KR ss:Break in the cloud!!Ch-5 updt pg-26

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

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unres

**FOR THE NOTE**

Well yes it sometimes becomes difficult to read on daily bases

as your length of chapters is long and

then reading it and then commenting also

it really becomes difficult..

so I WOULD prefer you give 2-3 days gap in b/w 2 updates

but ye gap bada ma dena

or else your dead 😳😳

will comment on the chappy later

it's to00 long 😆😆

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I'm really in love with this SS

i mean it is so unique

it is such a simply and sweet story

and i'm loving it...

you are a beautiful writer.. 👏👏

thanks for the PM

update soon but not so soon 😉😉

and do PM me 😃

i'm waiting

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: pallavi.14
Its okay rafiki i know u are busy and mereko ache se pata hai tera kya review hai so chill relax dear...😃

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

that was amazing..

just loved it...

loved the way u portrayed the emotions...

amazing they were...

haan nia ke liye meri feelings abhi bhi vahi hai... LOL

par i just loved how u showed everything..

tharki rey... 😎

waiting for next

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

res

unress

baap re kitta lamba chptr thsa...mza aa gya pdne m...aisa lga IJM padh ri...:p

suprbbb updates...

u truely justified father - duo relationshp ...

this is one of d beautiful relatnshp on earth nd u justified it... lovd their relstnshp...

d way she is suggstng him to move on is jst wowww...!!!!!!

unbelivable that she is jst 10...

nd thn kriya 's entry is sum how rofling nd passionate too...

a totally diff. combo. ;)

thn past...i cant believe tha myra can be so stupid...
kriya is rght she cant preserve him b 'cz of stupidity...

bt now kriya is for him... nd nia too ...

two most lovable persns in his life...

nd that grl is obviously kriya ...

post last part asap...

thanzxx 4 pm

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

1st part unresd on pg -1...
2nd on 7...
3rd above...

:) :)

Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Love the update
it was supab
rey n nias convo was so unbelivable
is nia really Of 10?
i dout bcoz she talks like mature people
but really love her character
n also love moment between kr

Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago