The battle between you and me..Sajan SS(Part 5 Updated) (Pg 28) - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want vrushan os update and mrp-papa shekhawat now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

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i want vrushan os update and mrp-papa shekhawat now

First unres all your spots 😆😈 Tab tak I will get into that mood of writing on them.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HSFA

First unres all your spots 😆😈 Tab tak I will get into that mood of writing on them.


you know you cant blackmail me ? i always have my way
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U r a beauty and so is this chapter😛
Seriously yaar i loved it sooo sooo sooo much..

That pain,hatred but immense love between sajan was just so beautiful...This chap really touched my heart and thanks for the PM...will be waiting for next chap😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: additive_monaya


you know you cant blackmail me ? i always have my way

That means you won't? Waise abhi I only want to write on Sajan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Firstly i thought it is love after marriage..But it is my other fav..so let u know i need update of that FF too.. Now coming to this update.. i am completely blown away.. You really need to go and read previous updates n this one..you would know what i am talking about..You just took this Story to new level..Sajan's metting i was so impatient..n finally this whole update is Sajan.. Could i be more thankful to you ? 😆
Now Beginning totally skipped my heartbeat...Sajan intimacy.. Gunjan's thoughts.. perfection at its peak..Totally Loved how Gunjan is so upset with him..She should be.. I'm toh at Gunjan's side.. Till i get to know about Sam's side 😆

The dialogues totally made me shiver i would say.. I totally loved them Angel.. This is THE best update i ever read... I m still unable to find words to tell you.. k how much brilliant this was.. I want to copy each n every dialogue to tell u that i love them 😆

Gunjan lashing out at him ..and samrat trying to get one chance to make her agree on listening to him.. But i'm upset just like Gunjan is with him..so i won't say he should get it...n then gunjan going out..n samrat stopping her again..and Gunjan how could she say that she hates him when she loves him so much ? And there you go bravo girl ..for making gunjan say that all..that was PURE class.. 👏 Love how she said him to never come back again..n she stopped that to say him..he didn't stop at her call but she did.. I love her.. Why you want me to be against samrat? This update truly made him the one who should be blamed.. I hope there is something worth justifying.. coz i won't let you give him second chance with gunjan... unless he deserve it..even though i know he loves her a lot..but why did he left her at first place? it is unfair to her..unfair that he broke her every dream.. Gosh I cried :(


Kiya Chahye hai? Tm.. Gosh is sey zyada sweet reply kbhi ho sakta hai ? How lucky she is to hear.. 😆 My SaJan feelings i want them together lolz.. 🤪

Flashback Gosh had kar di.. it was magicall. Pure SaJan Class..

Loved how guilty he is..loved how you truly justified with her loneliness...

Gosh Pura kar do mjhey.. and Gunjan's feelings.. Totally Januable.. Was so lost in that scene..

She had every right to yell at him n he shouldn't have..but somehow okay that this way may be he is able to realise her..it is worth fighting for them...Loved how he knows that it is only his love which could bring happiness in her life back.. Love heals every wound...


God! Did that Gunjan said "Ghar Chalein?" They are not married haina? I'm confused 😕I want them to be... 😆 I love Gunjan in this SS..She is headstrong but not egoistic..she is lovely person.. Angel you better come up with really good justification of Samrat's stupidity.. because it all makes me sad... that she had to go through that.. It is painful... It wasn't her fault ..n still he left her.. i feel really bad..

Now BRAVO Angel ! You Rocked the whole Update Girl.. ! I was crying with SaJan.. i was smiling with tears with hope of seeing their reunion.. You really need to update this fast..and i m so proud of you girl this Update is best.. everything is amazing..the way you described their feelings.. Perfectly situational.. I could watch them... feel them.Thank You Thank You for making me relive with sajan..whom i miss so much..This was just Stunningly Perfect Update Sweetie.. I m waiting for such surpirses now .. <3

Love you So Much.. and you should know this comment is still not justifying how AMAZING your update is ..IT WAS JUST AWESOME...🤗

Your Sweetheart <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MoNayaAshiq4evr

👏Firstly i thought it is love after marriage..But it is my other fav..so let u know i need update of that FF too.. Sakoon nahi hai na?😆 Of course I will update it next.

