*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Wiwy i just read chapter 17 now

Arnav held NK by the collar just cuz he called Khushi his girl 🤣
bechara NK...but good thing he din let it affect him much

aw i felt bad for him though...first Arnav almost kills him nd then Khushi turns down...so sad

but your lines were well written...especially the khudkhushi one 🤣

Now i really want Arnav to knw tht shyam had asked Khushi's hand in marriage...it would be great drama...nd interestin 😉

Arnav din't correct the workers whn they called them a couple nd now Khushi Plannin to Confess 😃...sounds really interesting ...great chapter ⭐️👏

will read 18th chapter later 😳

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

My first question would be when will your update next??

About the update!!

Well it was damn awesome!!

I liked arnav's concern for kushi and kushi's jealous wen the girls askedc about him!!

Fantasic update on the whole!!

she planned to tell him tomo in her sane self but she said it now itself!

what will be his reply?? what will she do??

Will she again propose him tomo?

But then will he allow her to go to that village for an month?

Am so excited!

Pls cont soon!!

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

I feel like whining right now!

How could you possibly have stopped writing there!?

The girl should tie a scarf or something on her mouth before sleeping!

I wonder how he is going to react!

And the idiot thought she was talking about NK!

She spends all the time with him, day as well as night!

Men are duffers!

😉

Nice update dear.

👏

Thanks for the pm.

And this time please try and update soon!

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Awesome update
Loved it :) :D

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

Oh such a cliff hanger...err want a long update pls...but it was awesome...so eventually she tells him..well rather indirectly and in her sleep...update soon

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Loved it so much!

Smarty pant knows very well how to seduce his girl!

Poor Khushi was feeling insecure when her classmates were drooling him.

Was Khushi was in dormant state when she confessed her love for Arnav, or she was just feigning it? But the sexy man sure got happy to hear that.

can't wait to see what he says to Khushi when she will wake up.

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..aishi..

@..aishi..

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

awsome update
but why did u stop soon
omg khushi confessed
waiting for the next chapter pls update soon

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

awe so sweet khushi so u really do love him...wow wiwy wt a unique way of her expressing love towards arnav...sleeping beauty...lol...both r so content with each other...its awesome update :)