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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awesome updates B2!

the knots are slowly untying and the the secrets are slowly coming out but I felt the mystery deepening further!
Kudos for that!

I think the last part had made me guess that Aisha's baba was the Arjun's chief...so yes, he was.and perhaps that was the reason for the tragedy as well

Arjun linking the 3 cases to SIkandar and then finally to Goa was brilliant...
He had linked the dots and found the line perfectly! loved that

Not to forget the informal talk between Arjun and Aisha...Rathod noticing it and pitching in before they go into the coil was superb! loved it!

Arohi's engagement was another big mystery...still wondering why she did that...is that part of the mission as well?? was she sacrificing her life for something?

and those letters, the gift box with the organs...so much to unfold...mysteries deepen...jaldi jaldi kholo...

cont soon

Thanks B3.. 🤗

Yupp.. Well, about time ACP Arjun did something intelligent in this one, right? 😆

Yupp.. Wait and watch for what Rathore has actually figured out from Arisha's convo.. 😉

Arohi's engagement?! Well, that was definitely a turning point in their lives, as you may have guessed by now.. But did she do it for the mission? A big NO!

That's all I can say for now.. 😕

Thank you.. More coming your way..

And I haven't forgotten my promise to you.. Watch out for the 24th one.. 😉

Originally posted by: kunchu
Me too 😳
sorry for late unres
was messd up...
The update was bang on...missed Ro
the talk between Aisha n Arjun was so good
n thn coming to pointing Sik was brilliant
bojot doubts hai yaar... Ro'shaadi, the accident...bohot
waiting it to be revealed
ps:I have started rereading TLIR...n trust me its great to read again as I know bit of backgroinds...
C u soon.still missing you

Thank you dear.. 🤗

Aahh, that's okay.. I guess I'm really updating them unusually faster but then I really need to get these filler parts out of the way asap..

I know.. doubts bohot hain.. And I will reveal them as and when the time is right.. 😃

Ohh.. That's superb!

Lots more in store.. Keep reading.. 😊

Originally posted by: live
awesome update👏
ETF team is heading to goa??
that means arjun will soon meet his RO😉
BTW.u forgot 2 pm me😊

Thanks dear..

Yes they are.. But maybe in two updates from now.. 😉

Errm.. yes.. maybe! 😉

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: bgargate
Unres

Part 21

Simply superb... I had a doubt that Baba could be Arjun's Chief... but was not very sure and also didn't want to spoil my own fun... like I have already done for one thing 😳😳😳

So links are connecting now 👍🏼
Ooops... I couldn't understand about the Detective agency, Organ trade stuff and Chief's location.. 😳
But encounter happened on Maharashtra Goa border 😉

And now Arjun has zeroed down on location "GOA" 😎

Ayesha and Ro are in trouble now... ... Ayesha you are sandwiched...

u cant stop this toofan named Arjun Rawte ...He is setting out to create a havoc in Goa...😉

And Ro ...u better be prepared for the confrontation...Wo aa raha hai... 😈

Now i'm waiting for Arjun to enter Goa... 😉

BTW... no PM this time

Aww.. Thanks so much..

Btw, which suspense have u spoilt for yourself? Or have I done it unknowingly? 😲

Oh yeah.. I hope you have those bits cleared out by now.. 😃

And yes, Ayesha is in deep trouble now and a glimpse of it in the next one.. 😊

Yupp.. the Toofan is on the way.. But she is already facing one there.. 😕

Watch out for more.. 😊

Originally posted by: 1likeNoOther
Wow! An action-packed update!
Saw the ETF we see on tv in this update :)
Loved it heaps!!!

Thank you dear.. 😃

Glad you like it..

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Res.For now only two words.BRILLIANT TEAMWORK👍🏼**Edited**

My dear Avantika,
Firstly tel me 1 thing.How do you manage to cope up with the juggling of the characters in this particular Fic?You definitely deserve a pat on the back my dear. I cant do that so plz Do it on my behalf.👍🏼
This update came out brilliantly with the team's coordination with each other.In other words the Brilliant Teamwork 👏👍🏼that you have shown here & then Arjun figuring out the missed links was highly commendable.It appeared to me as if I am watching it on screen.
Back to the update:
Big revelation i must say.😲Chief being none other than SP Gupte.
Woh toh waise bhi musibat ka pitara hai aur josh mein aakar shayad koi galat kadam utha le..
Well reading the above part It clicked me if i am on the right track to understand if Arjun's baba is his chief but yes till the end I m glad i got it corrrectly.😎
Well another shocking & revealing thing here is Ayesha's reactions knowing her Baba as the Chief.
This 1 is among those secrets that Ro has hidden from Aisha as well i guess.If I am not wrong on this that Ro was very much aware of her Baba being an undercover cop & also about he was the one who was guiding Arjun by donning the role of his chief .(I will have to wait & watch if my assumptions are correct or not.)
Among the big revealations how can i forget the informal tone between the long lost buddies. 😃
"Sha, tumhe yaad hai Baba ne humein isske baare mein bataya tha?"

