pyaar ya dosti?(KR&SS FF)chap 6 updatd - Page 7

Originally posted by: -spongy-

nice banner renu

i like it but next time try merging the pics together...

OKIE

avoid square pictures... 😃😃

hoep u dont mind... 😕

thank u ...

and okies..as i jst strt editng so don't knw much abt it..

and ya thanks for the suggstn i will keep it in mind...😃

Originally posted by: anjali22

awesome update

thank u...

Originally posted by: pinkypanrocks

nice one...waiting for the nxt...

thank u...😊

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Amazing update love it kr moment was so cute but last me rey gussa ho gaya n precap to bahut intresting he

thank u...

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

rey help her brother swayan as he is injured and forget the keys in sharon house...
kriya allowed to stay in her house... they have a past... interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me...

thank u...

yup will cntnue soon and will pm u ...

Originally posted by: -spongy-

nice update renu

loved it

im really sorry yaar for the comment

but i GTG and study... 😭

u understand na... 🤔

whenever i'm free

i'll try to edit.. 😊

really sorry...

thank u ishu...

i undrstnd ..studies are more imp...

will be wait for ur full cmmnt...

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom update but short update...

nic precap ...

kriya still loves rey...

wt happend in d past..

thank u...

yup she still loves him...to knw it u have to wait ...

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Nice update. . .
Haiye KR part was cute. . .
Hmm. . .KR KA PAST?KYA HOGA?
Lets wait and see. .

Update d nxt part soon

thanku ...

yup u have to wait and see...

will update it today...

(this banner is my new try do tell me hows is it?)

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Aftr a sleep less and choas filled night finlly sharon got sum tme to sleep...she clses her eyes and was abt to fall asleep ..but suddnly her phn strtd ringng ..and it was swayam..she pickd the call...
swayam(shoutng):sharonnn
sharon:yup ..i can hear..am not deaf..don't scream...
swayam:ya ..i knw dat..but please save me frm ur BFF yaar..she is gonna killng me..and why the hell you people keep crckt bats in ur house?..any ways.. please opn the door of ur room ..
sharon:wat? ur at my home?
swayam:yupe..now no more qustn please opn de door ..she is back of me...
sharon :okay... okay 1 min...

sharon opn the door and see that kriyam runing all ovr de house...and she went in between swayam & kriya...and was tryng to stop kriya..
sharon:sweetu dear wat u dng ...he is ur bro not ur enemy..why are u tryng to hit him with this?
kriya:oh shar ..pls hat ja..i have to teach a lessn to him so dat he doesn't repeat such mistkes...(tryng to hit swayam)
swayam: please save me sharon...(chckng her 4r top to bottom..sharon was wearng a shrt dress) BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk too hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
sharon:thanks..
kriyai(who was notce all this):oye.. hello mr.swayam shekawath...how many tmes i have told u not to flrt wid my best frnd?u r gng to get two xtra for this...(trys to hit him but sharon stops her)
sharon:hey sweetu chill yaar..it okay na...lev it ..
kriya:arey shar u knw na?how much i was worried abt dis stupd yestrdy...wat if sum thng happns to him..wat shld i answr mom &dady?
sharon:sweetu chill drlng ..are u gng to kill him r wat?
kriya: aja tho ye gaya meri hat mey...(swayam runs frm dere..and kriya runs behnd him shutng..)
here rey is distrub by all dis..irrtd rey cmes to sharon room and seeing all this he says..
rey: wat de hell guys?wats gng on here? will sum one xpln?(swayam runs behnd rey&hides)
swayam:wo acvtlly ..my sis is full on angry on me abt yestrdy fght...now she wants to teach me a lessn yaar..pls save me frm her ..
rey:hey swayam tu apni behan si dartha hey?wat dis man?
swayam:u don't abt her yaar..agar gussa aya tho maa chandi hojathi hey meri behan...
rey:(to himself)muje patha hey ki wo shrt temprd hey..muje nahi tho aur kisko patha hoga meri kriyu ke baremey..to swayam :oh really ..i don't knw yaar..
kriya:hello xcuse me agar tumari dicuss hoga tho hatogey ..i need to talk to my bro..
swayam to rey :no yaar..she is gng to hit me hard...pls kuch kari na..(rey cng his crckt bat in kriya's hand..)
rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw wat i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gve a evil smle andnoded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..
rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
kriya:haha..rey stop it pls.. stop it rey...haha
rey:then gve my bat back to me...
kriya:nooo..
rey:then am not gng to stop..
sharon 2 swayam:they are lukng cute na? it had been a vry lng tme since i have seen them like this..
swayam(lost in sharon's beauti):ya ture ...agreed...
(sharo looks at swayam&swayam looks at sharon...swaron share LLHH momnt...in dis ticklng prcss acdntly de bat in kriya's hand hits rey's head...hearng the rey shutng swaron come to there sense..)
kriya:oh god ..rey are you okay.? am sorry really sry...i didn't mean to do that..am sry..(cupid his face and strtd blow in de place wer de bat hitd..both share a LLHH..soon rey coms in his snse)
rey (tryng to remve her hands off his face):no its okay..am fine..

kriya(tears strtd making way frm her eyes):no rey am really sorry..

rey:no its okay...

sharon to her self:why sweetu is feelng so sad as if she had cmmtd the biggst mistke evr? what ever..(she truns 2 swayam):swayam kya tu pls neche jakara ice leavogey ?
swayam:ya sure...(swayam went frm dere)
sharon:hey sweetu chill..bro is alrght ..(swayam was back wid ice&putd deice head on de plce wer rey got hurtd..)
rey:ouchhh..hey swayam its paing yaar...
swayam:okay sorry sorry...BTW thanks dude at last becos of u my sis forgot evrythng...
rey(gves a smle):no prb..
kriya: no..not so soon bhai ... ur not gng to escpe so esly...(gvs an evl smle.)
swayam strtd rung &kriya ran behnd him..cng dis sharey lukd at each othr and smld...

precap:

swaron in lost jungle..

swayam:y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?

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rey:akey (eyes)band karu tho vahi dheki thi hey ..kolu tho vahi dhekithi hey...

kriyansh dancng on dil se rey...

kriya :sorry rey ...am sorry..i want you back in my life but i can't get you back...but rey ..wat wuld you do if ur in my plce?if you wer askd to choose one thng b/w frndshp &love wat wuld you choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. but am really helpless rey...please try to understnd me...(and she strtd rung frm dere)

do new entrs bi honewaley hey rajat shekawath..and reetu signhania so stay tund...😃

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luv,

renu