Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 83

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Rajvi-

Res

-Unres-

Sorry for being late di, my net ditched me

No problem, my dear.. 😃

Arjun-Arohi confrontation was very well written di, it was as if two long lost friends
( scratch that, they are best friends) are bickering about sweet little nothings, though they were a bit more violent and aggressive than others. I know that the conversation was very emotional and both, Arjun-Arohi, were very angry and hurt but I don't why, I had this 😃 silly smile plastered on my face throughout the conversation. Maybe because, the more they were fighting, the more I was feeling assured, they may wish to strangle each other, they may curse each other for behaving/reacting in a certain way in the past and hurting each other unintentionally but, at the end of the day, they are the same Mr.A & Miss.A who are each others best friends and love each other beyond one can imagine.❤️
They fought, hurt each other and then made sure they were around to heal the pain.
This one line, says it all.😊

Exactly.. And i can't thank you enough for summing it all up perfectly.. that's exactly how I wanted it to come across.. hope I did justice there.. 😳


Thank you for adding a bit of cute romantic moment di...For the first time I felt happy ki aacha hua Arjun ko ek-do fatke face pe bhi lage😆


Bwahaha.. 😆😆 You're welcome.. 😉

They weren't destined to be; she wasn't meant to be his, she reasoned with herself.
Only if she knew, fate has bound them together as a single individual long time ago.

By the way, Ro reacted to Sameer's probing about sharing information with someone it seems Ro was let down by someone dear whom she trusted very much.

Finally Mr.Mario returns and want Rosy all for himself..*tch tch* too much of wishful thinking Mr. Pereira😛
I think, even the chit thing between chotu and Arjun is about Mario..Is it??

Nah.. it's about something else.. More in the next one.. 😉

He wasn't going to let history repeat itself. His sharp mind had already devised a strategy.
Finally, the ACP Arjun Rawte is back in action and this time around, I am sure he is not going to let Ro just walk away from him without telling him the whole truth.

Oh.. see if this makes sense to u.. Ro won't be intimidated by ACP Arjun and he knows it.. So now, he's got to start being Mr.A to make her bend to his wishes.. Ungli tedhi, u see.. But of course.. it won't be the same... maybe a tadka of ACP Arjun to Mr.A? What say? 😉

Needless to say, awesome update di...it was perfect to T! I loved all the quotes, very aptly used.👍🏼

Continue soon...Thanks for the PM!



Thank you soo much.. Really appreciate all of it.. ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

That was amazing B2...

Rosy-Arjun convo...the direct and indirect taunts, sarcasm, yet the concern for each other
their unsaid love were all beautifully portrayed...

Loved it!'

Thank you ji.. 😳

So Mario wants her undivided focus all on himself...hmm wondering what happens when he comes face to face with Arjun...
Arjun is no better too...he had noticed the muse part..and he wants replies from her
How long will she turn away from him and his qns...kabhi na kabhi toh saamna karna hi padega..

Yesh! KNK kyun, abhi right now karna padega.. but with a twist.. 😉

and is the training kids part true? or does she had any other hidden agenda to that...

it is true..

btw, the quotes in between were good and perfectly fitting to the T!

cont soon

Thanks so much.. Yup, I loved them too.. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

unres
di ek baar me maar dalo re 😭

huh?! 🤔 Ji nahi.. hum sweet poison hai.. dheere dheere hi maarenge.. 😎

Saturday episode already on d way to kill us 😉

thoda baksh do pls..
arro always 👏

I m touched or said floored by their..
love care understanding..
hurt yet ready to healed each other
ek song 😳

Kaise btae kyu tujko chahe yaara bta na pae..
tu jaane na...
awesome
lovely
very well written di
excellent ..
hats off..

Thanks payalia.. Yup, I love that song too.. 😃

ps. amrita is stable now..
on d state of getting better
hopefully soonish we able to talk to her 😛

Oh yes.. I read about it. Really happy for her.. 😃

waiting for next..

coming up right away!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya09

superb update

loved the angry conversion between Mr & Miss A.
excellent writing
beautiful.
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏



Thank you so much.. 😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM

nice part .👏.. Arjun and arohi emotional and lovely 😳.. continue soon plz pm me 👍🏼



Thanks!

