Baby when You are drunk and I am high(swaron ss) - Page 16

I feel so surprising to read this SS from ur writing house..I always used to read one shots from u which i always enjoyed..But this one is also amazing..As i read,i feel like feeling of OS but then u converted into SS..The concept was purly different,different swaron and most above unique treatment done at writers side..Characters were also beautifully placed..Perfectly potrayed at sharon,when she was drunk and her feelings to overpower her unconcious state..So truth and dare wala part was amazing,i enjoyed,Their eyelock n all..I could easily imagined that state of SwaRon..I felt part no 3 was bit bold and naughty..is'nt it.?Haha but i enjoyed where sharon wanted to take away all the pain of swayam..and first meeting me hi itna close..!!I just loved that.!!Well peoples says na ki nashe me aadhmi hamesha sach bolta hai,Same case here with swaron...I like ur writing to desrcibe such hot n intense moves of SwaRon..Now in part 4 my all confusion and queries got compiled here after read..I like their way to showing interest in each other,Specially that waking up wala scene..Which reminded me some bollywood movies..I must say here u showed such a unique execution of writing,masterpiece work to potrayed such emotions..Now the next one was heart wrenching man..The real story of sharon took place here in this update..Those thing which happened with her was terrible,enough to make cry..and seriously i cried after read..I just loved swayam how he cared about her..Now this one was also beautifully penned,u have perfect talent to show such heartbreaking scenes or to create such specific deep emotion of characters..Swayam's pov was very well written n just perfect narration by him or indirectly by u..His background and he just way he suffered,make me cried,I loved sharon here,the way she comforting him..The pain and hurt which u had described is just amazing..AMAZING..!!

Very well penned down
I dont want them to suicide please
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

Great update :)

Alright so here is the last update of this SS that is the epilogue.Its been a wonderful journey as a writer with this SS.This concept was something that just popped up into my head on day.It was dark and inviting and I gave it a chance and the response really amazed me.I never really thought that one crazy thought would be so well recieved.Thank for your and likes and special thank you to those who took their precious time to comment on the update.Love you guys.Adios for now.Enjoy the epilogue cheers!!!!!!

EPILOGUE

"This is a live report from Amrapali residential area. Today's breaking news has shaken the entire population of the town. Two dead bodies were found in an apartment here this morning. What was shocking that the two people who died are supposedly the son and daughter of two of the most successful business tycoons of the state. Let's move over and ask the police inspector in charge in detail about the incident"

"Sir Can you shine some light on the case as to how and when this all happened."

"An FIR was registered this morning informing of two deaths here, the FIR was lodged by one of the deceased's friend who shares the apartment with her. The police reached here to investigate and found a girl and boy dead in the living room of the apartment"

"Sir what is the cause of death is it murder or suicide or is it accidental death"

"Both the bodies are sent for post mortem and the reports will confirm what the cause was but as far as the forensics could tell it was a planned suicide. The cause is predicted to be drug overdose."

"What are the predictions based on?"

"Well the boy whose body was found has already tried suicide once before a few months back and also the girl's friend admitted in her statement that the victim was depressed and has been so for the past few months. Also the amount of the drug estimated in the body is just enough to cause death which indicates that the deceased had planned this, So the probability of suicide is very high but nothing can be said now. The investigations are going on and everything will be out very soon."

"Last question sir is it true that the victims are the children of well known business tycoons Mr.Raiprakash and Mr.Shekhawat?"

"Yes the victims are identified as Sharon Raipraksah and Swayam Shekhawat"

"That was Karan malik the officer in charge who confirmed that indeed it was Sharon Raiprakash and swayam shekhawat whose bodies were found today.What prompted the children of such important people to take such a drastic step. How did they end up in this apartment in the first place and moreover how did they get illegal drugs. Was the drug overuse an accident or was it a planned suicide, The reason is not yet confirmed but the depression history of the two deceased hints at suicide. The mystery will unfold after the reports confirm the suicide. Were the parents behind this or was it a case of tragic love story? No one knows. We will cover this story further as the investigations move forward till then keep watching KVP news. With Cameraman Reyaansh Singhania, Kriya Ghai KVP news Mumbai."

Love can give you the strength to fight every obstacle and see the light at the end of the tunnel it can give you the strength to start living againLove can drag you from bitch black to bright sunlight but only love can also give you the strength to jump over the edge into the unknown. Only love can give you the strength to embrace the darkness and the strength to revel in the pain so as to gain the ultimate peace of both mind and body. Swayum's love drove Sharon over the edge and gave her the strength to take a jump into the unknown to embrace the darkness in search of peace while sharon's love gave swayam the courage to do this once more...

This isn't a story about love at first sight it is the story of dark love at the first feel of pain. Their pain was so brutal and similar that it made them fall in love that night but what their love did was not to pull them out of the darkness, it made them strong enough to embrace a darkness which was permanent and far more peaceful than their life ever could be...

Love is not always heaven sometimes its SIN...

Some stories doesn't have happy endings...

THE END

It was so tragic harshu at the same time beautiful. it was really a very tragic ending of this beautiful SS. I will be waiting for your new SS try to write something with happy ending too.

yeah --ok---i was rooting for a happy ending harshu---

It was beautiful n heart touching

an amazingg update as always

Beautifully expressed... The pain the agony