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Posted: 18 years ago
totallly awesome part!!!!! i think the guy tht rajveer was on about was ipshitas hubby maybe......neways great part...wonder wt the cadets will do nw....plz continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
GR88 GOING 👏
I ALWAYS FIND KKM INTERESTING WITH EACH POST KEEP UP THE GR88 WORK
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part .......reallyy awesome part.......lagta hai papers dene ke baad mind extra recharge ho gya hai....story is just superb, fantastic, 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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absolutely amazing!!! i'm totally addicted to this story!
Please continue soon, me waiting very eagerly for the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank u all for ur comments, they mean a lot to us. We'l try our best to live upto ur expectations in future too.

Thanks once again.

Will try to post the next part as soon as possible…

Regardz-

Varallikka & farheen 😊

Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
mindblowing parts.. 👏 ..stry is gng on v interestng tracks..do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

mindblowing parts.. 👏 ..stry is gng on v interestng tracks..do cont soon... 😊

Thanks a lot! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-24

Rajveer aur Samarth base pe pahuchte hai…the first person they meet was major general Abhimanyu seth…

Abhimanyu: welcome to army head quarter officers…main aap logo ka hi intezar kar raha tha

Rajveer: im sorry for being late sir….

Samarth: waise bhi kuch logo ki adaat hoti hai, khud bhi late hone ki aur dusro ko bhi late karwane ki…

[Uski is baat pe raj bas ek u will never change ka smile deta hai and Abhimanyu pehle to Samarth ki taraf dekhte hai aur phir raj ki taraf dekh kar wo bhi bas ek smile hi dete hai…now there was silence in the room it, was then broken by major general Abhimanyu…]

Maj.Gen: so I think we should go to lt.genral's cabin, he must be waiting for us..

Sare log lt.gen siddarth ke room mei jate hai…..

Lt. gen: welcum to base officers…mai tumhi logo ka intezar kar raha tha…itni der kaha laga di tumlogo ne??

Samarth:[raj ko ghurte huye] kya kare sir koi apne sapno mei khoya hua tha

Lt. gen: [smiles at this] anyways, raj tumhari tabiyat ab kaisi hai….

Rajveer: mai bilkul thik hu sir…sir major Suraj ne ye report ki file bhejwayi hai…

Lt.gen: ha…ye file tum Abhimanyu ko de do…[to Abhimanyu] ye file bahut hi confidential hai…so ye sirf aap tak hi rehni chahiye….

Abhimanyu: I'll take care of it sir….

Lt. gen:so I think its done for today ….khane ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai…chalo lunch saath mei karte hai

Rajveer: ek min sir…mujhe apko aur bhi kuch batana hai….kuch aisa jo is report me nahi hai…

Lt. gen: ha kaho…

Rajveer: sir wo actually…kal raat….[he tells him the whole incident including the message on that paper]

Abhimanyu: iska matlab wo log kahi as paas hi hai…..

Lt.gen: isiliye Rajveer Samarth ab aap logo ko bahut hi hoshiyar rehna hoga …khaskar tume raj…ye log humare andaze se bhi jyada chalak hai….

Samarth: we know sir…& trust me ye log kitne hi chalak kyou na ho humare rehte academy ko chu bhi nahi payenge…

Lt. gen: I no…well chalo ab chalte hai ya aur bhi kuch kehna hai???

Rajveer: kehna nahi hai invite karna hai..

Abhimanyu: invite??? Kisliye

Rajveer Samarth ko ishara karta hai ki wo bataye….

Samarth: wo humne parso chahat kunal karan aur Pritha ki sagai ka socha hai….

Lt.gen: kya chahat ki sagaai ??? bachhe kitni jaldi bare ho jate hai….pata hi nahi chalta…abhi itni si thi aur abhi dekho uski sagai bhi ho rahi hai….

Abhimanyu: waqt kaise guzar jata hai pata hi nahi chalta…

[and later they all have lunch]

Its evening time now….

Lets see what are the cadets doing….

Anu: yaar aaj ka din bahot acha tha

Yuvi: ha, aaj wo Hitler ke darshan jo nahi hue na…, oh Lord I pray ki kuch dino ke liye unhe iss academy se bahar hi rakho..

