KR ss:Break in the cloud!!Ch-5 updt pg-26

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Freaking awesome update..
dance sequence was described wonderfully..
Kria misunderstood Rey n she was all set to leave d town!
But Rey succeeded to manofy her.. finally KriYaansh r together..
n then Only Rey,Kria & Victoria's secret!! Lol..
Their luv-making part was sensuous obviously..
I won't ask for an epilogue, as I truly luvd d ending.. Itz perfect.. Enjoyed thoroughly..
Will miss this SS.. Will miss Nia a lot..

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Amazing Ending ... <3 <3
I Loved It ... :-*
Beautifully Written ...
Mind Blowing Update ... :)

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lovekrisha

@lovekrisha

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

loved the endinggg ...
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all parts were beautifully written ...
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👏

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

mera comment itna picheee😭😭

unres

perfect ending 👏👏👏

it could not have been better than this

the start climax and end everything was beautifully penned down

perfect choice of song

apt for this update

i loved how you explained it

most of all

the end was superb

naughty and cheesyyy😳

am so happy to see you changed the last part...☺️☺️

wonderful totally wonderful 👏👏👏

thanks for the pm

update your other works soon

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Omg pj...take a bow from my side...

kya likha h tune I just lovedit...

their dance was just incredible...

and then their romance part was like so beautiful...

they are quite naughty...

M really sad k ur ending thia...

I loved it...

and ahmazingly written...

one of ur best writing...

superb work...

come up with more new works... (:

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Marvelous and super sensuous update.

loved it

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

As usual a superb update...

Luvd it...

De way u described deir dance was jst fab...

Amazingly written...

I wish ki yeh khatam nahi hota...

Bt luvd de beautiful nd happy ending..!!!

Dis ss is beautiful...

One of ur bst wrks...