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

awesome update
Arjun-Ro's heated argument was nice
her hard efforts to keep her guilt n concern for him
under wraps failed at that instance
loved the part which mentioned they fought n hurt each other but
also made sure they were also there to heal them
and when Ro said "marr jao...aur mujhe bhi maar do..."
was heart breaking
her mind state reflecting her guilt was beautifully described
thanks for pm
cont soon



Thank you.. 😃😃
Glad u could relate to it..




Thanks! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

super looks like the chinks are easing out



Yup! Sort of.. 😃

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome update...

loved it ...

arjun - ro ... love them...

arjun - sha , bechari ayesha... sam saved her...

arjun going on his way to find the truth...

update soon and thanks for the PM , sorry like button not working...



Thank you.. Yes, he's determined this time around.. 😎

Originally posted by: Nandinisha

Awesome.
Arjun- Ro talk beautiful.
Cont soon.



Thanks.. 😃

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome update thanks for the pm



Thank you.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

They fought, hurt each
other and then made sure they were around to heal the pain.
This show much they care for eachother.No matter how much they fight and hurt eachother, deep in their heart, they respect eachother and love eachother.They were and will always remain Best friends..
The moment when they were so close to eachother, it had so much effect on both of them.And it was so beautifully described..

They weren't
destined to be; she wasn't meant to be his, she reasoned with herself.

Only if she knew how wrong she had been thinking all the while.If she had known that it wasn't Roshni but her that Arjun had been in Love with..But If Only!! Though they fight with eachother, get angry and go away from eachother, by one or next ways fate gets them connected.It only shows that they are meant for eachother. But now when will they understand it?When will things go right?And when will they become together?It still seems a long way to go through..

He wasn't going to let history repeat itself. His sharp mind had
already devised a strategy.

He had already started to put things together.He had now made a firm decision to know the secret of Ro and to avenge the family's death.ACP Arjun was back in action and nobody can stop him now.
I wonder what is the secret that Ro has hidden till date that had brought so many changes in their lives..

Great update.
Brilliantly and beautifully written.
Those quotes in the middle were just perfect.
Loved the entire update..
Waiting for more..
Continue Soon.



Thank you so much.. 😃
Yes, it's a long way to go.. But maybe we aren't too far away from the moment of truth, either.. 😉
More coming up.. 😃


Originally posted by: miss_precious

The gussa wala love was tremendous...

Every bit of it was breath takingly phenomenol...

I read it over and over again... From now onwards the updates will be fantastic because ur arjunji is springing back to action to find out what happened,..

What did arohi exchange of hers for his life... Is it what I am thinking?!

Please update soon x



Thanks.. 😃😳 Oh yes.. Arjun Ji is on a mission.. 😎 Unstoppable, irresistible and.. Anyway.. 😉

Err.. you'll have to wait for 2 updates to know more on that one..


More right away.. 😃

Originally posted by: IshaniSinghh

Awesome... love their anger, frustration, pain, love all in that conversation.. Arjun se jyada toh i am desperate to knw the secret ro is hiding... How to wait till Sunday after reading the precap?????



Thanks! lol.. Sorry, Sunday ka Friday ho gaya.. 😆
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm... part..
Supperbbb... as always...
loved it
Loved their conversation..
Brillant work...
Every single thing was descride sooo... beautifully...
Amazing...
Super Awwssmm... precap
cont sooon plzzz cant wait
thanks for PM



Thank you so much.. 😃


Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

ohh thanks...Mario is back finally...but was he really so easily convinced about Ro's words??I am
doubtfull.but somewhere happy with his reaction...will wait to know more about it..

loved the conversation between the two lost love birds...they deserve these moments but then too stubborn to enjoy them..they are making these beautiful moments their worst nightmares...emotional fools...but thats how it is...😛

continue soon...thanks for the pm...



Yeah.. coz like I mentioned, he's busy with something else at the moment.. more on it later.. 😉

Love birds?! 🤔 Not the stereotypical ones, I'd say.. 😛

Lol.. yeah.. they are fools.. but my sweethearts.. 😉

Thanks so much.. 😃


Originally posted by: laila1994

Fab update.

