*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: jdd1959
LOVELY UPDATE...
Ur story is like addiction to me EK UPDATE KHATAM NAHI HUA AUR I CRAVE 4 NEXT UPDATE SO PLS JALDI ...JALDI NEXT ONE...Khushi realized her feeling 4 Arnav & now waiting 4 Arnav's realization...
Thanks 4 d PM.

Addiction! You are addicted to my FF! I am thrilled!

But I don't know about the jaldi update! I haven't started on the next chapter yet! 😳

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: wiwy

Awww! You poor dear! I made you sad!😭 Bad me!
Par pyaar main kabhi kabhi
aisa ho jata hai
chhoti si baat ka
fasaana ban jaata hai !

Relax! Take deep breaths...I promise i will set things right! Okay?! 😃
All my love .🤗

🤗

Di u r not bad

I understand

story mein koi twist to aana chahiye na..😆

plus these things will make them more close...😉

Ab main thik hun 😳

But I'll really kill Shyam after all these MU's clear out 😆

Love you Di

Edited by Barun_Addict - 11 years ago

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

again shyam,ee i hate him..

and y arnav always listen to his mind not heART ,cant he see inocence of her eyes..

finally khushi knows 2 truths -one abt shyam and another regARding her heart that she loves him not attracted,which was best part of update.the acceptance of her love..

now the mission ahead lies abtproving her love & innocence in front of arnav..

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Hey thnxx for d pm,lvoed d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Dis is just awsum. Fabolous. Beautifully written. Omg shyam is such a creep. Keep updating.

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Wiwy, Interesting turn of events. I am liking the flow of the story. You are becoming a very good story teller. 👏 😊 Waiting to read what happens next. 😳

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: chalhov
Wiwy lovely update so Khushi is now aware of the good man and bad man and her love 😃

Hey Chalhov🤗

Sorry for the late reply😳 But thankyou so much for commenting on my story on your birthday of all days! 😃 Hope you had a grand celebration! 🥳

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: salooni
AWESOME
SUPER DUPER HIT
I LOVE YOUR TWIST
AND THE PAIN DEPICTED SO NICE
IT WAS LIKE PINCHING MY HEART
I LIKE THE LAST SEGMENT REALIZATION OF LOVE VERY MUCH
IT IS UPDATE STEALER FOR ME
AND I AM GLAD NOW SHYAM IS BEHIND THE BAR
AS KHUSHI KNOW THE TRUTH I
KNOW ARNAV WILL ALSO CAME TO KNOW IT
TODAY OR TOMORROW
LOVE THE PATH FROM
BROKEN BED TO BROKEN HEART
AND NOW JOINING THE DIFFERENCE
LOVED IT
THANKS FOR PM
BYE
WILL MEET SOON

Thanks for liking the update Soni!🤗

I always thought Khushi was different from girls of her age! She was sad that Arnav misunerstood her but she did not wallow in self pity. She decided to get at the bottom of things and so she called NK. Her realization that she loves Arnav gave her new hope to prove her innocence!

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

oh my things have surely gone tough for khushi here.
wht is she going to do now my sweet girl :(?

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
on chapter 24

Bravo...i loved their physical intimacy well written...nd Arnav not lossin his brains over nd havin the power to pull out...wow

nd Khushi's wanting for more only from him...tht is Love!!!

wonderfully written ⭐️👏

Chapter 25

Awww she loves him

nd Arnav how could he think Khushi is involved with him

tht creep told tht dialogue " while you were setting me on fire, he was setting my AR Designs on fire !" - Amazing line👍🏼...but tht comin out from the creep...spying on them lik tht 🤬 sick

Arnav shld make sure he is gone for good

Khushi...i hope she rightfully proves her innocence 😳

Both were amazing chapter⭐️👏...thanks Wiwy🤗...hope you had a great holiday 😃

Thanks Supi! Yep Shyam is such a creep!😡 But he made Khushi realize how much she loves Arnav!😉 Maybe he will also make Arnav realize how much he loves Khushi 😉 😆

Oh! yes! My holiday was short and sweet and very relaxing!

❤️ 🤗