Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 10

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Sorry for late comment ... was inactive for whole last week ... parents' visit and my cousin's engagement 😳😳😳😳

Chapter 20 ...

Beauttiful part... I had mentioned in in the comment in Siyaa's "Dawn" and repeating it here ...

I can visualize the relationship between the ETF chief Sameer Rathod and ETF member Aisha only in these two stories... Dawn and TLIR ... what you and Siyaa are writing is something I want to see in the show... 😊

I never liked Rathore-Aisha pairing, even in the show I rarely find their scenes convincing ... and now I know the reason... its with the writers ... The way you and Siyaa have portrayed their relationship is perfect and convincing...👏👏👏👏... Even I couldn't make it this perfect in the Sam-Aisha OS that I tried 😳

The Rathore-Aisha dinner scene was awesome... I don't know how u plan to shape it in future... but this dinner part was one of the best I have ever read on Sam-Aisha as OS ... if I consider it as one 😉😉😉

and this line stole my heart "The ever so perfect Chief.. "
For obvious reasons... I'm so happy these days ... 🤗

Again... couldn't find an emoticon to express myself when I read "It's always better to break a promise than letting a promise break you.."

Flashback was awesome...👏👏👏

It clarified more on Ro's relationship with Arjun and her father... 😊

Her talks with her dad reminded me of my dad 😊 ... sometimes I banter with my dad similarly but I know whatever he says ... its for my own good 🤗

Arjun - Ro ... typical youngster romance ... hiding their feelings and expecting the other one to understand it themselves 😳😳 ... chori chori chupke chupke 😉

So links are connecting now 👍🏼

Big revelation i must say.😲Chief being none other than SP Gupte.
Woh toh waise bhi musibat ka pitara hai aur josh mein aakar shayad koi galat kadam utha le..
Well reading the above part It clicked me if i am on the right track to understand if Arjun's baba is his chief but yes till the end I m glad i got it corrrectly.😎

Well another shocking & revealing thing here is Ayesha's reactions knowing her Baba as the Chief.
This 1 is among those secrets that Ro has hidden from Aisha as well i guess.If I am not wrong on this that Ro was very much aware of her Baba being an undercover cop & also about he was the one who was guiding Arjun by donning the role of his chief .(I will have to wait & watch if my assumptions are correct or not.)
Among the big revealations how can i forget the informal tone between the long lost buddies. 😃

"Sha, tumhe yaad hai Baba ne humein isske baare mein bataya tha?"

Arjun's mind had drifted off to the evening when he had been a mere spectator and faked happiness when the girl he had loved had gotten engaged to someone else, leaving him with a heartache that hadn't healed even three years after her death..

Tell me Avantika was Arjun present when Ro got engaged to the mystery man?

"Rawte.. Are you sure?"

"Come on, Rawte.. Don't tell me you think those three unsolved cases were related to Sikandar as well..

Brilliant Telepathy between the Chief & the Second Command in Chief I must say.👍🏼
GOA
So the logical mind wala Arjun Rawte is back.😎He brilliantly managed to figure out the place with the findings in hand.👏

But my dear this is not fair at all.You have actually cliffhanged on a very crucial point😭.I wanted to read Aisha's reaction on hearing GOA from Arjun.
So Arjun is pacing towards GOA.I wonder what will happen when his path crosses with Ro.I am not sure when r u planning for the confrontation between Ro-Arjun but the way the fic is proceeding i can say that we will be having bigger fireworks in GOA .The one thing for sure now is that Aisha will be in big trouble now.I wonder how will Rathod save her from the wrath of Arjun.