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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

You writing is so poetic! The prologue is gripping, thanks to Meera I came to know about such a stunning story :)

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Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

You are what I call a natural writer. Everything flowed so well! From the description to the emotions to the actions throughout...reading it was just so..easy.

I will make no predictions because there are just too many options and I want to keep up the suspense for the next chapter.

I predict numerous readers and numerous threads for this story's future! Waiting very impatiently for the first chapter!

PS. Do you have a PM system?

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

wow.

what a powerful prologue, made me feel sad :(.

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Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

U r really gud wid expressing emotions!
As ur first tym dis is really amazing!
Plzz continue soon, would really love to read ur story!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Obviously i love angsty stories
But angst right from the prolouge..?? (Stupid question)

Still i have to read- i cant not read- esp the way you write- mind blowing

Great
How often will you be updating

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Nice prolague ...
Pls pm when up date next chapter..

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

I had a hunch u would start writing very soon.. All the best.. I hope the girl is not Khushi but Arnav's mom..

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Kavyanjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Awsom blossom u play quite gud with words da way u shwd da emotions of a mothr 4 hr new born da pain of soon leaving da baby is quite gud...i wndr who da baby most lykly i guess itz khushi...baby ko orphnge mein chor dia ryt? Chalo letz c who da baby n how dis story turns i m quite curious n i sincerly hope itz not nodr arshi luv-hate concpt story i'm bored with it n hope 2 somthing diffrnt arshi mayb a more undrstnding n 'civil' arshi i guess...plz PM me ok..

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Wonderful Start...

You have great writer inside you👏

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