Arjun's mind had drifted off to the evening when he had been a merespectator and faked happiness when the girl he had loved had gottenengaged to someone else, leaving him with a heartache that hadn'thealed even three years after her death..
Tell me Avantika was Arjun present when Ro got engaged to the mystery man?
"Rawte.. Are you sure?"
"Come on, Rawte.. Don't tell me you think those three unsolved caseswere related to Sikandar as well..
Brilliant Telepathy between the Chief & the Second Command in Chief I must say.👍🏼
GOA
So the logical mind wala Arjun Rawte is back.😎He brilliantly managed to figure out the place with the findings in hand.👏
But my dear this is not fair at all.You have actually cliffhanged on a very crucial point😭.I wanted to read Aisha's reaction on hearing GOA from Arjun.
So Arjun is pacing towards GOA.I wonder what will happen when his path crosses with Ro.I am not sure when r u planning for the confrontation between Ro-Arjun but the way the fic is proceeding i can say that we will be having bigger fireworks in GOA .The one thing for sure now is that Aisha will be in big trouble now.I wonder how will Rathod save her from the wrath of Arjun.
All in all I must say that you have brilliantly drafted this update👍🏼

Thank you Farheen.. 🤗

Oh! Don't ask.. I'm always on the brink of pulling out my hair.. But it all turns out well in the end somehow.. 😃😆

Err.. I'm afraid I won't be able to answer your first one on Gupte and Ro-Arjun.. I have yet to decide on that one..

Yupp.. Like I mentioned, Arjun was right there when she got engaged to the mystery man! 😕

Ayesha's reactions?! 😲 Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.. Wait and watch.. 😉

Oh and the mere thought of so high expectations makes me want to bite my nails..

Anyway! Thanks so much.. 🤗

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great update...
Thanks for the pm

Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: anu91
Superb update
it was a awesome action pack
waiting for Arjun entry in goa
thanks for PM dr

Thanks dear.. 😃

Originally posted by: Shivi1997
Thnx a lot 4 ur update
hats off 2 u
its gr8
i loved it
thnx 4 ur pm sweetie ❤️

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
That was wonderful
loved it
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: kusharberry
wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm to dear😃👏

Thank you guys.. 🤗

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Enchantress
That was just A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. I love to see the entire team working like this. And you sound it all the more real. Love it... Finally, GOA... Now the story will take a major turn.. wasn't I waiting for this.. oh yeah!!! Its like a mysterious movie or novel I am watching or reading.. Full of suspense and thrill.. M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G.

Do continue soon.

Dee

Thanks so much Dee.. 😃

Yeah.. That was the point.. Glad you like it..

Yesh! We all are, I guess.. 😆

Aww.. Thanks.. That's a huge compliment.. 😃

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
awww...wat a beautiful update...
along vid arjun even we r getting close to th truth nw...

so arjun's baba nd chief who used to guide arjun were th same...guessed it though..

missed my lady in red a lot in this one...

in th 1st part...arjun had started to find th truth...

i guess nw th mystery will unravel soon...

loved th sudden transition for Aisha to Sha from Arjun...

two frnds...so close yet so faar...

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

wanna dedicate a line to Arjun nd Rosy (Arohi)

"Sometimes the longest journey and the largest distances are between Two Souls..."

i m in love vid this story...

so knw they r slowly leading to Goa...

all dots connected...alll pieces at there places...alll lights on th right path...
c'on Arjun...walk on th path nd get to th truth...

continue soon

love
Aisha

Thank you.. 🤗

Yeah.. Will make up for it in the next one.. 😉

Yupp.. and for Arisha, long way to go before things start to fall in place between them..

Aww.. That fits them perfectly!

Yes, he will.. and he's already on the right path, I guess..

Thank you Aisha.. 😃

Originally posted by: diw9
loving this ff.read it in one go.

Oh wow! Hats off to you.. Thanks so much.. 😃

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: hal96
Shocked shocked shocked
So baba was Arjuns chief
He was warning Arjun to stay away from all this
Has baba got an old settling with sikander ... Did baba know who sikander was
N then Arjun takes everyone to the police station where baba used 2 work
Loved the informal part between Arjun n Ayesha
OMG organs were kept as a present at Arohis engagement
So Arjun has linked the dots
The detective agency, the organ king , the raid n last but not the least where baba was the last time Arjun talked 2 him was only one place GOA ... n this is where the team are going to go next
N this isnt hoing to be easy because the one n only Ro is in Goa working on her mission
When Arjun will come face to face with her n finds out she is alive he is going to be so angry
N Aysha .. i cant even predict what will happen 2 her but then Mr serious hai na
Update soon
Cant wait
😊

