Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 75

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG... It really feels so unconnected when I opened my PM after so long...😭
And so much has happened in the story!!!!
I am sorry for being late di... but what to do, hell these exams!!😡

I don't believe I have missed this much!!!😲

Arjun going back to street fighting, Rosy going to stop him, their angsty conversation (Thanks for not giving a silent one there!😃), Their hurt, pain, helplessness, his loosing the fight and being wounded, Rosy's husband being dead?? (It really gave me a shock!😲), karan being there for help, Sameer wanting answeres... OMG so much has happened in 3 updates!

Read all the three updates in a go now, And couldn't help but love them as usual di
I want to say this di, that you are absolutely phenomenal in expressing feelings
You are really exceptional in writing, you write everything so beautifully, that I just don't have words enough to say what I feel when I read your stories...

And I loved it when Arjun said, 'You foolish, manipulative witch'
Now I just wish to sort their diffferences out soon... I badly want to see them together

Also looking foward to Sammer-Rosy convo!

Thanks for the PM di

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
flashback scene was really well written...so rosy came to meet arjun while he was at the hospital and roshni new
rosy and karan convo was nice..and arjun heard some part of their convo and realized that she is hiding something from him
wonder how rosy's husband died
looking forward for next part
thanks for the pm...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written dea
I can't believe that roshni knew rosy was alive...n she didn't even told arjun about it...am feeling bad for arjun...if he comes to know that even mishti concealed facts from him...!!!
Now one thing has become clear that whatever the truth is rosy and her father knew abt it...!!!
rosy karan part was best part if the update...karan is such a nice person...a true partner..!!
So Arjun heard their convo..he knows now that ro has done everything to keep him save...!!
coming on yash...am not been able to make...if he was a gud person or bad...but I think he wasn't a gud fellow...n somehow he tried to give out rosy's secret to someone...maybe..!!!
waiting eagerly for next update
update soon
p.s having exams...sorry for late comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avantika I cant explain u how eagerly I wait for the updates of this story. .
But just to share with you..
You know my heart everytime restrains my fingers to click the link..
Everytime it happens..
And I know why it happens. ..
I talk a lot generally. ..
But this story n its depth just snatch my words...
This story actually places me on a different platform of anxiety n insecurity...
Everytime I fall short of words..
It evokes such pain I dont think it is comparable...
Its not that I dont relish this pain, but it is just that my eyes become blank...
You have taken this story to ultimate level of sensitivity. .
And by nature I am too sensitive type...
So when there is resonance, intensity is too high..
This intensity makes me numb..
I am supposed to comment here on the chapter I have just read...
But till now I am doing all bakwas to showcase my character...
Actually I am telling you why I wont comment line wise, though I have absolutely loved each word Avantika. ..
Some more revelation...I have started slanting towards Ms. A.
The flashback has stopped me for long...then again I have started reading. .
I have thoroughly loved that Arjun has heard their convo...
Avantika plz dont keep Arjun in dark anymore. .
Plzzz..
Waiting for next chapter. .
Thanks for the pm dear..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey everyone.. 🤗 The writing spree is back.. 😛 Errm.. not really.. I have a fully packed week lined up and hence wanted to get these updates out of the way. 🤔
I apologise for not being able to reply to your comments, questions and feedback.. Sorry ladies..
But so you know, I've read all of them and do cherish each one.. Thank you soo much, as always.. 🤗 I can never express my gratitude in the right words, guys.. It really means a lot.. 😃

Author's note:

* I get it that you guys want to see them together.. Trust me, I'm dying to do it as well.. But kya karein?! Anyhow. B3, offense kaaheka?! I'm soo proud that you feel she is a grey character.. 🤪 Coz she is! 😆

** Arjun isn't going to soften overnight, neither will he forgive her easily. But best friends aise hi toh hote hain, right?. You'd rather smack and kick them, than sulk over it, hai na?! But these two are unique and the galti is quite big.. Toh thoda drama, tears and gussa before the make up, toh banta hai na?! 😉

*** V. Imp. I'm planning to update atleast 6 Chapters in the month of Dec. Toh ladies, phataphat commentwa and Unres-wa, pleej! Else, it'll get difficult for u to catch up.. Abhi se bata rahi hoon..

**** To silent readers: I think I should do a PM update soonish.. Yeah, evil me.. But kya karein? 🤔

Phew.. Chaddo.. Will spare you more ranting now..

