Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #5

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Afya, you have outdone yourself with the update this time.
And the videos are too good.
They add to the update.
So well suited.

Loved how Arnav misses Khushi when she is not around.
And how he follows her to Buaji's place.
And then the back massage scene.
Loved it.
I love this Arnav.
How he unnerves Khushi with his behaviour!
Loving their relationship now.

@bold, Really? Thank you so much Charu.😊

I am glad you enjoyed it.

@blue, lots more to come.😉

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: Afya

Welcome back, Vandana.
It's quite odd not having you around in my story as much anymore, but I understand.😊
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For me too, I have a new assignment that I have taken on, which works on deadlines the next one is tomorrow.So once that is out of the way I will catch up!

Especially as I see the wonderful comments you are getting makes me want to read ASAP!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Sure, no problems!

Good luck on the assignment!😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: Afya

@bold, Really? Thank you so much Charu.😊

I am glad you enjoyed it.

@blue, lots more to come.😉

Looking forward to it!😉

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

superb update loved it...omg am loving this side of arnav☺️..but he is confusing khushi more and more😕...i just wish he doesnt raise her hopes and shatter it the next minute as he did in the serial🥺...i want both of them fight against shyam and reveal his shameful acts...

pls update the next part soon...so can we expect the confession from arnav after payash wedding...cant wait for the next part...

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

I had missed the last 2 chapters and what a treat it was to read them at one go. Absolutely loved the way Arnavji is wooing Khushi. And the last chapter had 2 of my favorite scenes. Happy happy!!!!

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments.

Part 30 will hopefully be up later tonight.

Edited: Will post tomorrow guys.

Res moved to the next page.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Thanks for the pms, Afya. Both the chapters are written very beautifully, I really enjoyed reading them. And I loved watching these videos as well, as they are all my favourites scenes of ipk. Please continue with your awsome work.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

I just loved this update dear,(part29)
awesome just simply awesome...👍🏼❤️
the teasing session is still on by our Arnav a very handsome Romeo...oh how lovely...poor Khushi..woh bichaari inn sab ko kya jawab deti?kya hua kuchh samay pehle? inn ke Arnav bitwa/nannav/bhai aajkal bahut hi naughty mood mai hai...apni Khushi ko hansil karne ki koshish kar rahe hai..aur upar se yeh dhak dhak..😳...very beautifully written...and at night the thoughts of her feelings...
Next Khushi chali gai? haaye..and very eager Arnav also follow his dil ki rani...well no one can go yoohi from Arnav Singh Raizada..so yeh toh DIL ka maamla hai dilbar...he wants to stay with her awww how sweet of you Arnav..itni miskil kum thi Khushi ke jiwan mai jo yeh LG gir pade paani ki wajah se...or uparse maalish...poor Khushi na jaane kab inka dil dhak dhak kar raha hai ekdum bullet train ki maafik kab jaa ke shaant hoga? waise Khushi Jisne aapko yeh dhak dhak ka dard diya hai unhi ke paas in ka ilaaj hai...

a question dear for you...woh tarrace waala scene Shyam and Khushi ke bich ka Payash ke marriage ke din ka kya woh aap isme shaamil karne waali hai?...

thanks for the pm and sorry for the delay...
take care .🤗 for you. For the wonderful update.

Edited by Divyahet - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Afya,

This is now my third attempt on writing the comment having lost 2 previous ones...

Will comment on the last two chapters together in general...

I loved both.

The dance of passion never fails to mesmerise me and you used it so perfectly here, the videos are really falling into the situation so appropriately like they have been written for your story. Really superb job with that the effort is commendable. Reading your writing it never fails to make me think that these are my thoughts...just written by you..

I love how he is going all out to woo her and leaving no stone unturned in his endeavour...loved how he dances with her...loved everyone's reaction and loved how nonchalantly he says he just danced with his Wife...wow!

Loved how confused that dance leaves her, unable to understand what is going on with him and why he is behaving the way he is...just causing her turmoil and making her vulnerable , she still thinking that this marriage has an expiry date.

I love the effect he is having on her with his full on flirty and charming persona,...one that she is unable to decipher and comprehend leaving her confused and but at the same time scared...of being too attached to him...and this family who is now so important to her who she loves dearly ..

Love how he kisses her and then challenges her and she tying her best to avoid him unable to look him in the eye, in fear of her emotions being given away...but he does not let go and love he teases her about it ...

I love that after the kiss she is able to explain to the family what that matter was ...she is even unable to explain it to herself , the feelings that she is feeling, the havoc the emotions are playing on her...the attention that he is showering on her...

Love that he knows she is ignoring him and avoiding him and instead of backing down he just raises the bar...as he knows one thing he wants her in his life...the respect, love and attraction he feels for her reinforcing his stand...

Love the changes in him coming home early to devote more time on his mission to keep her in his life, following her to her parents house, that video ' haq' one one of my favourites so I loved the you included it...loved the inclusion of the sensuous way he touches her neck to wipe the water...it said so much...

So her plan is to distance herself from him but he is perusing her relentlessly so of course he follows her there and just by her expressions he realises that is up to something. I love that he can read her so well...

I loved his decision to stay with her at her parents and how she is so lost and preoccupied by his thoughts wondering what he is up to and more importantly why...I so wish they talk and he tells her what he feels, I realise he is not good with words and he thinks his gestures and actions are self explanatory but clearly if he was to tell her maybe she would meet him half way instead of running away.

That little mention of Shyam makes me realise that he has to be back..and I am hoping that when he does Arnav and Khushi have relationship has reached a level where he will stand by her with out any questions or doubts...maybe your reason to make Shyam disappear, is to give them time to strengthen their relationship instead, so Shyam is unable to cause a rift...

I loved how your videos are fitting in so well keeping with the characterisation and the need of the story and taking us down memory lane...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago