KR ss:Break in the cloud!!Ch-5 updt pg-26

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

it is a regular series..

kinda like drabble lekin longer than drabble it is... 😎

so rey is having thoughts..

and i am loving it...

its so cool...

nia... u won't wanna know my thoughts abt her... some history it is... he he...

kinna accha hai ki roz update..

mere reading ka akaal khatam hoga..

and i was so thinking.. ki di update jaldi karein..

it was wonderful..

just loved it..

sweet... :) waiting for next.. :D

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

i just loved the flowiness of the update..

lovely.. and beautiful...

waiting for nexxt

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

i read ur chapter 2 but i will get back to comment by tomorrow for sure...

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

awsome update
luvd nia
thankx 4 d pm

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awsum update

Nia is a very cute girl

I liked her and karan must be swayam's son

Can u plzzz show their cs aur any pic so that for my imagination it will be easy

Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Nia!!! :O kya bachi hai yaar???

ufff... and uski papa uar future mom ki pehla date wo plan kar rahi hai!!!

I want the last line of the first chapter to be used in the next part..infact I would want the update was based on that..

If you dont get go to first page read the last line kriya says to rey!!!😉

I am waiting... ab jaldi likhna!!!😛

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

i just loved it

i rofled wen nia asked questions and i was like OMG

i liked each n every scene

nia is so cute

i love her

i was aweee wen kria made her understand things

n i was smiling like a fool all the time wen nia was instructing them he he i was like aaj kal k bache

this was awesome update really loved it n one more thing am really happy that u used myra instead of tani , it really sucks to find her in every ff i read .. yar koi aur character chun lo but thanks a lot for not including any tani hear

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Omggg 2 chapters update hogaye...and mene dekha bhi nai
uff...why am i so busy...
Will comment soon...jab thoda time mile
anyways u already know my view na :p