Ashi: tathastu!!!

[all of them laugh]

Rohan: yaar yeh mess ka khana kha ke pakk gaye…

Abhi: ha, per hum kuch bhi to nahi sakte na

Ashi: kyun nahi? waise bhi Rohan Mehra aaj hume treat jo dene wale hai

Rohan: what?

Ashi: ha.. bhool gaye? Maine kal bet jeeti hai, so its your turn to repay back..

Yuvi: ok ok wako!, per iss academy mein treat??? That's just impossible! Kuch aur kaho

Ashi: impossible itself says I M Possible….aur kisne kaha ki hum yaha iss academy mein party karenge?

Anu: kya matlab?

Abhi: kahi aap…??

Ashi: absolutely right Abhi

Dhwani: no ways, guys we cant do that!

Rohan: tumlog kya baatein kar rahe ho?

Anu: yehi ki hum academy se bahar jayenge aur Rohan hume treat dega

Yuvi: what?? Bahar? Are u nuts?

Ashi: kyun darr gaye kya? Jab main uss Hitler ke room ke bahar uska name board lagake aa sakti hu to tum yeh bhi nahi kar sakte? Besides that u are lucky, senior and junior dono hi Hitlers aaj academy mein nahi hai

Dhwani: per iska yeh to matlab nahi ke baki teachers bhi academy mein nahi hai, agar hum pakde gaye to pata nahi yeh log hamare saath kya karenge?

Abhi: Dhwani, inn logo ko samjhane ka koi fayda nahi hai, so beheter yehi hoga ki ya to hum inko join kare ya….

Anu: ya?

Abhi: tumlogo ke bina dusra koi option bhi to nahi hota hai na!

Ashi: so apne chote se brains pe jyada zor mat dalo aur hamare saath chalo

Yuvi: ok to aaj raat lights out hote hi hum academy se bahar niklenge….

Rohan: ok done!

[time passes by and its nite time now.. lites out ho chuke hai aur cadets are all set to jump out of the academy.. wo ek ek karke apne rooms se bahar nikalte hai.. teachers aur guards se bachte bachaate kisi tarha academy ki deewar tak pohochte hai.. usi jagah aate hai jaha se unhone academy mein aane ka raasta banaya tha]

Anu: thank god ki Rajveer sir bhi nahi hai warna to Hitler se bach bhi jate per unse

Abhi: unse bachna to mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin hai

Ashi: aye mere pyare Don, yeh filmi baatein karna bandh karo aur ek ek karko bahar niklo….

[sabhi usi jagah se bahar nikalte hai aur gate ke bahar pochote hai aur academy se kareeb hi ek restaurant mien jate hai…]

Yuvi: wow man! Bahar aake lagta hai main azaad hu!

Ashi: Mr. azaad bhartiya, pehle kahi baith jao phir apne azaadi ke kisse sunana…

[wo sabhi baithte hai, aur pani manpasand cheeze order karte hai, in all kaafi time ke baad they all have a great time]

Tabhi unke peeche wali table pe kuch log aakar baithe hai, bilkul Abhi ke peeche.. wo kuch baate karte hai aur baato baato mein wo Academy ka naam lete hai, aur Abhi ka dhyaan unper jaata hai]

Abhi: sshhhh!!!!!

Ashi: ab tumhe kya hua?

Abhi: [mummers] ek minute! Humare peche jo log baithe hai unhe suniye, kuch gadbad hai…

[wo log aapas mein baatein karte hai aur unke paas kuch envelopes bhi hote hai]

1st persons:- sab kuch bilkul plan ke mutabik hona chahiye.. wo abhi thori hi der me wo log base se academy ke liye niklenge …. yehi sahi mauka hai…

2nd person: thik hai, aaj ki raat Major Rajveer aur Major Samarth ki aakhri raat hogi…

3rd person: ha, kal ka suraj wo log dekh nahi payenge…

[saying this they all get up and leave, aur saare cadets yeh sunkar bilkul hairaan hote hai]

Yuvi: ye log to Rajveer sir ko marne ka plan bana rahe the….

