Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 84

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Oh No, I am again late!
Di, what was the truth that Rosy is still holding within her?
Did she really exchanged a part of her for his life?? When? and how??
I loved the Arjun Rosy convo very much...
It was good to see them a bit of themselves as before

So many questions yaar
Please update soon
Thanks for the PM



You'll get to know all of it, pretty soon, I promishe.. 😆

Posting in a bit.. Thanks so much, as always! 😃


Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

😃Ghusse wala love k saath Ointment wala love.😳. If this was the intensity of love they had when in anger then I wonder what will it be when it will be Ishq wala love. Essshhh...❤️(Stop building castle in skies Farheen. Its a Long way to go for that🤪)

Err.. Thank u ji! I was hoping you'd catch that one.. 😉😆

Arre na ji na.. Sapne dekhne mein tax thodi na lagta hai.. Who said it's a long way to go? 😉 🤪

The quotes itself speaks for the two of them &so I will not blabber about how or wat it felt. Expressing in words will make it lose the Poignant essence of the two's feelings. I super super super loved it & for this a virtual Jaadu ki jhappi for you.🤗🤗

Shame to shame.. 🤗

"She did not have the right to do that to him." Finally, at least she gave in the thought that he does have the right to know.Sum thing is always better than nothing.

I would like to say about Ro .Sometimes when you sacrifice something special, you're not really losing it. You're just passing it on.

The dam of self control will break once Arjun comes to know about it. Now i get it what you meant by "Its just the start of sufferings". It was heart wrenching seeing Ro in a state wherein she has the person whom she has loved all her life right in front of her but she has to let him go "The greatest irony of love is letting go when you need to hold on"

Lady, u make me go into deep thoughts with these quotes, always! They always ring true.. 😳

After this, I can conclude confidently that it will be Arjun who will definitely let go off his ego & stubbornness for his Miss A &by the looks of this update I m sure even if your Lady in Red is the most strong & undefeatable for others ,she could not be the same with her Mr. A. If she has that impact on her for him to let go of his anger then he too has that impact to make her weak &vulnerable.

Exactly! 👍🏼 he has to, coz he knows his foolish witch won't relent otherwise.. 😆

@ Bold.. oh yeah.. wait and watch.. 😉

Mario: I just adore your Lady when she just makes Mario tongue tied. 😆No wonder ,She has made an impressive mark on him to just give a statement to which he accepts without further questioning .Keeping my fingers crossed about his ignorance to wats happening in his Lady in Red's life.

Lol.. 😆

ACP Arjun Rawte is back in action. 😎Finally we'll get to see ACP Arjun Rawte in action after this &not a certain Mr. A/Arjun. Although a guess but then it gave them a way to start from sumwhere.

Err.. I'd say, it will be a tadka of Mr. A to ACP Arjun.. coz he knows she won't be intimidated by his Gussa.. 🤪 So ungli tedhi kareka padi.. 😉

But yes, as far as the case is concerned, he's more than determined now, to crack it.. 😎

Oh ho!!Chotu se Jaasusi.😎😛 That reminds me wat was chotu's disguise role when doing his Jasusi for Arjun.😆

Eesh.. socha nahi tha maine..

Sam!!!Did it read it correct? 😲 Yes, u did.. remember, they don't have a past in this one.. Academy dinon ke friends hain, bass.. 😉

Indirectly many pleasantry suprises in this one.😃

Continue soon.


Thanks so much, my dear.. You never fail to make me and my ittu-sa motivation go soaring high in the skies.. 😆 😆

P.S. I had the Cheese Pav Bhaji at Cannon.. 🥳 ❤️




Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

amazing update Avantika

loved it

wonderful

waiting for next part





Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..loved it...great job..well done



Thanks so much guys.. 😃

Originally posted by: daydreamer...

brilliant...there's no other word for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am speechless...loved every word of this update...
is it just me or really ur each update gets 10 times better than the previous one?👏👏



Thanks so much.. . 😃
Aww.. that's a huge morale booster.. Thank you!

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Posted: 11 years ago
*Edited*


Phew...here I am after shoveling snow and freezing to death, a much needed update of my lady for sure.

And what an update, all Arsylicious.😛


"When I push you away, I want you to hold me tighter. When I walk away, I want you to pull me back to you. When I get mad at you, I want you to push me against the wall and kiss me. When I miss you, I want you to be there for me. When I feel you don't want me, prove to me that I'm the only one." - Anonymous

A perfect quote for not only this update but so apt for both Arjun and Rosy.

And the song is not only beautiful it also fits the situation very well. Loved both the quote and the song you used here.

And the cracks in Rosy's perfect demeanor are starting to show like they were bound to. I was wondering how long she will be able to pretend that all is well after coming face to face with Arjun.

Her feelings and thoughts are perfectly natural given the situation and her feeling for him.

I can so easily imagine her state of mind, he is so near but so afar still. Her heart longs to be with the one she loves but in her mind she knows that what she has done cannot be forgiven so easily if it can ever be.

But that is not the only thing that is holding her back she know the biggest shock is about to come, if it ever does and she is unwilling to take that last step that she know will break Arjun and shatter his world. Her fear is well justifies, I am wondering how he will get past that point, I know he will because despite what Rosy thinks Arjun is made up of sterner stuff.

It is hard to blame Rosy for what she did, I am not saying she was right but at the same time I think she had no choice. At that time in her life and the given the situation she had no other options but to choose what she did but I am sure she never dreamed that she would lose the most precious part of herself either.

