Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Kareena1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Superb update
Hope they will meet in Goa.

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

UnResed my comment on Page 13😃

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Niki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Thanks for the PM di,
Fantastic update!!!!
So many things revealed and yet so many mysteries!!
So baba was Arjun's chief! And finally they are heading to GOA,
I wonder what will happen when Mr. A finds his Miss. A in GOA, will he murder Ayesha first or Arohi for hiding this from him? 😉
I am eagerly waiting for you to reveal the secrets about the case now! Please update soon 😊

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome update
loving it the story
missed rosy a lot
so arjuns baba and the chief are the same
aisha and arjun convo was great and he called her sha
so arjun and the etf are heading to goa..wonder what will happen then
waiting for more secrets to be reveal
continue soon

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nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

awesome update...👏

was expecting some dhamaka , arjun remembering his talk with baba and ro...

brilliant... connected all dots and will be heading to goa...

want to know his reaction when he finds his miss a there... 😉

baba believed arjun that he'll take care of their" trouble magnet".. then her marraige wid someone else, kahi kuch choot raha hai...

only rathod can save sha from arjun when he knows about ro...

update soon

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sierapomeroy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

I have so many questions... I just can't wait to read more! Thank you so much for the update! I'm looking forward to reading about how Arjun connects he dots. :)

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Hey ...

I was honestly stunned to know that Arjun's chief is none other than his Baba ... 😲

It came as a total shock for me ...

You've no clue how much I admire Arjun and secretly envy him and his brains ... Like Seriously he is just blessed with a sharp mind and it doesn't take time for him to connect the dots ... 😳

Oh. Em. Geee !! Are they actually heading to Goa ???

Please tell me yes !!

Thanks for the pm :)

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littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

kitni sharam ki baat hai mein kabhi first nahi aa sakti...arghhh😡...any ways back to the update...it was long enough to be read twice...😆.

so many surprises some for good and some could have a really exciting future😃

i am having a gut feeling is arjun knowing something more... his calling aisha sha was nice ... but nice till when!!!!... arjun is so near to connecting dots...

and from where did the dead bodies for aisha and ro arrived... seems like you have lots of twist and dhamakas ready for us... seems like the day of disaster have something hidden as well...i am eager to know the exact sequence of events that happened...

so goa mein fireworks, blasts etc eveything is going to happen... arjun- Ro- Mario...uff kya triangle hai... waiting for confrontation
arjun's brain is working overtime at high speed... and the hint of ever caring sameer ... haye how do i resist these two hunks😳😉
God help Ro and Sha😆

Excellent one

thanx for pm... love

Edited by littlebrat - 12 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-
Finally me first !!!

B1 😛...

Thand pad gayi kaleje wich ...Ab no need to stalk ...bas ek bar first aana tha😆😆😆

Baba and Chief are the same..i always thgt the chief to be sikky...kya twist hota na woh..

Sikky as chief eliminating all his rivals 😉😆

Well baba aka Chief ..warnin Arjun to back off i am sure he knew something more ...or maybe Sik and him go back a long way ...or thy knwo each other and have a common factor amongst them...

The whole invetigation was brilliantly written and bang on i loved it so much ..getting out those 3 cases ...understanding the dates . The final confirmation that baba was the chief by Rathore ..

All 3 interlinked together ...and ofcourse Arjun looking in all clues and understanding and finally concluding ...GOA

GOA main fireworks honge...On damn i was so eagerly awaing for it ...esp when hotwa is gonna see Ro with Super mario..

Damn Ayesha ki jaan le lega woh,and then Sam babu needs to come to rescue...

Waiting for the Pink ones to open up ..(Ducks maine nahi kaha)

But yes...so much revealed and yet so much left ...

P.S I missed Rosy in it ...

P.P.S - I loved teh transistion from Ayesha to Sha

KBC

1. Arjun - Ro fight on what reason

2. Ro ka dulha ..i always wonder tht She wouldnt marry just anyone..whomso ever she would have married would have mattered

3. how did Rosh know abt Ro-Arjun Amar prem kahani

4. When The house was burnt down ..dead bodies kahan se aayi ...Sha and Ro ki..coz i am sure Arjun would have checked tht

5. I still dont know what rosy knows

Warm Regards & Luv

Samba

jaldi se next update ab

Lol.. Agli baar repeat kiya toh jung chidh jayegi yahan.. 🤪

Ah ah.. Hold on to that thought Sambha.. 😉

Yeah yeah.. Goa! But I need a couple of updates before they land there..

Esp. since you've been missing Super-Mario and me too.. 😳😆

Oh yeah.. jaan toh lega.. But Ayesha ki ya Ro ki? 😉

Tch tch.. The pink ones ain't opening up in this one darling.. 😉😆

Hey Devi Maiya.. Your KBC are waaay tougher than the original one..

And this time around, I'm not allowed to answer any.. 😕

But hang in there.. You know they'll all be answered eventually.. 😉

Thanks so much Behna.. More coming your way.. 🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll
Sia...good luck nect time.😈 I gave away that one.😆
Sorry behna, for unreserving so late, usually I can't wait to tell you how I felt and this time to I wanted to get to it right away but I needed to read this update again again, so I wouldn't miss some clues.

This was intense and fast paced but much needed update. Some secrets needed to be revealed and as I predicted it wouldn't take Arjun long to connect the dot, considering how his mind works and that is exactly what he did.

I knew there was a reason why he listened in on that conversation and the flash back of tha conversation made me realize that something dhamakedaar is coming soon.

So finally Arjun knows that his baba was his chief also, now it won't be long before he starts to connect other dots also.

I know Rosy married someone else but I felt that his Baba knew exactly who Rosy wanted to be with and who Arjun wanted to be with. By any chance was he aware of Arjun and Rosy's feelings for each other and that he had full confidence in Arjun taking care of Rosy.

But something big must have happened for him to order Arjun to back off and dey Rosy the field job.

What role did Rosy's husband play in this exactly is what I am wondering, I know why Rosy married him but what was his reason to marry Rosy?

So this was bigger than just drug smuggling, there was more to it then that, and all the answer lies in one place, in Goa.

B2, I have so many questions, but I will wait patiently for you to reveal things.

Like I said this was intense update and I loved every bit of it from the first line to the last.

Once again looking forward to the next phase of their investigation, this is just the tip of the iceberg I am rest is going to be just as intense.

Love, loved it.

Please update soon.❤️❤️❤️