Ashi: dumbo abhi tak humare kaan humare paas hi hai…

Yuvi: matlab…

Ashi: matlab ye ke ye bat sirf tumhe hi nahi hume bhi sunai di thi…

Yuvi: oh please! apna irritating sense of humour apna pas hi rakho…..no body is interested here

Dhwani: come on guys grow up….yaha ye log humare teachers pe attack ki bat kar rahe hai aur tum log bewakufo jaise lar rahe ho…

Anu: mujhe to bahut dar lag raha hai….

Abhi: waise bhi wo log academy me nahi hai….hume kuch karna chahiye…

Yuvi: par hum kya kar sakte hai…. Hume to ye bhi nahi pata ke wo log kaha gaye hai…

Rohan:ek sec ye gunde kuch base ke bare me baat kar rahe the….but kaunsa base….

Ashi: we all are related to army so yaha base ka ek hi matlab ho sakta hai and that is army base….

Anu: par yaha to sirf ek hi army base hai….wo bhi gulmarg mei jo yaha se 10 km dur hai…

Rohan: tumko kaise pata…

Anu: general knowledge…u c… wo kya hai na maine apni gk ki kitabe dhayn se parhi thi tumhari tarah exam me copy karke pas nahi kiya tha

Rohan: how dare u…

Yuvi: hey guys chill… iska matlab wo dono hitlers…wahi gaye honge…. Guys I think we should go der….wo log bahut bari musibat me hai hume unki madad karni chahiye….what say….

Sare log Yuvi ki baat se agree karte hai…aur party chor ke base ki taraf chal parte hai…udhar Rajveer aur samarth bhi academy laut rahe hote hai…tabhi they see somebody lying on road…as good officers they go to check whats the matter when they get surrounded by some 7-8 people…..one of them was pointing gun at them…they dared not to do anything as that person could shoot them any moment…wo log kuch soch hi rahe the ke koi peeche se aa kar gundo pe patthar phekne lata hai…aur jis aadmi ke haath mein gunhoti hai usko ko peeche se akar sir pe

marta hai jisse uske hath se gun chut jati hai and he becomes unconcious…taking hold on situation Rajveer aur Samarth sare logo ko dhone lagte hai…..saath hi wo log jinhone is gundo ko mara tha yani humare honhar cadets they too join them…every thing was under control when the main guy…gains his

conciousness n picks up his gun….tabhi uske samne Anu ati hai….he points his gun towards her….seeing

the gun Anu gets completely blank…she couldn't decide what to do…she just keeps standing like a statue…that guy fired his gun when Rajveer cums and pushes her aside…. Anu hits her hand on a stone and it starts bleeding badly….leaving her Rajveer hits that guy badly…but some how all of them escapes taking advantage of dark ness…now both the officers were left alone with the cadets….

Gunde to bhag gaye but ab bari thi humare honhar cadets ki…. Rajveer aur Samarth ko dekh ke saaf pata chal raha tha ke how angry they were at them…

Rajveer: [gusse me] kya main jaan sakta hu aap is waqt yaha kya kar rahe hai???

Ashi: wo sir…..actually [she tells her everything that happened]

Rajveer: oh to aap log yaha hume bachane aye the….

Abhi: nahi sir …

Rajveer: just shut up cadet…aap logo ko kya lagta hai yaha koi film chal rahi hai aur aap log uske hero hai???? kya soch ke aplog yaha aye the…apko pata bhi hai wo log kaun the???? apko zara bhi andaza tha yaha kitna khtra tha…

Rohan: sir hum to yaha bas apko alert karne ….

Rajveer: [giving a sarcastic smile] alert karne aye the….cadet pehle aplog khud to alert ho jaiye uske baad kisi aur ko alert karna….aaj apki ek galati ki wajha se[pointing to Anu] is larki ki jaan ja sakti thi… aur sirf iski kyou aap mei se kisi ki bhi jaan ja sakti thi ….do u realize that….

