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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

hi... amazing ff... read it in one go...i really felt in love with story... 👍🏼

this story has a real essence in it where u have showed a teenage attraction which lead to longing for each other then to love... the emotions and feelings u portrait keeping their age in view are just waaooo...👏

every character had its own uniqueness... love arnav character, so loving and caring and at the same tym has its aggressive side too...

i didn't read ur any other ff but i m going to read them too...😊

thnx for this beautiful story...

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Congratulations 👏

Haaye!!! I know it is a very informal start to speak about a story but I can't help it :D It very rarely happens while reading a story that you enjoy each chapter and you have a constant smile on your lips or a dreamy look in your eyes and it is very commendable when that continues not for the first 10 chapters, not only for the next 40 chapters but for the whole of 75 chapters!

The author deserves a huge applause for writing and updating this story regularly, never going off the track, never giving fillers, every update is of a good length which all points to only one fact and that is - the story was very well planned in advance.

There are a few characters other than IPK in this story, but you still feel a connect with them and you like them as well.

This is a period story, narrating the love of Arnav and Khushi right from when they were 15 and 13 years old respectively. Having read a lot of stories on school and college life on ArHi, no story has touched me more than this one have. Since the story was set up in Mumbai, including the school and college system, I could totally picture everything and cherish and relive those uniform clad, carefree days again!

Apart from all the good things that this story is, I would like to point out the vocabulary of the author. I got to learn quite a few words :D Who said we were wasting our time on the forum? :P

If you have not read this story it means you have read nothing at all. I assure you that it is 75+1 chapters of absolute delight.

An engrossing read

Thank you :)

ArHilicious Droolers #5: Ishaqzaade

P.S. Feel free to use this siggy and do mention *Awarded* in the title 😊

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Oh yes, I agree with Z di. HD has a great vocabulary. I had to Google few words to know the meanings :D

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snapeseverus

@snapeseverus

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Even, I have mentioned in my comments, repeatedly, that you truly have an extensive vocabulary... Sometimes, I googled the meaning and at other times I let it be... coz... I was too engrossed in the story... 😃

Edited by snapeseverus - 12 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Congratulations 👏

Winner

Arshi FF: It is Meant To Be Eventually by Eccentrica

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

such a beautiful ending

Priya volunteered to have her baby on the same day as Khushi
so that they can be sisters/friends all their lives

Just like their moms

so sweet that Khushi agreed to name their daughter after
Arnav's sister