Err.. One more.. - Clues strewn in here.. Be on the lookout.. Phir matt kehna, warn nahi kiya.. 😎


Chapter 36


"The truth will set you free, but first it will piss you off." - Gloria Steinem


Sameer took the mug of coffee from Ayesha and kept looking at her while she ordered breakfast for everyone over the phone. He had stayed with her in the lawn all night, being a silent support.

Words weren't needed, he figured. Arohi's sudden revealation, Arjun's anger and his rash actions had all taken a toll on the brave lady cop. But just when Sameer was expecting her to crumble, she had steeled herself surprising him. Maybe that in itself was an indication that things were slowly getting back on track.

Light footsteps behind them alerted them and they turned around to find Rosy approaching them nervously.

Sameer picked up his coffee and walked out of the kitchen leaving the sisters alone, not before giving them a sharp look which meant they better not cook up any more lies.

The two women looked at each other for a brief moment and none knew who made the first move. They hugged, attempting to comfort each other. Ayesha patted her hair softly when Rosy refused to let go of her.

Rosy sniffed and wiped traces of moisture from her face before reaching out for a bottle of water. She gulped a few sips and turned to her, "I should leave."

Not knowing how to justify thoughts running through her mind all night, Ayesha's lips puckered and she shook her head, "Nahi Ro. It's about time you face all of it."

Rosy looked at her with disbelief and stood before her with glazing eyes, "Are you out of your mind? Kya bol rahi ho?"

She paused when Ayesha refused to react and ran fingers through her hair, "You're an ETF officer and I can understand you wanting to be loyal to your team, but Ayesha we cannot reveal everything, just yet."


"Exactly. We don't even know if we're on the right track, Ro."

She sighed when Rosy's stern features softened, "I'm not saying we abandon our mission. No. But don't you think a parallel investigation will lead us closer to our target? Ho sakta hai, jo tu aur main nahi kar paa rahein hai, woh hum sab saath milkar kar lein.."

Rosy stared at her and pondered over her words and realised the implications of joining hands with the ETF.

She looked up, half-convinced, "Fine. Even if we do it, do you realise what would happen next?" Ayesha saw her eyes dart off towards Arjun's door and sensed the reason for her hesitance.

She held her sister's hand in hers gently, "Jaanti hoon. He will not rest until he gets to the root of it."

Ayesha paused and made her sit on the kitchen stool, "Lekin isme problem kya hai, Ro? He has the right to know the truth as much as we do. Aur waise bhi, we've made enough decisions for him. It's about time we let him take charge of things."

Rosy pursed her lips weighing options and rubbed her temples, "I know all that, Ayesha. But I'm not quite sure about anything after last night."

The women grimaced recollecting his anger and reckless actions.

"Gusse mein uska dimaag kaam karna band ho jaata hai. Dekha na tumne?", Rosy voiced out.

She stood up and looked at Ayesha, "I've just started to gain Pereira's trust. Mujhe kuch waqt chahiye to get into his inner circles and convince him of my loyalty to him. He's our only link to Sikandar's existence, for now. Kya tumhe lagta hai, Arjun.." the remaining words trailed away when Ayesha shook her head.

Ayesha began straining milk into a glass and handed it to her, "Jaa.. Jakhmi sher ke paas sirf tu hi jaa sakti hai.." Rosy frowned and looked towards his room, "Nahi. Not now. He needs rest, Ayesha. Mujhe dekh lega toh kahin phir se.."

Rosy placed the glass back on the kitchen counter and looked around for something. Ayesha saw her pick up the jar of dry fruits and watched on as she picked out almonds from it. She stood back with folded arms while Rosy quickly grated the almonds and added it to the milk, "Ab theek hai.. Yaad hai na, he hates haldiwala milk.."

Ayesha smiled to herself and quickly sent up a prayer asking for a wish to mend their soured relationship with Arjun.

An hour later, Rosy had made up her mind. She stood in a corner of the large living room, staring at the expanse of the blue sea. The mere thought of letting out a part of the truth made her feel lighter.

However, she also realised that she had to tread very carefully. To her misfortune, she found herself weighing her options once again. She was going to withhold a very crucial piece of information from all of them, even from Ayesha. The thought of it lurched at her heart but she was helpless and tied down by her own manipulations. She didn't have a choice.