Dhwani: sir humlog to yaha bas apki madad karne aye the

Samarth: madad??? ….aap log humari madad karne aye the…kya aplog bhul chuke hai ke humlog trained army officers hai aur aplog sirf first year ke cadets…apko kaise laga ke aplog humari madad kar payenge…this was a completely foolish and irresponsible act…aaj agar aap mei se kisi ko kuch ho jata to kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki iska jimmedar kaun hota…army officers banne aye hai na aplog…army officer ka matlab bhi jante hai aplog…..aplogo ke liye army officer ka matlab banduk lekar idhar udhar daurna hota hoga magar ek army officer in sab se bahut age hota hai…wo koi bhi larai apne dimag se apne hauslo se jitta hai…so tell me agar aplog hume yaha bachane hi aye the to koi plan tha apke pas ke ap hume kaise bachayenge???[koi kuch nai bolta hai] main to samajhta tha ke aplogo chahe kitne bhi badtameez ho magar ap me wo kabiliyat hai ki age chalke aap ache officers ban sake magar aaj apki is harkat ne mujhe galat sabit kar diya….

Rajveer: Samarth I guess ab hume academy chalna chahiye waise bhi bahut der ho chuki hai…

inka itni der tak academy se bahar rehna sahi nahi hai….inse baki batei academy me ho sakti hai

[Samarth says nothing he was still fuming in anger] cadets sit in the jeep

Sare cadets bina kuch bole jeep me baith jate hai…after sum time all reach the academy… but waha pahhuchte hi the first person they met was colonel bikramjeet singh (the principal of the academy) now these cadets didn't no what to do….

Colonel: kya mai jaan sakta hu aplog is waqt kaha se aa rahe hai…

Ashi: kahi nahi sir humlog to bas yahi ground pe the….

Colonel: kya aplogo ko pata nahi hai ke lights out hone ke bad room se nikalna mana hai??? and cadet shankar kya mai jan sakta hu ke agar aplog ground pe the to apko ye chot kab aur kaise lagi???

Anu: sir wo….

Tabhi peeche se rajveer aur Samarth ate hai…

Samarth: sir isme inki koi galati nahi hai …

Colonel: kya matlab???

Samarth: sir ye log mere room ke board ke sath cher char kar rahe the….so in cadets ko maine hi punish kiya tha….and cadet shankar ko chot bhi meri gari se hi lagi hai…im really sorry sir ... darhesal jaldi me I lost control on jeep aur meri gari se inka accident ho gaya…

Colonel: that's ok officer..magar age se khayal rakhna aur gari dhyan se chalana

Samarth: mai khyal rakhunga sir

Colonel: cadets ap sab apne room me jao and Rajveer u please take care of cadet shankar…

Rajveer: I will sir…

Colonel: ok then I will take your leave…good night..

All: goodnight sir…

Samarth: Raj, tumhare haath se bhi kaafi khoon beh raha hai, please zara ise bhi dikha dena

Rajveer: yeah…

Rajveer Anu ko lekar hospital wing me jata hai….leaving cadets alone wid Samarth…

Abhi: sir hume bachane ke liye thx..

Samarth looks at them and then bina kuch bole apne kamre me chala jata hai aur baki cadets bhi chup chap apne apne rooms mein chale jate hai, Rajveer Anu ko lekar hospital wing jata hai uss waqt Ipshita duty per hoti hai, wo Anu ko u dekhar uske paas aa jati hai

Ipshita: are cadet shankar yeh chot kaise lagi, kitna khoon beh raha hai..

Rajveer: kuch nahi doc, bas wo chota sa accident hua tha..

[Ipshita raj ki taraf dekhti hai na hi usse kuch kehti hai na hi uske bat ka jawbab deti hai]

Ipshita: app yaha baithiye hum abhi aate hai..

[Rajveer Anu ko ahista se waha bithata hai]

Anu: oouuchh!!!

Rajveer: relax cadet shankar...

[ipshita waha aati hai aur Anu ki dressing kar deti hai]

Ipshita: yeh tablet le lena, you'll feel better

Anu: yes mam

[all this while Rajveer keeps looking at Ipshita, wondering at her strange behaviour]

Ipshita: aapka haath ab thik hai, so dont worry at all

Anu: ji mam, mam wo sir ko bhi kaafi chot lagi hai..

