Pizookie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

hufff... BB.. I'm alone at home and I thought ki I can read this story now..

But you totally scared me..

My heart is still beating fast...

I'm very angry with u..

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MAS_5253

@MAS_5253

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

sorry for d late comment
too scary d hangin girl d skull i actly blurted a swear word n got not so looks by my hubby lol
m scared
wats d story did khushi commited suicide bcuz of shyam or did he kiled her
update soon..thanx for d pm

Edited by MAS_5253 - 12 years ago