Rosy did not even want to imagine the reactions all around, if and when it would be revealed to everyone, especially him. He would then fire a volley of questions at her and demand answers until she either broke down or gave in.. And she wasn't prepared for either of it, yet..

***

Arjun stood under the warm shower, clutching the shower stall for support. The hot water flowing down his taut muscles was soothing both physically and mentally, yet he was far from peace.

His reckless outburst had definitely alleviated his anger and pain to some extent and now that they were done with, all possible scenarios and contemplations were clouding his mind.

Her betrayal and lies hurt him even now, partly because he felt let down the one by he had placed his faith in. The fact that she hid her existence from him was difficult for him to overlook and he knew he would never forgive her entirely for having done it. Those lonely nights when he had gazed at the skies for one glimpse of her and the guilt he had lived with weren't something he could forget and move past.

Yet for some reason, the pain in her eyes and voice was hard to dismiss as well.. He knew her for long to know that she was a reckless soul and often jumped into things without dwelling upon them.

But her shattered face when he was hurt and the conversation he had overheard told him a different story. A part of him knew that no matter how bad and ugly their fights had been, it would have pained her to betray him.

He wouldn't doubt her friendship and affection for him ever, even when past memories lurched at him making warning bells ring in his head.

The thought gave rise to another and Arjun felt as though something really big had transpired in the past and he couldn't help but assume that a part of it revolved around him..

He dried himself with a towel and stepped out putting on a black pair of tracks and a loose fitting tee. His wounds needed dressing again but he was too exhausted to do it himself, for now. Besides, there were other priorities that demanded his attention at the moment.

He sank into the mattress again and stretched his stiff arms. Just then a deep voice fell on his ears and he found Sameer Rathore glaring at him, "Do you feel better now?", he asked sternly masking concern.

Arjun nodded and was surprised when Sameer held out a glass of milk for him. He took it ignoring a pair of eyes peeping through the open door and looked at it suspiciously.

Rathore shook his head at their silly behaviour and called out to Chottu, who walked into the room, carrying a few chairs and set them in the room.

"You don't have my permission to leave the room, Rawte. Samajh gaye, ya main apne tareeke se samjhaun?", he spoke sternly not leaving room for argument.

His rash behaviour had most naturally shocked and affected him as well. Sameer couldn't digest the fact that his best officer, known for keeping his cool in the most nerve wracking situations had acted in a reckless manner, injuring himself in the process.

Arjun hadn't missed the disappointment etched on his team members' faces. But for some reason, he couldn't get himself to regret his rash actions.

***

Ayesha mouthed a quick thanks to Sameer and slipped into her chair next to him. Rosy stepped in last and made way towards the recliner.

Arjun's head shot up on feeling her presence in the room. He followed her every movement as she tucked a few strands of hair behind her ear and tiptoed towards the centre of the room. He felt her stop before him for a moment and waited to watch what she would do next.

She lifted her head and looked up at him. The sight of his bruised forehead made her wince inwardly. Their eyes locked with each other's conveying their heartfelt hurt.

Rosy, however composed herself in time and stepped away from him, before she said or did something unwanted.


Just then Karan knocked on the ajar door and called out to her, "Main bahar car mein wait kar raha hoon, Partner." She nodded and mouthed a thanks'.

Arjun recollected seeing him on the night before and the stressful smile on Rosy's lips angered him further. Was it anger or a tinge of jealousy, he didn't quite know but he definitely wanted to know who the man was and his relation with his Miss A.

He glanced at him and pinched his mouth turning to her, "Inki taareef?"

Rosy's eyes widened but before she could speak, Karan butted in, "Woh kya hai na, tareef toh sab bohot karte hain. Lekin filhaal, itna jaan lijiye, ki main Rosy ka partner hoon."

Arjun tilted his head and raised his brows, "Partner?", he enquired in a dangerously husky voice.

Karan almost suppressed his chuckle and winked at Rosy, "Haan.. Partner, you know? Anyway, mujhe kaam hai, you guys carry on."

He rushed out of the room before Arjun could throw any more questions at him, much to Ayesha and the team's amusement.

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Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Edited*

😎 Yeah, yeah, I know I am late, but behna I had to read this again before I can make a proper comment.

