Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwssmmm... part
loved it sooo... much
Brillantly written...
flashback was supperbbb...
truely Amazing...
supper awwssmmm.. precap
cont sooon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update👏
the fb was very well written
the emotions pen downed in every line was beautifully done
felt as if present there and witnessing Arjun and Ro's pain
Karan-Ro convo was nice and heart touching
and the best part that Arjun heard their convo and realized
she was still keeping secrets from him
and now he's trying to put the missing pieces into its place
precap is super exciting
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update
Roshni knew about Rosy n Ayesha's existence 😲
BUt she didn't tell Arjun.
N then they say girls r not good at keeping secrets 😆
Karan-rosy convo was very well written
Arjun's condition😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
so, Ro was there at hospital with him
Arjun came to know that she is hiding something important
Loved arjun's POV at the end
precap's interesting
eagerly waiting for the next part
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant.. love the way you portray your story perfect amount of flashback, present, emotions, silent convos.. everything just perfect.. Finally ACP on his hunt for truth... exciting Precap, waiting for next part... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
excellent
beautiful writing
btw i loved the last line...
"You foolish, manipulative witch!" 😲 😲 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
a fantastic update...ro's husband met with an accident?? or was it a murder too??
karan now know something about his partner,but lots still left for him as well as for everyone else...

continue soon...thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res di!
i alsho abh a phlu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey i m back
it was awsm
full of emotion
lagta bhagwan ne tujhe mein emotions kut kut kar bhara hai...hehehe 😆
btw update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

To be honest with you, I wouldn't say that I wasn't shocked after the revelations that Roshni was aware of Rosy's survival on the day her family was brutally murdered but then sum where at the back of my head I had this one thing that Roshni knew it.I remember in one of the update long back ,Arjun ,in his subconscious mind was conversing with Roshni telling her that she knows everything but would not say anything since she is binded by their Gulabwala promise.This Gulabwala promise is definitely a dangerous one Avantika. It has hidden many truth beneath which shakes the people related to the promise to the core. I wonder at one time she wanted him to be beside him to send ppl who has destroyed their house &then at the other end she does not want him to face the truth.😔😕
I know you are partial more towards Ro if it comes to debating Who among Ro &Arjun has been suffered the most. But then let him just face it now yaar. Har roz marne se accha hai finish it at once. At least both will be out of the burden, guilt they are living with.
I m not sure if my intuition on this one is correct or not but then it seems that during her visit to the hospital, Roshni did understood Ro's feelings for Arjun. This is what I guess she wanted to convey to Arjun when she had breathed her last hoping that her trailing words had reached him but alas it didn't happen.😭
I would like to ask you this Avantika.Have Arjun in real told this to Roshni that the girl whom he has loved all his life is none but Ro.

Though ignorant about the fact himself, Arjun was the only link to her family's brutal end.Now this is sumthing to brainstorm😉

The hospital scene in the flashback &the present scene was heart wrenching.

Finally Karan managed to make her speak her heart out. I loved the entire conversation between the two. Felt like it was playing right in front of my eyes. Her eyes being welled up seeing him in pain, the pride she felt hearing Arjun's praise, hurt she has given him, her betrayal &many more. You nailed the conversation with the perfect blend of emotions &the final stoke being Arjun actually heard the conversation👍🏼 & now is fully convinced with the fact that there is some major damage done to her which is irreparable. I m super exited to know how is he gonna actually deal with the stubbornness of her's

The last line left a chuckling sound from my mouth amidst the unshed tears that welled up my eyes "You foolish, manipulative witch!"😆😆

P.S.:I m still wondering & doubt Mario's ignorance to wats happening in his LADY IN RED 's life.usse sleepings pills khilao for the time being yaar warna uske naam ki talwar hamesha latakti rahegi. On a serious note, I wonder &fear that he isn't planning anything evil against Ro when she is moaning &struggling over her past. Seems that this is that silence which is often heard before the BIG storm's arrival.
Keeping my fingers crossed that he doesn't attach her when she is in such a vulnerable state.

P.P.S.:Bahot brainstorming kar liya is update mein that i had to go to thread 1to connect the dots. Now I need a break. Ab kuch dino tak no brain storming homework Avantika plz.**puppy eyes**

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