Loved it
cont soon



Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update as always
loved it
Loved arjun-rosy's convo and their concern for each other
waiting for the next part
cont soon



Originally posted by: Swara85

Superb part..
loved the conversation..
very well written..cont soon
and thanks for pm.



Thanks! 😃 Glad u like it..



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Hey Di!
I know tum mujhe ab chappal leke marogi..
but very sorry me have to RES



Nah.. I louuve chappals.. unhe kyun waste karoon? Tamatar chalenge?! 😎 😉

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Di U r so evil! 😔
you had my heart aching!
their not so subtle expression really had me overwhelmed!

His inquisition, her nursing his wounds...
OMG! They have their own magic!

Though they have vices and differences, they knowingly, unknowingly rely on each other for support and comfort.

Didiya Ur too good yaar!!

Oouii!! My Mr. Pereira iz back on the scene!
hurray!!
I missed hotwa so much!!

Lol.. yeah.. didn't realise it, but I missed him too.. 🤪 And yeah.. they do.. 😳

I didn't undrstnd a thing about the case!
khair koi nayi! Aap ho na samjhane vaste! 😉

Check out Ch 21 on Pg. 12.. I'm sure that'd help.. 😉

Arre..

The Precap is heart-touching di!!
Lovd it!

Meri pyari didi! Meri bholi didi!! Mujhe pm bhejogi na sweetheart!!

Plz...😊

Makkhan nahi lagarhi hu... I'm offering u fat free yoghurt!! 😃😳

me waiting!

Fat free yoghurt, eh? Pls make sure it's either vanilla or strawberry.. 😉😆

P.S unresing all my res' in an hour 😊

The quotes in red were really inspiring!!

P.S it feels really insignificant after such a long tym! But phir bhi i'd like to say again...

ThankS for giving us The Lady in Red ❤️...



Thanks so much, dear..
Oh.. I should be the one thanking u guys for sticking around, considering my madness.. 😆😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

Evry word n evry line...just perfect
evry sigh hits deep
evry look have its pain
Every quote took its position well
evry emotion straight to d heart
as every chapter...this one too made its presence...
Mario back in action
Arjun n Ro back in action
looking forwrd for d nxt part
as precap made the wait very troublesome
come soon



I heard about the interview and you mentioning Lady as your favorite FF..
Means a lot.. Thanks so much, Helna.. 🤗

Glad u liked the update.. Sigh.. this only makes me more nervous now.. U always manage to do it.. 🤔
Update coming up soon..
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luci333

Veri nyc update n thanx 4 pm





Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow...awesome upt
cont soon



Thanks guys.. 😃

Originally posted by: yas23

Supreb update
Loved Arjun Rosy conversation..the anger,pain, their concern for each other,and the unspoken love for the other was beautifully described
mario is back
arjun is back in action
eagerly looking forward to read the next part
thanks for the pm
continue soon



Thank you so much.. Glad u could relate to it.. 😃


Originally posted by: samiya.059

Oh...two updates
couldnt read them earlier...have been extremely busy with exams
sorry for not commenting on the previous one...!!!
This one was intense !!!
Finally the ice is breaking btw Mr n Miss A..!!!
Loved how she tend to his wounds
in a sense it portrayed how would she tend to his heart in near future n vice versa...they are not lovers...they are soul mates...the more she wants to ignore him n move apart from him the more she gets closer...!!
Now arjun has planned something...he would strike when the iron is heart !!!
Now that lion is on hunt...!!!
My mind is thinking too much..guessing too much about what might be the reason behind rosy's acts ...her marriage to yash was deal...sikander is not only responsible of ro's family but he is also responsible or connected to arjun's real parents death..lol am thinking too much
waiting eagerly for next update



Thank you.. 😃
No worries..
@ Bold: yes.. and vice versa.. 😃
nah.. he isn't related to arjun's family.. but yeah, kuch toh choot raha hai, for sure.. 😉
More coming up!


Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow it was awesome update dear

i loved their convo
precap was superb
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😊😊



Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: Devangana

Gosh! Had started reading the story when it started but then missed it in between. Read last five chapters in one go. Awesome, mindblowing, thrilling... Please continue soon.



Oh! Then I'm glad you've returned to it.. 😊 Thanks..



Thank you.. 😃

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