And what a start to the update, all I could say was Awe...and sigh dreamily when I read how Sameer stayed by Ayesha the whole night to support her, (Not that she needed it, but still..) yes he is not too happy with her and he is the chief of ETF, but still he put all that aside to comfort her, that was sweet.

Finally Rosy and Ayesha scene, I was wondering when this was coming and you didn't disappoint me, no matter how hurt they are or how angry Rosy may be in the end their relationship needed no words, just a hug and things fell into place for them again, loved the moment.

Ayesha's worry over the case and her sister is justified, but it seems Rosy knows more and is more involved than even Ayesha is aware and hence she is refusing to back down or let the ETF in on her investigation.

Rosy knows her Mr. A too well it seems. She knows exactly what will happen if she reveals the whole truth to him so for the moment she is playing her cards close to her heart, yet she can't help but worry for his well being either. Loved the moment when she adds the almonds to his milk, like I said she knows him too well, but it seems she is also not ready to face her Jhakhmi sher on her own either.😛

Emmm...behna, Arjunji in shower...no words, that was way to easy to picture.😳❤️


He may be tough from inside, but her what he thinks is her betrayal has broken him from the inside, if only he knew what she had to give up for his survival, and I am going to hate to see his reaction to this, but I am hoping he really thinks before he acts if and when he finds out.

I hope he remembers the shattered face and the conversation he overheard now at that moment and things will fall into place for him, but yeah I know long way to go yet, Rosy is too tough to give in so easily,

Do I detect a slight jealousy in Arjun at Karan and Rosy's partnership...duh...yeah I expected that and it seems Karan sensed it too so he couldn't help but had fuel to the fire.😆


Okay...wow, I wasn't expecting Rosy's latest revelations. So she had found out about her father and his undercover identity but kept it from Arjun. She was also aware that Arjun had been working for her father secretly, but why do I get the feeling that she may have slipped somewhere accidentally.

I hope that what happened wasn't due to the fact that she may have shared information with someone unintentionally.

I have to tell you every glimpse of their feelings for each other gives me goosebumps, like the way he caught her at just the right moment, even angry and hurt he doesn't fail to keep her from falling and being there to support her when she needed it.

So Rosy has set down her conditions but Arjun is not so willing to go with it and is ready to challenge her. Looking forward to seeing who wins round one.

Hats off to Sameer Rathore once again for sensing what Arjuna and Rosy needed.👏

As always I loved the update and looking forward to the next phase behna. I am ready so jaldi, jaldi update please.


Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor arohi and poor arjun too
destiny plays a lot of games sometimes

sameer turned out to be solid rock of a man of dignity and example of dosti

ps stalking sometimes pays dividends
Edited by AnjuRish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi avani di🤗...
first of all a big warm hug to u 🤗...i wished for the update today 😉😉 and here u gave me 😛...coincidence...
arre baap re yeh acp itna gussa karta hai 😆...tell him di BP high ho jayega😆...
and Ro tough nut to crack 😉...👏👏👏...arjun has to do lots of efforts to get the truth out of her😉😉...
and...karan cracked me so hard di🤣...partner🤣...and arjun's reaction was priceless😆...
ro rememeber his every small habit and needs😃...almond milk😃...haldiwala wala milk nahi pasand😆😆😆...acp is no different...😆...

and Sam is as usual gentleman😃...but again his glares were no less to ladies😆😆...
but the revealation was very shocking that Rosy was also working with her baba in mission ...now dots are getting conncted...but sherlock homes thode hi hu😆...
and when she was narrating the incident i know how much strength she had ...😭...
and arjun's hurt was also justified when he knew that he was kept in dark...
and here is the last straw😭...mujhe bhi nahi bata sakti thi ??😭...
and What Rosy did that time was ...right according to situation...but Alas!!...but again what happened that day so Rosy is hiding form everyone!!???...
it would be definitely the most shocking truth ...😭...
did something wrong happen to Rosy ???...
and how Yash was killed ??...
but purani aadat hai jawaab diye bina muhh modke jane ki...
the glaring session when others were in room...scared me too "angry avataar "...but i loved it !!!...😉...

hope their distance will reduce soon ???...
don't you think its time to get pareira back😉...i mean isn't he planning something ...looks impossible😆😆😆...uski khischadi zarur pakk rahi hogi😉...ya phir Rosy ke magic ka asar utaar raha hai😆...

update soon di...already waiting for new part😉😉...
love u di🤗
Edited by life93 - 11 years ago

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