She gave up the man she loved the most for her sister of the heart, she watched her father burn to death in front of her eyes, she had already lost her mother and she was about to lose the man she loves to death so I can understand why she made the deal with the devil.

Her dance sequence and Arjun joining her was the most beautiful moment of this entire update. I could picture the whole scene in my mind. For the moment they forgot everything and focused on each other only. I have no words for how I felt reading that bit behna. It was perfect.👍🏼

And then when they came down to earth anther glimpse of Mr A. and Miss A. I was smiling like a fool reading how Arjun teased and pushed her. And I think he is realizing that she had pushed him away purposely in the past hence his open challenge to her for her to do anything she wants but he is not budging. 👏

But..but the best part is Arjun is thinking first instead of reacting first. He is starting to put things together and he knows that she is hiding something much bigger still.

He knows how to deal with her the best and how to get past the walls she has built around herself. I am glad he realizes that he needs to deal with the situation with a cool head of else he will blow her cover and ruin everything.

But you also managed to surprise me, I knew Arjun would find a way to stick close to her but I never thought this is how it would happen, but its perfect. She is the dancer and choreographer and he is the photographer, no one would question his presence there. Smart thinking and perfect way to block her escape routes.

Okay I have to tell you behna, this Mario Pereira is starting to scare me. I hope they deal with him without blowing her cover or else all hell is going to break lose. But what scares me more is his obsession with Rosy and Arjun's reaction to it.

Looking forward to the next round please update soon behna.

And yeah if you can pester me I get to pester you also, so bring it on, I am waiting.

Loved, loved the update as always.❤️

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly, I loved the quote di. It beautifully and perfectly captured the whole essence of Arjun-Arohi bond.👍🏼

The way you described Rosy, her stance, her beauty is excellent. I need to admit, your writing reminds me of Jane Austen. The way you writes romance, irony of life or the way you describe any situation is just perfect. I remember reading Pride and Prejudice, I got so engrossed in the story that I started living with those characters. The same happens with me while reading Lady in Red. The story takes you onto a different world and scale. In short, character and story grows on you like anything.

Now, coming back to update, So all the happenings are taking a toll on Rosy's mind, which is very natural. Whatever preparation you do or however strong your oaths are, People whom you love are capable enough to make you face a situation, where all that will go for a toss. The same is happening with Rosy. I'm so afraid of thinking of the day, when whole truth will be in open. But then I know, they both may wish to strangle each other at times, they are also each others only support system and what may come, neither of them will let anyone else hurt the other one.

Arjun watching Rosy from behind the pillar followed by the dance sequence was magical di. But then its always magical, when you make these two dance together. And this song was like a cheery on the top. Very apt song selection.

As you said, Rosy won't be intimidated by ACP Arjun and he knows it. So he's got to start being Mr A to make her listen to him, I completely agree to it. I so loved this Mr A with a slight tadka of ACP Arjun attitude. Perfect way to handle a girl like Rosy.

"Kaash tumne yeh paanch saal pehle kaha aur kiya hota, Mr. A."
I wish but then whom can I blame. Destiny's cruel games.

Please, tell me di that Mario has not fallen for our Lady in Red. Because if yes, then I don't know what Arjun will do. Already he is trying his best to keep his calm and not demand answers from Arohi and if this happens,
all hell is going to break lose.

Please update soon di, after reading the precap, I don't think I will be able to control myself for long.

Thanks for the PM!

PS: I so loved this photographer avatar of Arjun. Will we be getting a drooling session for this new avatar? Well, I'm just asking😉
Edited by -Rajvi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey you took a little longer to update this time... but as they say intezar ka fal meetha hota hai... I was stalking every day and see i read before you pm'd... super awesome update.. its one of my fav song, loved it how you described her song., arjun's realisation that he missed something which was rightfully his was awesome... Next update k liye itna wait mat karana. Update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Joote mat marna!!

Post nahi hua toh main kya karun ...IF hates Me😆😆😆
Chalos chaddo ...
Now that they have met ...the constant friction of push an pull between them will begin...they are each other undoing...
Kuch bhi ho jaye yeh dono toh sudherne ge nahi!!
Rosy took decisions for herself and Arjun which she shoulnt have done ...but then considering her life , what she had seen and wanting to protect her self and her heart she faced the worst ...and made Arjun also suffer ...
But thn few things were destined ...agar dekha jaye ...Arjun got Roshini as a support but she was all alone
Arjun well Hotwa..is goddam Angry and this time is he isnt going away ...maybe bcoz he has lost everything now ...and he doesnt want to let go her ...for now he knws tht she is alive ..
Bring it on Seske ...Mario ki pungi bajegi ...and well Miss A ..is gonna face Arjun spl Torture😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super awesome...visualized the scene where she was dancing all alone and then he joined her...
the moment he saw her touching her anklets which were his gift was really touching...cute!

The song was just so so perfect...lovely!

and I need not tell u how much I love that quote...it was more than perfect for their equations!

Mr A's naughty side and Miss A's stubborn resistance yet her inclination to him was superbly written!

He was just awesome how he handled her and also didnt let go of their missions...he didnt do anything in impulse to blow up their covers...

So now Mario wishes to tell her how he feels for her...hmmm...ab Arjun kya karega...

cont soon!


Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Avantika

I loved the BG song... one of my fav

thanx 4 the Pm... waiting for next part

update soon

take care

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