is it love???? Swaron os part 2 updatd on pg 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Some where in mumbai.
A gril was siting in her room with her phone in her hand.
And she was reading someone's fb status 'kisi ko chaho to iss hd tk chaho. Ki vo tmhe chahne pe majbur ho jaye'
she get impressd by the statement.
But she didn't lyk statement on fb.
She check the profile of that person nd she kissd on his cover photo.
She checkd his whole profile.
Nd after that she logout her account.
And sharon said to herself 'i wish mai bhe tmhe majbur kr pati'
teen saal ho gye tmhe lucknow se banglore shift hua. Aur two year hme last tym bt kiya hua.
But still ur memories is still fresh in my heart.
I tried alottt to forget u swayam bt ye hota he nhi h.
Mai jitna tmhe bhulna chahti hun.
Tm utna mughe yad ate ho.
I can't bear ths pain anymore swayam.
What was my fault swayam????
Bs itna ki i fall for you.
I start loving u madly.
Is it my fault?
Ya ye ke i can't get over you.
I wish i so wish oneday u wl suffer the same.
I knw i'm being salfish.
Bt i so wanted to suffer u the same swayam.
So that u got to knw.
How much it hurts.
I knw i'm a salfish bitch but kya kru sharon rai prakash aise he h.

Some where in banglore
a boy was siting on his window thinking about sharon's last fb status.
'don't love someone so much. That u can't get over to that person.'

swayam's pov
what exactly she is trying to say by her status??
She is in love? With someone??
Swayam's eyes get filled with tears on a mere thought that she love some one else.
He closed his eyes nd his face get wet with his own tears.
Two years do sall ho gye when she last tym talked wth me.
I think ab tk vo ye bhe bhool gye hoge.
Ke swayam shekhawat jaisa crazy boy kabhe uske lia most important person tha.
Nd he start laughing on his ownself by saying i thnk ab agr koi usse puchaga.
Hey sharon do you know anything about swayam.
I think she will reply who is swayam????
Swayam's eyes again get filled with tears.
Wo mughe bhul gye??
Kya mughe bhul jana itna asan h???
Aur agr wo mughe bhul gye to mai use kyu ni bhul pa rha hun???

2nd part is coming.
Do hit lyk nd cment if u likd ths part.

Hey rae(u-me-aur-d3) here ur os.
M writing ths only bcoz u ask me to write.

P.s-it's just a random thought.
Jo mere mind me aya after talking wht sm1.
Yeah i knw i don't hv any right to force my thought on sm1.
Bt ths thought was troubling me so i thought to write it.
So that ths thought can get out from my mind.
Nd mera thought kya h?
Ye nxt part me clear ho jayaga sbko.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sneha tune OS likha and did not pm me
tujhe to mai AT pe dekhti hoon

coming to the os interesting plot.Even thought the part explained so much yet it did not give away the whole thing and i liked that very much.Sharon's and Swayam's pain was nicely penned down
update next part jaldi and iss baar do pm me warna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cenation123

<font color="#990066" size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sneha tune OS likha and did not pm me
tujhe to mai AT pe dekhti hoon

coming to the os interesting plot.Even thought the part explained so much yet it did not give away the whole thing and i liked that very much.Sharon's and Swayam's pain was nicely penned down
update next part jaldi and iss baar do pm me warna</font>
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tu hmash bumb kya fodti rhte h maine kisi ko pm ni kiya. 🤣
pm snd krna kitna paku kam hota h.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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junior one more os frm u...gud
Keep it up i m proud of u


nice concept i love it...earlier waiting to read next part
update soon..
I m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS.👏
The way you have portrayed the pain of their separation is really nice.
Looking forward to your next update.👍🏼
Please PM me when you update the next part.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaron9113

tu hmash bumb kya fodti rhte h maine kisi ko pm ni kiya. 🤣
pm snd krna kitna paku kam hota h.



bina pm ke agar miss ho jaata to agli baar chup chaap pm kar dena samjhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sneha awesome start... 😃 both are missing each other..loved d pov... 😳
abh jaldi se update next part of it... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start do continue soon
N pm me
Sent you buddy request do add me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
loved this part..
do continue soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intersting concept di
luv both d pov...
eargerly waiting to read nxt part
update soon.....
aur nxt time pm karna.



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