Rajveer: its ok cadet, I'm fine..

Anu: sir please, aap bhi dressing karva dijiye, I'll go to my room

[Anu uthti hai per uske haath mein kaafi pain hota hai, Rajveer use support deta hai aur phir wo apne kamre mien chali jaati hai, Raj wahi baitha hai, aur Ipshita uski dressing karti hai]

Rajveer: kya baat hai doc? Aap mujhse naraaz hai kya?

[Ipshita bas uski taraf dekhti hai per kuch kehti nahi aur dressing karti rehti hai]

Rajveer: kal bhi ap aise hi kamre se chali gai….agar anjaane mein mujhse koi galati hui hogi to I'm sorry …..

Ipshita: nahi to, wo darhasal kal raat maine aapki aur Vaishnaviji ki baat suni thi, aap kisi sameer ke bare mein baat kar rahe the…mujhe laga ki aplogo ko akela chor dena chahiye…isiliye…waise ye sameer kaun tha..???

Rajveer: sameer dost ki aad mein ek desh drohi tha, ek waqt tha jab wo mera acha dost hua karta tha, phir baad mein pata chala ki terrorist tha..

Ipshita: [to herself] iska matlab yeh mera sameer nahi hai, yeh to kisi terrorist ki baat kar rahe the, aur main samjhi thi ki wo..

Rajveer: kya hua? Kaha kho gaye?

Ipshita: nahi bas.. lijiye aapki dressing puri ho gayi, aap yeh tablet lijiye isse dard thoda kam hoga

Rajveer: shayad ab iski zaroorat nahi hai

Ipshita: kya matlab?

Rajveer:kuch nai…are main to aapko batana bhool hi gaya.. parso ko humne chahat kunal aur karan pritha ki sagaai karvane ka faisla kiya hai, waise to apno ko invitation ki zarorat nahi hoti ai per bhi you are invited

Ipshita: apna bhi kehte ho aur phir invite bhi karte ho

Rajveer: [smiles blushingly] to thik hai, phir aapko bhi tayyariyo mein hamari help karni hogi

Ipshita: [smiles] anytime Major

Rajveer: phir major?

Ipshita: ok ok, I mean Raj

Rajveer: that's much better

Ipshita: acha ab aap thoda aaram kijiye, aur kal hum khud aapka check up karne aayenge, kyunki hume to pata hai na to aap yeh dawayi lenge aur na hi apna khyaal rakhenge

Rajveer: ab jab itne log hai mera khyaal rakhne to mujhe apna khyaal rakhne ki kya zaroorat hai

[at this both of them just look at each other and smile]

Rajveer: ok then doc, kal milte hai

Ipshita: ok, gudnite and please take care

Rajveer: I will for sure… [smiles] gudnite

Ipshita: gudnite..

[raj apne roomki taraf jaata hai tabhi Vish use dekhti hai aur uske paas aati hai]

vish: Rajjjj…

Rajveer: ahista baba

Vish: kab laute? Aur yeh haatho pe bandage kaisi?

Rajveer: bas abhi abhi aaya hu aur yeh kuch nahi hua hai bas thodi si chot lagi hai..

Vish: what? Per kaise? Tum to base per gaye the na phir yeh sab?

[Raj tells Vish everything that had happened]

Vish: oh god! Yeh cadets bhi na, shukar hai kisi ko kuch hua nahi

Rajveer: ha, bas cadet shankar ko thodi si chot aayi hai

Vish: and hows she now?

Rajveer: she's fine

Vish: per un logo ko yeh kaise pata chala ki tum aur samarth uss waqt academy se bahar hai?

