is it love???? Swaron os part 2 updatd on pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š really liked it๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š spl the facebook status of both was really touching๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arghhh!!!!
aise point koi update end karta hai kya??๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
mujhe next part padhna hai...abhi๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sneha, i am always marvelling over the fact how you write so deeply in sms language.

your writing is different , concise----and very very sharp.

loved it. continue soon.

--medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... its amazing...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

One sided love hai... ek dusre se...๐Ÿ˜›

Lol... obviously... dono ko hi nhi pata na...๐Ÿ˜†

2 years ๐Ÿ˜ฒ... itne time se door hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ

Fir toh milna banta hai re...๐Ÿค—

Specially... jab sharon ne aisa status daal diya hai to...๐Ÿฅบ

I hope swayam will try n ask her...๐Ÿ˜Š

Meri taraf se toh date pe hi le jao...๐Ÿ˜†

but abhi to ek meeting ki hi need hai...๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
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snehu!!๐Ÿค—

Another one!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Interesting plot!!
jaldi se update de..nhi to..!!!!๐Ÿ˜ˆ

P.S.Kisi se baat karke ye plot dimaag me aaya tere!!๐Ÿ˜‰
I wud luv to hv an explaination for that!!๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

hey swthrt...๐Ÿค—

lovely OS..i loved the way u started with her status update and picked up with their POVs...

engrossing start..m eager to know their past story...also want to know what destiny has planned for them...

Liked the whole mysterious set up..hidden reasons

by d way Swayam is in banaglore..give me his address na๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›

Lovely start swthrt...continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘
PS- really sorry for late reply..m kind of inactive here
Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start...
loved the way u hv described their thoughts...
waiting for next part...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is amazing i.love the idea of them.reading each others fb status.and asuming things...waiting for 2nd part plz do.pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

*flashback*
18 year before
somewhere in lucknow a five year kid was siting alone on terrece of his bulding nd thinking,
how he wish he have someone to play with him.
Because in his bulding everyone was too young to have kids like him.
Nd too much old for playing with him.
Boy said boring souls.
In summer they wear coat nd ye faltu me tie kya lgaye rhte h?
Inko to koi danta bhe ni hoga to wear tie lyk my school teacher huh.

Sometym i thought i'm joker or what???
Jise dkho whe mjhe dhke he mera gal khichne lgta h.
Aur apni batishi dikhane lgte h.
Huh jaise sb ke sb closeup ka add da rhe ho.

Ladkiyana mughe dkh ke smile krte h, mughe kiss krne ke lia mrte rhte h.
Smag ata h.
As i knw i look awesm nd super cool.
Thats why any chick can resit herself after seeing me.
Sb doda doda ate h mughe kiss nd hug krne ke lia.

Bt boys kyun mughe kiss krte rhte h??
I wonder they or gay or what??
Huh crazy pepole.

You knw what god itni girls mere pecche bhagti h??
Bt u knw i'm not intrsd in them they are so not swayam shekhawat types.
M still waiting for my girl jisee dkhte he meri dil ke dhadkan tej ho jaye.
My heartbeat start playing gitter.
Jo meri tarh cute ho.
Jisse dkhte he sbka use kiss krne ka man kre.
Bt i will not let boys kiss her.
Ni to uske chick ko dittol se dhulna pdaga.

Now what???
Why are you staring at me??
Oh common god stop staring me.
M not a kid dude.
U knw m 5 year old.


I think now i should hv a gf.
Who care for me.
Who love me.
Who let me sleep on her lap.
Nd who hug me nd kiss me too.
Just lyk my mumma hug my daddy.

Ohh shit how stupid i am??
How could i forget?
Aj mumma ke sath mughe unke frend ke ghar jana tha.
Jo mere flat ke nxt flat me shift ho rhe h.
Unke help krne.

Ufff those ladies man kuch bhe ni kar pati mere help ke bina.

Vaise mom bol rhe the she have a cute daughter.
Just lyk me.
Kya name btaya tha uska mumma ne yeah sharon.

Name to kafi stylish h.
Pta ni vo kaise hogi?
Vaise mumma ke choice bht cool h.
Tabhe to dad se shadi ke he is preety handsm.

So miss sharon get ready to meet most charming guy of lucknw swayam shekhawat.
Edited by swaron9113 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Note

it carry two more chappy.
I wl upd8 that soon depend on lyks nd comment.

Nd after reading ths u find it gud then plzzz pm in ur buddy list.
Bcoz m unable in doing.

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