KR ss:Break in the cloud!!Ch-5 updt pg-26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

sorry PJ m not unresing on my previous post...

and also commenting late actually i wasn't coming OL properly from 2-3 days...

so just read it out...

but abhi complete nhi hua hai...

abhi only 2parts hi read kiye hain...

3rd part rah gya hai...bde bde update hain nah...😆

to thoda thak gyi hun...but iska matlab ye nhi hai k u cut short your updates...got it..😳

so kriya and rey both lost their love...differently...

and rey ki daughter...my god..she is to too much...

kya daadi amma hai..😆

and abhi se rey is to all fida over kriya...

hope k kriya k feelings me b kuch changes aayen...

and you are updating this on regular basis...wowww...

and KR date yeyyy...hoping k kuch exiting hoga date pe...you know what i mean...😉

plzzz regular hi update kar...

because i just hate waiting you see...😆

jaldi hi 3rd update complete kar k comment karungi...

tab tak itne se kaam chala...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wowww...

wowww..

its superb u left me speechless

i just loved it

from the beginning to end , i wasnt able to move from the story

in the beginning i loved the dady n daughter duo convo

just loved it

"Tell the truth...and one who dad."She scrunched her nose and lifted her knife tip towards rey's nose. i rofled ...he he

loved the 10 yr old nia

aisi beti rey ki hi ho sakti hai

wow...

i just love the cook rey

he is so damn sexy man

while reding ur ff where i realised rey can cook food, i remembered my rey who is disastorous in kitchen he he

just loved it

loved the convo between kriyansh

superbly done..jab kria ne letter diya toh ek pal ke liye meri saas atack gayi thi ki , kahi myra wapas toh ni aa rahi but i was shock to know the whole truth...

so myra cheated on him.. argh!! pehle toh mujhe laga ki they divorced coz they had anger issue..

thanks 4 clearing it

i really liked kriyansh dance and kiss

loved the whole update

u did an awesome job

update soon