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Posted: 11 years ago
Harshu dear...two people in pain becoming each oother's strength support...amazing is a very small word to say... u have touched my heart... it just too good to decribe it in words 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
They both get wrong families. The pain u described beautifully. N Swaron consoled each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
harshu---
wonderful update..
love the intensity---love the way they know each other
its a rugged story of hopeless individuals----i mean individuals who have lost hope----and their only hope of salvation is with each other.

ur writing is soft and strong at the same time.

love --
medha di.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

Harshu dear...two people in pain becoming each oother's strength support...amazing is a very small word to say... u have touched my heart... it just too good to decribe it in words 😊😊😊



Awww thank you🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update

They both get wrong families. The pain u described beautifully. N Swaron consoled each other



thanks🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
What in Christ's name was this update Harshu holy mother of god..😲.
Its mindblowing beyond words to describe for me..❤️.
What maturity in your writing, what depiction of pain and suffering.. Take a bow for it Harshu simply superb I'd say..😃.
I flinched every minute or two on reading Sharon and Swayam's POV when they were narrating their tale to each other.. And when Sharon would comfort him I'd feel comforted too..😊.
Lovely Harshu keep up the good work..😊.
Love,
Kash Di..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg it was really really sad part update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

harshu---

wonderful update..
love the intensity---love the way they know each other
its a rugged story of hopeless individuals----i mean individuals who have lost hope----and their only hope of salvation is with each other.

ur writing is soft and strong at the same time.

love --
medha di.



thank you for the wonderful comment diii🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
edited on pg 19 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

What in Christ's name was this update Harshu holy mother of god..😲.
Its mindblowing beyond words to describe for me..❤️.
What maturity in your writing, what depiction of pain and suffering.. Take a bow for it Harshu simply superb I'd say..😃.
I flinched every minute or two on reading Sharon and Swayam's POV when they were narrating their tale to each other.. And when Sharon would comfort him I'd feel comforted too..😊.
Lovely Harshu keep up the good work..😊.
Love,
Kash Di..🤗.



awww kash diii🤗 thank you for the wonderful review I am glad you felt the emotions that I tried to portray...

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