The battle between you and me..Sajan SS(Part 5 Updated) (Pg 28) - Page 21

Thank u for pm me.
Beautiful update loved every bit of it.the emotion was just perfect u really very well described it. N wow for the diaulogues it was superb.hope to see sajan reunion very soon.n yea plz update love after marriage asap plz.

wonderful upd dear 👏 u penned down superbly 👏 enjoyed whole upd of our SG😳😳

Originally posted by: romiebee2002

Amazing Fati I just read part 5 and kudos to you.. I really like the way you describe all the entire backdrop, the emotions, the descriptions .. Feels as if the reader is just there looking at the whole thing happening in front of them! I could feel the intensity

Keep it up a very good job :D And congrats dear heard about you getting into your choice of school :D told ya you had nothing to worry about

Fatiii i'm in bliss..
1stly thanks for this state of mind..
☺️☺️
obviuosly it was not romantic..but so real..you made Sajan so alive!was so easy to feel and connect as a reader..
you know what i'm rediscovering you..i knew u as a great writer..
but here i think you have outperformed yourself with your abilities as a writer..this one is FLAWLESS..just like SAJAN..
you have totally justified all the emotions,the intensity the love quotient with the perfect narration..
it was touchy..
Gunjan's dialogues touched the deepest corner of my heart and eyes got teary.but you justified every emotions of her..bang on confrontation..
its good to see how you made Samrat open and patient enough..could feel his pains too..how he must have felt to hear those heart wrenching words from gunjan..to see his gunjan cry and he being helpless..Very complex feelings expressed so gracefully by you
loved the mini flashback that you gave..that intensified the update showing the contrast between past and present condition..but the person and his feelings being the same.

looking forward to see Samrat's reason..i know he is hell bent of getting back his gunjan back..true love is something which never fades or changes with time..he has that..he must be having some justified reasons to leave gunjan like that..
update soon ok..and keep rocking..👏
and i'll stick to my statement..vacation for u ppl..treat for us reader..😳

Originally posted by: ritzsammy

Thank u for pm me.
Beautiful update loved every bit of it.the emotion was just perfect u really very well described it. N wow for the diaulogues it was superb.hope to see sajan reunion very soon.n yea plz update love after marriage asap plz.

fati sis , me gussa hun tumse😡, tumne phirse lovea fter marriage ke update ko delay kar dia,
coming to the update, it was superb👏, sajan's feelings were very well depicted😳

nice update~~~~