Now coming to this update.. i am completely blown away.. You really need to go and read previous updates n this one..you would know what i am talking about..You just took this Story to new level..Sajan's metting i was so impatient..n finally this whole update is Sajan.. Could i be more thankful to you ? 😆 No you must be very thankful 😆 Yeah I know that I added a lot of emotions and actually loved penning it down. It makes me so happy to know that you loved it<3 I love you a lot<3 🤗
Now Beginning totally skipped my heartbeat...Sajan intimacy.. Gunjan's thoughts.. perfection at its peak..Totally Loved how Gunjan is so upset with him..She should be.. I'm toh at Gunjan's side.. Till i get to know about Sam's side 😆 I was really excited about this part and have to show that passion and intimacy between them. I always wanted to write such equation between Sajan. 😆 Then beware my dear you would be stuck after reading the next part 😉

The dialogues totally made me shiver i would say.. I totally loved them Angel.. This is THE best update i ever read... OMG!!😲 You serious? This is the best compliment that a writer could ever get<3 I am so over whelmed Sweetheart<3 You made my day. I would make sure that you enjoy the next update as well. 🤗 ❤️ I m still unable to find words to tell you.. k how much brilliant this was.. I want to copy each n every dialogue to tell u that i love them 😆 Bas karo darling. Thanks a lot for saying this<3

Gunjan lashing out at him ..and samrat trying to get one chance to make her agree on listening to him.. But i'm upset just like Gunjan is with him..so i won't say he should get it...n then gunjan going out..n samrat stopping her again..and Gunjan how could she say that she hates him when she loves him so much ? And there you go bravo girl ..for making gunjan say that all..that was PURE class.. 👏 It just came smoothly and I went with the flow. Honestly,I feel so happy to have it come out of the way I wanted. 😳 Love how she said him to never come back again..n she stopped that to say him..he didn't stop at her call but she did.. I love her.. Why you want me to be against samrat? This update truly made him the one who should be blamed.. I hope there is something worth justifying.. coz i won't let you give him second chance with gunjan... unless he deserve it..even though i know he loves her a lot..but why did he left her at first place? it is unfair to her..unfair that he broke her every dream.. Gosh I cried :( Lol relax darling I am sure you will ab able to side with samrat as well. Next update will have samrat's pov as well. So I hope their relationship will be justified. And you will be pleased. Although I would say that its complicated but still there's always room for dialogue especially when you are in love 😳


Kiya Chahye hai? Tm.. Gosh is sey zyada sweet reply kbhi ho sakta hai ? How lucky she is to hear.. 😆 My SaJan feelings i want them together lolz.. 🤪

Flashback Gosh had kar di.. it was magicall. Pure SaJan Class.. Sajan<3

Loved how guilty he is..loved how you truly justified with her loneliness... Guilt and loneliness is with what they are left with...

Gosh Pura kar do mjhey.. and Gunjan's feelings.. Totally Januable.. Was so lost in that scene.. I am glad you loved these dialogues<3 Even I did. ❤️

She had every right to yell at him n he shouldn't have..but somehow okay that this way may be he is able to realise her..it is worth fighting for them...Loved how he knows that it is only his love which could bring happiness in her life back.. Love heals every wound... Love is the strongest feeling...it both constructs and destructs an individual. I hope to show it both ways in this SS. 😳


God! Did that Gunjan said "Ghar Chalein?" They are not married haina? I'm confused 😕I want them to be... 😆 I love Gunjan in this SS..She is headstrong but not egoistic..she is lovely person.. Angel you better come up with really good justification of Samrat's stupidity.. because it all makes me sad... that she had to go through that.. It is painful... It wasn't her fault ..n still he left her.. i feel really bad.. Oho control Madam you are going at a very fast speed 🤣 It is just a build up for the next update. I will don't wry. Gunjan has made herself strong on the outside but internally she needs a shoulder to weep on a hug to be comforted. I would no one of them was.

Now BRAVO Angel ! You Rocked the whole Update Girl.. ! I was crying with SaJan.. i was smiling with tears with hope of seeing their reunion.. Awww Sweetheart<3🤗You really need to update this fast..and i m so proud of you girl this Update is best.. everything is amazing..the way you described their feelings.. Perfectly situational.. I could watch them... feel them.Thank You Thank You for making me relive with sajan..whom i miss so much..This was just Stunningly Perfect Update Sweetie.. I m waiting for such surpirses now .. <3 Its my pleasure always to make you happy. I am so so happy that I was able to write this update. It became my favourite too.

Love you So Much.. and you should know this comment is still not justifying how AMAZING your update is ..IT WAS JUST AWESOME...🤗 Uff Allah I am so over whelmed<3 Thanks a lot. Love you loads 🤗 Literally smiling with tears<3 Literally.

Your Sweetheart <3 You are simply the best 😳

Thank you..thank you..thank you...thank you<3 The best comment ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...

Superb Amazing !! <33

Thanks a lot Mallu for liking.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HSFA

Thank you..thank you..thank you...thank you<3 The best comment ❤️My Pleasure <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Fati I just read part 5 and kudos to you.. I really like the way you describe all the entire backdrop, the emotions, the descriptions .. Feels as if the reader is just there looking at the whole thing happening in front of them! I could feel the intensity

Keep it up a very good job :D And congrats dear heard about you getting into your choice of school :D told ya you had nothing to worry about

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