pyaar ya dosti?(KR&SS FF)chap 6 updatd - Page 5

Awesome update loved it
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nice start . . .
Continue soon

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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Superb update. . .
Nice start. .
Waiting to read more. .

Update d nxt part soon.

thank u,,,

will update it today...😊

Originally posted by: sanjana_D3

Love it :)

Cant wait to read the next part 😃

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Originally posted by: kriapatel

amazing
love it
rey's convo with kria when he is sleeping is sooo cute
n then his condition in last when he is with kids

was so funny

thank u ...😃

Originally posted by: sumimita

wow..

it is outstanding...

awsome

superb...

can't wait for the nxt update..

pls update it soon...

thank u..

happi that u people liked my wrk so much ...😃

will update it soon...

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

great start
superb update
thanks for d pm

update next part soon

thank u...

and ur welcome abt the pm...

chapter 2:I WILL BE LOVING YOU REY

kriyansh were still in the same postn...still lost in each othr..but got distrub by the sund made by the kids...both came into sense..but are still in the same postn...
rey : kriyu ..i mean kriya ur okay?
kriya:ya am fne...
he help her to get strghtnd..jst den sharon came ...
sharon:bro tu ghar jara hena?sweetu ko bi leja...tekey

rey :okay ..i'll..chalo kriya lets go...
kriya :ya okay..bye shar ..gud n8 drlng...
sharon :gud n8 dear ..take care of ur bhai & urself too...
kriya:i'll dear...(both of dem hug...&rey aslo hug sharon)
sharon:bye bro ..bye sweetu ..
kriyansh:bye...

kriyansh were out side the huse..seeing swayam's cndtn kriya culdn't cntrl herslf ..and she strtd cryng ..rey culdn't see her cryng ..went near her &hugd her..she aslo hugd him back..

rey(still hugng her):hey come on tumari bhai ko kuchi nahi huva..he is okay na..don't cry kriyu...i can't see you like this...
kriya(brkng de hug& cryng):i was thnk ki what wuld happn if i didn't get any call frm the party...he nvr lstn to me i said him 1000 tme not be so implusv...but he nvr lstn ...whatshld i do with dis guy?...usey esi halthi me nahi dheki sakitha hu...
rey :hey chill ..don't worry..look at me ..meri cnditn dheko kasi hey?am i cryng ..no rght ?am lukng like joker rght?
kriya(gvng a smle):no ..u don't..evn in dis cndtn you look cute...
rey: really? me tumey cute lag rahahu? (befre she culd ans he cut her off)any ways...its too late lets go home...
kriya:yupe k..
kreyam went to there aprmnt..rey help kriya in takng swayam to dere flat...& plcd him on de bed in swayam's room...
rey(checkng his pockts): oh shit...i left my flat key at chachi's huse...oh god wat to do now?
kriya:hey rey its okay ..don't worry..shar wahi hey na she will get de key wen she is cmng trwm...
rey :ya but till den wer shld i be??withouth flat keys i can't go into flat rght?
kriya:hey rey u can be in my flat ..as mom &dady are out of statn u can be in our flat till shar cmes...
rey :are u sure?
kriya:yupe ..ya..u can be in de geust room...
rey :okay...
kriya:what r u gng do now?
rey : i jst want to take a shwr...culd pls tell me wherr is de wash room?
kriya:ya sure...cme i'll show u ..
(kriya take rey to geust room &shows him de wash room and levs...rey took shwr ...as he doesn't have an xtra shrt ..he thught to ask kriya to gve him swayam's shrt...at prsnt he is shrtless)
rey:hey kriya..culd u pls gve me one of de swayam's shrt?
kriya( who was with swayam removng his shoes off..hears rey ):ya sure rey one min am cmng...
kriya took one of swayam's shrt and was abt to go de room wer rey was...&rey was cmng out to take de shrt..dey both bang into each othr..both fall 2 de grund..kriya on de grund&rey on de top of her and shared a LLHH momnt...aftr sum tme both cme into der sense...
rey got up & helpd kriya to get up..kriya's eyes widend by cng rey as he was shrtless...rey took one step forwrd..kriya moved backwrd...dis prcss cntnd till she hit de wall..
rey :for god sake will u pls stop movng back?
kriya :hmmm.ya...wo actvlly...thanks rey.. thanks for evry thng u have done today...u have helpd me alot..
rey:no thanks kriya...
kriya:u r same as u wer in de past...
rey (in rude tone) :oh pls...i don't want to talk abt de past..it jst gvs me pain wen i rembr it...😡
by then kriya's eye became wet...
rey:u have hurt me a lot kriya..a lot..(took de shrt frm her hand&left into de room bangng de door in angry)..
kriya to herslf:i nevr want to hurt u rey...but what clud i do i have no optn left...sry rey ...i luv rey & i will be luvng u always...if posbl pls 4rgve me rey...
so here de chap ends...

PRECAP:

swayam:BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk dam hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
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rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw what i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gave an evil smile and noded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)

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nice one...waiting for the nxt...