Thread 1 : Arshi Fantasy FF : Trapped Soul || Completed !!!!!

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MOHIT

@MT_loverboy

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

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Posted: 12 years ago

wat d! 😡
bhoot hu main...i read it duffer...
Nice start...but ll cmmnt rest tomorrow...
So till tomorrow again reswa... 😳

unreswa🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
first of all what the!!!! how the!!!! damn i missed the first placewa😡😡😡😡
Bhai TUM THEEK HO!!!!😲😲😲😲🤢🤢🤢🤢
Another SS from you🤢🤢🤢🤢😳😳😳
I love the prologue😳😳😳😳
i mean really😲😆😆😆 GHOSTWA dont mess with my arnie boy😛😛😛😛
u ll forget ur GHOSTGIRI🤣
nice banner bhai❤️
dont tell me that khushi is the ghostwa😡😡😡
actually its not scary its kinda interesting
now update the first chapter soonwa😡😡😡
HOUSE HOUSE MEIN LIKHA HAI GHOSTWA AANE KA NAAM

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mohit
What the hell

Ye kaise music daala hai...

I was scared like hell

N u even said k keep the volume high

So i kept it to maximum

N i had my earphones instead of speakers

N this was ur prank na...😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

To scare all of us

Main raat ke 1:15 a.m. pe update padh rhi hun...

Do u even realise how scared i am rite now ??

Vaise Good start

N Shyamu kyun hai is banner mein ??

N Khushi kahan hai ??

N Wtssup with this Piano n Book n that weird Lady n this weird Hotel ??

Update Soon

M still scared

N m damn angrryywaaa on u

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

wat d..????? 😡
u r back wit a new story..!! 😡
princess u r officially becuming a writer now..! 😆
kya baat hai..????
Tu ek kaam jaar,comedy nd sad toh ho gaya,avi yeh bhi haunted wala aa gaya,toh aab bol romance kaab likhega..???? 😡
jo arnav nd khushi ko sab se zaada suit karta hai woh likh duffer 😡
but jo bhi ho i just love d prolouge ❤️
i mean sumthng haunted nd like ghosty type 😉
love these kind of stories ❤️
chal aab jaldi se chappy 1 post kar or else i will slap u hardwaa 😡
hatewaa u 😡
hugs 🤗

Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

is this the one where khushi is a spirit right
shame you arent continuing the other one
but we cant force you either now can we
hmmm new type of arhi story from ya
you were right in saying in your index different types of arhi love
hmmm so why did that woman think arnie can help
and help whom khushi
but how can he help i wonder
cheers for pm

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Haunted!
Aaahhh im scared of scary/haunted stories or even movies!:P
but i dunno why i felt like reading ur story :D
And i must say i was def.scared!:P
But still i loveddit!!:D
ty for pm

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Krishika

@KaShArHi_Krishi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sighhh On the second page but HEY FIRST THE WORST...SECOND THE BEST!!!

Wow is Khushi a bhoot 😉 I can't wait to read more!!! Bhaiyaa aap toh bade writer bangaye!!! 😛 *pats him on his cheek hard* 🤣

Wow I can't wait to read more!!! I hate suspense isliye jaldi update karna 😛

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

ohhh... HAUNTED... ab kya KHUSHI ko BHUT BANOGE? NAAHHHIIINNN

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

is khushi a ghost? If so hw wil they become together. R u going to kill arnav when the story ends? Hope tht they stay as human beings.
*dont discontinue tis story also.
So,ur writing stories in all types,but still i miss romance.
Interesting theme,i just love haunted stories.
I was luking 4 sumthing like tis.thx 4 taking the initiative.
When wil khushi make an entry?
Plz updt sn.
The updt was awesome.
Thx 4 the pm.

Edited by joe4joe - 12 years ago