pyaar ya dosti?(KR&SS FF)chap 6 updatd - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

veryy nic concept ...

plzz update fastt

thank u ..

will update in few mins


Originally posted by: zk456789

Nice intro do continue soon

thank u ..will cntnue soon,,,


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kriapatel

Intresting concept
kr are dancer n
swaron are singer
thats amazing

cont. sooN

thanks..

yup..kr are dancrs and ss are singers..

will contnue...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Superb CS. . .
I liked it. . .

Update the 1st part soon.

thank u...

will update it few mintns...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

cs is great and concept... amazing... do continue soon and pm me...

thank u ...

will contnue ..

and defo pm u

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

cs sounds interesting😳

thank u...

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha

seems interesting
continue soon and do pm! 😃

thank u ...

will pm u for sure...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

thank u ...

Originally posted by: anushka1129

interesting cs...
update soon :)

thanku ..will update it in few mins..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
CH1: THE PARTY FIGHT
"wat de hell...bro ney peri se fight kiya?"shutd kriya in angry...😡"i told him not to do so but he never listn to me...okay i'll cme and get him home &thanks for infrmng "
(she hang de phn)...
(that night swayam went to a clg frnd's party where some one cmmntd abt kriya ..hearng them he became angry..ofcurse yaar possve indan bhai jo hey... so strtd fightng with them...in de fight he got injurd ...and fell to de grund ..sum one in de party cald kriya from swayam phone and infrmd her that her bro got injurd whle fightng with sum people...)
she made an phone call to sharon who her best frnd...
sharon:hey sweetu wat happn esi tme pe kyu call kiya?any prob?bolo dear..
kriya(cryng):shar...bhai got injurd whle fightng in de party...mom aur dady bi out of twn hey...muje kuchi samaj me nahi arahahey..wat to do...

sharon: sweetu clam dwn kuchi nahi hoga..jst chill...ur bro will be okay..are u wid him rght now?
kriya:no shar..me ab tak vaha nahi gihe ..wo kisiney muje cal karakey bathayata aur ab muje samaj me nahi araha hey ki how to get der..kyu ki ghar me ghadi nahi hey..kya tu aasakathi hey?

Sharon:no dear..tu janithi hey na me aapani chachi ghar me hu chacha aur chachi out of statn gayehe hey so I have luk aftr der kids.hey tu rey ko lejana..wo ghar per hi hey..he can help u..
kriya:rey ko ?nahi shar..me tumara bhai ko nahi lega sakithi..
Sharon:oh god but y taanu? U can take him jst cal him ask him once
kriya:shar I said no..I don't want to gve him any trble
Sharon:oh god..tekey I will come.but pehile tum meri chachi ghar awo rey ko lekey okay?me phn raki thi hu u jst cal him okay?muje bohat kam hey k cu dear..
kriya:per shar..(bfr she culd say sum thng sharon hangd de phn..)
kriya :oh god ab muje rey ko call karana hey.karu ya na karu ..don't knw he wil pick my call or not.Okay kriya thnk postively he will help u because he is bhai's best frnd na?okay now call him tell him ..
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She dald rey number..here rey is in deep sleep he gets disturb by her call see kriya's number ..picks the call
Rey(in half sleep):hello baat cutter... kyu meri jeena haram karahihey?u don't have any othr wrk?why don't let me sleep?do I don't have the rght to sleep.. ?
kriya:oye ..hello sleeping beauty get up .. I need ur help man get uppp..
Rey(still in half sleep) :Err...wat ?wat help do you need at this time?
kriya:wo bro is injurd..(she tell him all de stry&strts cryng)ghar me ghadi nahi hey I don't knw how to get der now..pls meri help karana..pls rey.
Rey(totally waking upand sit on the bed):hey kriyu.. I mean kriya don't worry ..pls mati rona i wil take u there.. 5 min me prkng area ajav (both kriyam&sharey famlies live in same aprmnt and are famly frnds)

kriya:thank u rey ..thank u so much I'l be der in 5 mins.
(both of dem hangd de call &got readycame dwn to parkng lot ..both sat in de car and rey strtd de car..)
kriya:rey shar ne hum dono ko tumari chachi ki ghar aney keli kaha hey..thn for there will go frm der..
Rey:okay..(rey notce dat kriya is still cryng.he held kriya's hand wch is on her lap.. )hey chill kuchi nahi hoga tumari bhai ko
kriya:hope so usey kuchi nahi ho.
Soon dey rechd sharey's chachi's huse..
Sharon:hey rey tu eni bachonoko dhekalena..me aur sweetu .swayam ko leaney jathey hey
Rey :no way sis..me eni rakashasho ka dayan nahi rakaney wala ..and top on to that this kids don't lyk me
Sharon:arey rey ..they r sleepng and so dey won't truble u ..u have to jst see that they don't get up.thats it..
kriya :pls rey..do it for me..
Rey :okay ..but come soon
kriya:aur rey apana car ki keys muje dena pls..
Rey(thrwng car keys): okay yelo
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krisha lev 4rm der & rech the party plce and sucssflly mangd to take swayam to de car.
kriya:hey shar tum bhai ki frst aid kardo ..me car strt karithi hu
Sharon:okay dear..
She cleand swayam's wunds&put band aid on his wunds
they wer back to sharey's chachi's huse..krisha went to the door and rang the bell..when the door was opend and the momnt they saw rey they both strtd laughng by seeing him in that cndtn ..🤣.there was food all ovr his body..&the kids were runs all ovr the huse...
rey:i told u i can't handle dis rakashas..they jst irrtd me..luk wat they have done...
sharon :chill bro ..they are kids..they don't know anythng...okay ..now am gng to cntrl dem...
sharon went to the kids and srtd talkng to dem ..mean while kriya kept her leg on sum food stuff and was abt to fall ...she clse her eyes in the fear of fallng.. .
but a pair of strng arms caught her...she opnd her eyes to see that rey had savd her frm fallng...and the next moment her eyes were lost in his chocolate brwn eyes..and he was also in same state...they both share an LLHH momnt...

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precap:
rey:u have hurtd me a lot kriya ..a lot..(he took de shrt 4rm her hand&left into de room bangng de doorbehnd him in angry)..
kriya to herslf:i nevr wanted to hurt u rey...but what clud i do?? i have no optns left...sry rey ...i luv rey and i will be luvng u always..

so hows dat? hope u all lykd it...aftr readng pls do cmmnt abt it ..i need al ur feed back guys...igrnce spellng and grmmrcl mistkes..pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...and criticism and suggestn are always welcome... for pm's add me as ur buddy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Superb update. . .
Nice start. .
Waiting to read more. .
Update d nxt part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Love it :)
Cant wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
amazing
love it
rey's convo with kria when he is sleeping is sooo cute
n then his condition in last when he is with kids
was so funny
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
wow..
it is outstanding...
awsome
superb...
can't wait for the nxt update..
pls update it soon...
Edited by sumimita - 12 years ago

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