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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Loved the Prologue…beautifully written and expressed well.

Can't wait to know how you unfold this FF..

Continue soon dear….Please do PM for future updates..😛

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

I got a new one to stalk n follow in IF... This can't be true... You can't be a first time writer... That was so beautifully written and the whole scene was so well presented... Excellent narration n I loved it... You have left us with lot of questions and I am intrigued to know more now...

The best I liked was the feelings that ran through her when she looked at the babies face and how the baby latched on without having to search n find... Looks like she is here to give away the baby...n looks like the little angel has already sensed it... That's how babies are... They can sense what an adult cannot understand even with words... They know their mothers warmth... Was so emotional and so well written...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

updated my cmnt on page 7

thnks to nidhi di for the recomendation

and thnku for the buddy request if u woulnt hve done i hve would have done dat for the updates😆😆

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

interesting start pregnant with emotional well done she is helpless and she has to leave her baby behind some thing no mother would ever wish to have to do amazing start continue soon

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Omgg...where wer u ???
Such a brilliant writer...i truly feeld blessd to be part of such wonderful forum eriters...
Wonderful start...:)
Very eager for first chapter