Baby when You are drunk and I am high(swaron ss)

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

I had expected a lil happy ending to this one but you gave it an even more painful but lovely ending..
Two lovers die with the help of the strength of the love which they share wow Harshu..
It was painful yet very very peaceful for the two of them and also the readers..
I loved the lines dedicated to love you wrote after the end of your update they were beautiful Harshu..
Take a bow for writing something so so so good.. Truly commendable..😃.
Love,
Kash Di..🤗.
P.S- waiting to read something from you very very soon Harshu and give us a happy ending this time if you can??😃.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

not all stories have happy endings. and that's what i loved about this story

the epilogue was beautiful.. it was a sad end, a little bit painful but it was perfect.

Loved it..

This story was one masterpiece. the way you showed two people trying to help eachother.

Understanding eachother 👏👏

Beautiful work. Really enjoyed reading it.

And the lines written in the END! 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

I have no words to describe

this OS

or FF

beautiful , dramatic , peaceful , hurtful

and it has a unknown pleasure while reading it

i came to know

you are a beautiful writer never discontinue writing

i just love this write up ,

My heart winced in pain when i read that they died

as i was soo much connected to them

beautifully emoted !

continue the fab works and

Thanks for the Pm

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

ss ke start se end tak

i could not comment

so here is the comment for the story

i cried reading this story

it was tragically emotional

it not only touches my chords

but also inspires

it gives an insight of the lives

of people, who may be around us

carrying backpacks of pain.

one can never predict what happens in life

but can surely understand its outcomes.

both sharon and swayam were deeply

engrossed in pain, anger, hatred, self guilt

and love.

we always wish and want loved stories to have no end

but things don't go that way

many have sad ends, some ends are left loose

but this had a tragically sinister end.

and thats what i loved.

i loved the way each and every emotion was expressed

i felt all the emotions

the story was realistic

it was believable

i felt hatred for the fathers of these two lost souls

and thanked god a thousand times to give me

a wonderful family.

i understood that love is not just the happy

romantic period, it does not need to have it

it just needs to be felt enough to

force you to look beyond yourself and sacrifice

yourself.

i loved the whole ss

do write more dii

waiting for more of your works

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Honestly, This (last) one was just blastic man..Such a solid update,what a beautifull emotional flow of words with reunion of swayam POV,Literally i cried a lot after read..Dont know why but i felt too touchy with his character..It was heart wrenching to read how he suffered,how his mother died and how he introduced himself to peoples again..Such a tiny parts but i loved it..Just loved the way SwaRon got comfortable with each other,Sharon was giving him that comfort,which mostly needed for him..And above all,their relationship was beautifully penned..So as a writer,U are just amazing..trully Great Done..!!

Now the Epilouge was again painfull and so so heart touching..I just remember my one of the fav writer Baz,She always used to give us Epilogue at the end and always make me so cried..Same case here..The ending was sad but it was really beautifull according to the required state of story..I really like ur way to write sad ending yet a very gud ending for me..The pain and certain evolution of emotions was amazingly expressed as well as explained..

I just loved the lines in red at the ending u wrote,It was small dedication for love and loved ones.,Those lines are really true..

So i only say great work,I had never imagined ki 3 din me main ek SS padhke itna attract ho jaunga..Seriously i like ur writing..So just keep it up the way u are..ok..

Gud luck

Thanx for PM

Cheers,

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

I've said it before, and I will say it again.. this is one of the best stories I've read in IF... so beautiful, so painful, this story made me emotional..
the last line was dengerously beautiful.. not every story has happy ending.. yes, so damn true.. the part where you said, their love didn't pull them out of darkness, but gave them strength to embrace the darkness, marvelous girl.. am short of word for this story... it hurts so much at the end but still it gives a warm, caring feel, they were united in the end..
thay died together..!!
hat's off girl, you are freaking amazing..👏

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

harshu first of all sorry for being late... 😔 m commenting together for ur last two updates and epilogue too...

you hv done simply awesome job as writer... 😃 harshu ur fabulous writer... d way u have portrayed their emotion's...simply outstanding job... 👏 u really left me speechless..

love d way swaron were supporting each other...and d way sharon was trying her best to reduce his pains...both d updates were really heart touching...

and now abt ur epilogue...it was sad ending i was expecting a happy one...but still it was beautiful ending...or i should say it was perfect as per d story...i just loved d entire SS... 😃

waiting to read more from u...keep writing...love Divya 😳