KR ss:Break in the cloud!!Ch-5 updt pg-26 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Freaking awesome update..
dance sequence was described wonderfully..
Kria misunderstood Rey n she was all set to leave d town!
But Rey succeeded to manofy her.. finally KriYaansh r together..
n then Only Rey,Kria & Victoria's secret!! Lol..
Their luv-making part was sensuous obviously..
I won't ask for an epilogue, as I truly luvd d ending.. Itz perfect.. Enjoyed thoroughly..
Will miss this SS.. Will miss Nia a lot..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Ending ... <3 <3
I Loved It ... :-*
Beautifully Written ...
Mind Blowing Update ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the endinggg ...
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all parts were beautifully written ...
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👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
mera comment itna picheee😭😭

unres

perfect ending 👏👏👏
it could not have been better than this

the start climax and end everything was beautifully penned down

perfect choice of song
apt for this update

i loved how you explained it

most of all
the end was superb
naughty and cheesyyy😳

am so happy to see you changed the last part...☺️☺️
wonderful totally wonderful 👏👏👏


thanks for the pm
update your other works soon
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg pj...take a bow from my side...

kya likha h tune I just lovedit...

their dance was just incredible...

and then their romance part was like so beautiful...

they are quite naughty...

M really sad k ur ending thia...

I loved it...

and ahmazingly written...

one of ur best writing...

superb work...

come up with more new works... (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous and super sensuous update.

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
As usual a superb update...

Luvd it...

De way u described deir dance was jst fab...

Amazingly written...

I wish ki yeh khatam nahi hota...

Bt luvd de beautiful nd happy ending..!!!

Dis ss is beautiful...

One of ur bst wrks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres


as expected
another amazing update by you...
that to 2 updates together
wow!!!


the dance was so well described 👏👏
it was mesmerizing...
the song was superb 👍🏼


but you finished it 🤔
but the ending was beautiful
really nice
lovely SS


thanks for the PM
would love to read your future works
do PM me 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb and sensuous update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb,,, amazing,,,
sensuous...
loved it...
thnks for the pm..:)

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