Rajveer: wahi to samajh nahi paa raha hu, isse pehle uss aadmi ka academy mein aana, phir inn logo ka humper hamla karna

Vish: iska seedha seedha yehi matlab hai ki unka koi aadmi hamare aas paas hi

Rajveer: ho sakta hai

Vish: filhaal to mujhe iss baat ki chinta hai ki kahi wo chahat aur kunal ki sagaai ki programme mien kuch na karde

Rajveer: don't worry aisa kuch nahi hoga

Vish: nahi Raj , tum ise itna lightly nahi le sakte

Rajveer: I know that, per hamare kuch bhi karne se uska asar iss academy pe padega, yaha ke cadets pe padega, jo ki hum nahi chahte hai…

Vish: ha inki safety bhi to hamari hi zimmedari hai

Rajveer: ha,lekin agar hamari identity aur humara mission inke samne a gaya to ye log dark e saye me jine lagenge…uske bad chahe hum kitni bhi security de hum inke dil se wo dark abhi nahi nikal payenge..isiliye hume job hi karna hai soch samajh ke karna hoga… anyways kaafi raat ho chuki hai hum iss bare mein kal baat karenge, filhaal tum bhi so jao..

[tabhi samne wali corridor se ipshita paas hoti hai aur raj ki nazar uspe padti hai, vish yeh dekhti hai]

Vish: [smiles naughtly] ahem ahem!!!

Rajveer: whhaattt????

[raj muskurata hai aur waha padi book uthata hai pretending to read it bina yeh dekhe ki usne book ulti pakdi hai]

Vish: Rajjj, mujhe yeh to pata tha ki tumhe kitabe padhne ka shouk hai

per yeh nahi pata tha ki tumhe ulti kitabe padhne ka bhi shouk hai

[raj realizes this and laughs at this]

Vish: kya baat hai, aaj kal bina baat ke muskurate ho, kisi ko dekhkar ekdum se khush hote ho to kabhi kehte kehte chup ho jate ho, aakhir baat kya hai?

Rajveer: [blushes] are kuch bhi to nahi, dekho raat bahot ho chuki hai , ab apne chote se dimag per jyada zor mat dalo aur jakar so jao

Vish: ha ha, [she pauses for a minute] ab kisi khass ke milne per hum to paraye hi lagenge na..

Rajveer: oh come on vish, ipshitaji koi khass nahi hai

Vish: per maine to kisi ka naam hi nahi liya

[Rajveer just smiles]

Vish: so I was right ha?

Rajveer: [laughs] tumse kuch bhi chupa nahi sakta

Vish: acha to ab tum mujhse bate bhi chupaoge kyou??par tum shayd bhul gaye ho ke chahe tum kitni bhi koshish karlo tum mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakte….

Rajveer: ha so to hai

Vish: so tell me? U love her

Rajveer: [blushes] mmm.. ha shayadd…I mean pata nahi I mean

Vish: shayad? Rajj.. Pehle kabhi bhi tumhe itna confused nahi dekha hai…

Rajveer: zindagi mein kuch cheeze pehli baar hi hoti hai

Vish: aur pyaar???

Rajveer: pyar bhi

Vish: atlast, tumne mana to sahi ki tumhe kisise pyar hai

Rajveer: mmm.. ha [smiles]

Vish: Ipshita wakaye mein bahot lucky hai

Rajveer: wo to hai..

[both of them laugh]

Vish: sach kahu Raj maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum kisi se itna pyar karoge,

Rajveer: socha to maine bhi nahi tha

Vish: I'm really very happy for you..

Rajveer: [smiles] acha ab so jao kaafi raat ho chuki hai

Vish: ha, chalo than byee, gudnite

Rajveer: gudnite

[vish bahar jati hai aur phir darwaze se jhakti hai]

Vish: hey Raj

[raj palatta hai]

Vish: sweet dreams!!!

[and she goes to her room]

Rajveer: [to himself] pagal hai puri… [laughs]

End of part-24

Comments awaited!!!

Regardz-

Varallikka & Farheen

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Posted: 18 years ago

👏 rocking part guys.................superb story ...............i just love your story........this is one of my most favorite ff 's and im reallly curious to know wats gonna happen next..............aww raj ka pyaar ka izhaar was chooooooooooo chweeeeeeet😳😆😆

plz continue sooooooooon!!!!!!!!!

luv,

vandu

Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 rocking part guys.................superb story ...............i just love your story........this is one of my most favorite ff 's and im reallly curious to know wats gonna happen next..............aww raj ka pyaar ka izhaar was chooooooooooo chweeeeeeet😳😆😆

plz continue sooooooooon!!!!!!!!!

luv,

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