Thank you dear.. 😃

Yupp.. for now, all hope rests on Mr. Serious.. 😆

And Ro's Mr. Nautanki as well.. If yu haven't forgotten him yet.. 😉

Originally posted by: life93
hi avani di🤗... whata update di👏👏👏👏... totaly mindstorming 😆...saara dimaag ke taar hill gaye aaj toh gosh!!😲...itne saare revealations all together😲😲😲...need some time to get back in senses😆... so so so ...the chief was baba😲😲...no doubt RO was his only weekness...and he was concerned for his problem ka pitara 😊...but for that he wouldnt not ingnore his duty never !!...is there any other reason behind his action???... well the way arjun connected the dots is apreciable👏👏👏👏...and hope he will connected the lose one too soon!!... and then journey to kahapoli is also emotionaly exhaustive too...specialy fro aisha and arjun...but still they are brillliantly working as cop...👏👏👏👏 and how can someone be so shrewed 😲😲😲😲...arohi ki engagement mein human organ 😲😲😲...can't believe this...😡😡😡...n everyone will be only one man is sooo shrewed...sikander... now the events are indicating to goa...means one more step towards rosy...pareira ...and drug dealing racket ...ya suzy ka kya hua ????... missing ro...a lot!!!😊...update soon avani di🤗

Thanks so much Nee.. 🤗

Lol.. Aww.. Itna intense tha kya?! 😆

Khair next one will be light-hearted for sure.. 😊

Yupp.. Wait and watch..

Oh and just so you asked for it, I've added it to the next update..

See, this is why I always insist on your honest opinions.. 😉

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
amazing updatethanks for the pm

Thank you..

Originally posted by: Jannat94
Awesome update Avantika
loved the whole update
Thank you so much 4 the Pm
update soon 😃

Thanks a lot dear.. Glad you're liking it..

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: rizwanaa
amazing update
arjun's visit to goa...
n waiting eagerly for his
confrontation with ro
thanks a lot for pm
cont soon

Thank you dear.. 😃

All will happen in good time.. 😉

Originally posted by: Payal_156
di sry fr d late coment
awesome
i gues dat chief is baba yay
so ro getting engage
n wat organ omg
ayesha n sam bro rocking
arjun bro wow
so painful potrayed
Goa me kya hoga waiting
claps n hats off di
pm ke liye thanks
miss ro
sry me busy n short cment

Thank you Payalia.. 😃

Yeah..Goa mein bohot kuch hoga.. 😉😆

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Kareena1994
Superb update
Hope they will meet in Goa.

Yupp.. they have to, right?! 😉

Thank you..

Originally posted by: pihu_angad
Awesome.

Thank you dear..

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Thanks for the PM di,
Fantastic update!!!!
So many things revealed and yet so many mysteries!!
So baba was Arjun's chief! And finally they are heading to GOA,
I wonder what will happen when Mr. A finds his Miss. A in GOA, will he murder Ayesha first or Arohi for hiding this from him? 😉
I am eagerly waiting for you to reveal the secrets about the case now! Please update soon 😊

Thanks dear.. 😃

Lol.. that we have to decide together.. Coz for sure, he's going to kill someone for sure.. 😉

Originally posted by: yas23
awesome update
loving it the story
missed rosy a lot
so arjuns baba and the chief are the same
aisha and arjun convo was great and he called her sha
so arjun and the etf are heading to goa..wonder what will happen then
waiting for more secrets to be reveal
continue soon

Thank you.. 😃

More coming your way!

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
awesome update...👏

was expecting some dhamaka , arjun remembering his talk with baba and ro...

brilliant... connected all dots and will be heading to goa...

want to know his reaction when he finds his miss a there... 😉

baba believed arjun that he'll take care of their" trouble magnet".. then her marraige wid someone else, kahi kuch choot raha hai...

only rathod can save sha from arjun when he knows about ro...

update soon

Haha.. Abhi toh bohot kuch choot raha hai.. 😛

Thank you dear..

Originally posted by: sarajamal
IT,S AWSOME DEAR

LOED THE UPDATE.THNX 4 PM

Thanks.. 😃

Aww.. Thanks.. trust me, I can't wait to answer them all, either.. 😃

Oh! Okay.. 😆
Admire is the wrong word, my dear if you ask me.. 😉😳

Yes! Yes and YES!! 😉😆

Thanks so much.. 🤗

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: littlebrat
kitni sharam ki baat hai mein kabhi first nahi aa sakti...arghhh😡...any ways back to the update...it was long enough to be read twice...😆.

so many surprises some for good and some could have a really exciting future😃

i am having a gut feeling is arjun knowing something more... his calling aisha sha was nice ... but nice till when!!!!... arjun is so near to connecting dots...

and from where did the dead bodies for aisha and ro arrived... seems like you have lots of twist and dhamakas ready for us... seems like the day of disaster have something hidden as well...i am eager to know the exact sequence of events that happened...

so goa mein fireworks, blasts etc eveything is going to happen... arjun- Ro- Mario...uff kya triangle hai... waiting for confrontation
arjun's brain is working overtime at high speed... and the hint of ever caring sameer ... haye how do i resist these two hunks😳😉
God help Ro and Sha😆

Excellent one

thanx for pm... love

Aww.. Don't worry about it.. Yahan already hum sab kataar mein ready hote hain.. 🤣

Oh darn! Was it that long?

Err.. yeah.. Till when?! Lets wait and watch..

Yupp.. somethings are hidden for sure..😃

Lol.. Yeah.. Wait and watch.. Abhi toh iss triangle mein aur bhi angles judne hain.. 😉

Yeah.. God help them?! Nah.. God save us! These men drive me mad! 😉😆

Thank you.. 😃