*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

hi wiwy,

read the last three chapters at a go. hot, sexy, hyperventilating and lovely. in love is she. yeah, that's when you know you can do "it" and not insist on a wedding ring... seems natural. i loved that part. and your man is so sexy, i feel like hijacking him, the poor guy has a factory burnt down, workers in hospital... i worry for him.


Oh! In di! Aww! You read three chapters back to back! Yay!😃
Yes, I know what you said about "it" being natural here. Its my personal view that making love is only an extension of love.
And you are the only one worried about our sexy man! Most are worried about only Khushi! So please don't hijack him! He is all I have got!

❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Oh! In di! Aww! You read three chapters back to back! Yay!😃
Yes, I know what you said about "it" being natural here. Its my personal view that making love is only an extension of love.
And you are the only one worried about our sexy man! Most are worried about only Khushi! So please don't hijack him! He is all I have got!

❤️ 🤗



well, look after him then, sir, take good care, i have a thing about saving mr raizada just in case you didn't know. 🤣 🤣 i adore this man's straight forward, honest, take me as i am air... and his ability to love.

bringing shyam in and creating this twist was clever, smooth, the essence of the triangle there.

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Posted: 11 years ago
updated my comment on page 53:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Thanks for liking the update Soni!🤗
I always thought Khushi was different from girls of her age! She was sad that Arnav misunerstood her but she did not wallow in self pity. She decided to get at the bottom of things and so she called NK. Her realization that she loves Arnav gave her new hope to prove her innocence!


no thanks required di
i told what you deserve😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the update.Shyam😡 he just dragged Khusi too in the mess creating distrust between khusi and arnav
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

No misunderstandings...
How will khushi prove his innocence
Cannot wait for more


Don't worry Anita. Khushi will be proved innocent. Promise!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

Khushi finally realized that not infatuation, but she actually loves Arnav.


i can understand why Arnav was indignant to scream at Khushi. But I'm hurt at the same time that he misunderstood her.
Khushi supported Shyam before; it doesn't mean that she is in love with Shyam. Arnav shouldn't blame her for the misdeed of Shyam. anyway I wish he gets to know the truth soon. I'm sure Khushi will make him realize the truth.
NK is a true friend who opened her eyes by revealing Shyam's truth.
nice update.

Sohara⭐️ Don't be upset with our sexy man's behaviour! Coz He looks the hottest when he is angry!
😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,lvoed d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Dis is just awsum. Fabolous. Beautifully written. Omg shyam is such a creep. Keep updating.


Aww! Thank you for all the adjectives! 😃 They made my day!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Wiwy, Interesting turn of events. I am liking the flow of the story. You are becoming a very good story teller. 👏 😊 Waiting to read what happens next. 😳


My dear Durgey
You are waiting to read the story? Not predicting, kya?😛😆
I miss you Sherlock!🤗
But you are really liking the flow? You seriously think I am a good story teller? I am jumping with joy!
Thankyou, thankyou!

P.S. Please press the Like button😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it and hopefully all the misunderstanding between arhi will be cleared anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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