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roshreb thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabs emotional update...that karan is really "cheap"..hate him..love how both virat and jeevika stand for manvi specially the way jeevika confronted karan without thinking of how the family will take it...poor manvi she is going through so much... but i want her to be stronger when dealing wiz that karan...continue soon!!
Edited by roshreb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I split the part into two this time, part two will be coming soon, before Friday hopefully coz I will be gone in the weekend, I will send PM's after that. Thank you guys for all the comments and likes, it really means a lot to me. 😊

Chapter 6 i: Rude Realizations

Virat's POV

"I am leaving Virat," those lines just echoed in my head as I drove down every street of Chandighar looking for her. I tried her phone millions of times but all in vain, she left, the feeling finally sank in as I hit the last street and didn't see her, it wasn't a good feeling, I wanted her back, to hold her and tell her how much I missed her, all these emotions were taking over me. Was bhai right, am I falling in love with her. After she left, I was restless, I couldn't even go to sleep without her by my side, everything just felt empty, I thought I was with her because she needed me, but reality was I needed her just as much. Everything thing about her, her laugh, her smile, her selflessness for everyone close to her, I missed it all and it was killing me inside that she was nowhere to be found. I needed her back. She had been gone for less than 3 hours now and I felt like I hadn't taken a breath for days. "You never realize the importance of something before you lose," the saying was so right, this entire time Manvi was with me, I was so focused on getting her to be strong and face Karan that I ignored my own feelings, and now all I want to do is hold and tell her how much she means to me. I don't know if I am falling in love with her, but I just want her back with me. I felt a big rock fall in my heart as I hit the last empty street. It was already midnight, where would she go. I banged on the horn in frustration and turned the car around.

Manvi's POV

I walked in the hotel room, it was small, but it would do for a couple of days. I hope to god Virat or Di won't find me before I figure out where I am going. I looked at the picture of Me and Di that I brought, we were so young and happy. Oh how I wish we could go back to that time, just playing without a care for the world. I missed her so much already, no one could ever take her place for me, she was truly my Jeevika. I walked over to go to bed, the cold air around me as I laid on the bed was a rude awakening for me. He wasn't here anymore. I missed his touch. I felt so protected when he was with me, the cold air that replaced where his hands would have been made me feel so vulnerable. My eyes watered up at the loneliness until my conscience kicked in. I was carrying a baby, I had to stay happy, I couldn't fall weak. I cupped my stomach, "Baby, I am sorry. It's just for a couple months, by the time you come, I will have everything figured out." I smiled, the baby was my one left happiness, the one thing no one could take from me. I fell asleep talking to it and didn't even realize when someone broke into my room. I felt metal against my arm and jerked up. Him, he was on top of me again. I pushed him hard. "Karan, please leave me alone, I don't want anything to do with you!." My eyes fell to the object in his hand. "I am getting that baby out of you, we can do this the hard way or the easy way. Abort the baby Manvi or I will get rid of both of you forcefully," he gritted in anger. I was fuming now. How much more could he hurt me? I took everything he did to me because I wanted to keep my Di's sasural happy but this time it wasn't me, he was attacking my baby. I slapped him, something I should have done a long time ago. He raised the knife at me cursing and I ducked and twisted his arm. I felt a sharp pain in my leg and saw that he had stabbed it. I had to be stronger, I had been weak for too long. I finally gathered the courage to punch him, he fell to the ground screaming in pain as his nose bled. I tried getting up and looked at the pool of blood around me streaming from my legs. "Virat, help," I barely whispered as if he could hear me. I was so used to him taking care of me that I had become dependent on it. I couldn't do that anymore, I had to be independent, I had to leave him to his life, he deserved better. I limped helplessly to the receptionist barely able to explain to her what happened. After that a cloud of darkness surrounded me, I fell to the ground screaming in pain and felt myself losing consciousness. NO! Manvi you can't faint, the baby, you have to be strong for the baby," I kept trying to tell myself. It didn't work, the last thing I heard was ambulances surrounding the hotel, after that everything just went black.

Edited by nimi00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww an update nimi soo soon didnt expect it thanx for that surprise 😃
and virat's pov soo emotional clearly showing he is in love with her and without her he is nothing and no different in her case she is incomplete without him two souls complete together 😃
and that karan wth how dare he attack manvi he is such a heartless stuff ya 😡😡
hope that manvi and her baby both are fine now and the fact that manvi fought bke is awesome finally she spoke against him 👍🏼
waiting for the next one update soon 😃
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb dear
fab part bt want more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Virat and maanvi's pov was superb
Karan attacked maanvi
Hope she will fine
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved their both pov
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update Nimi
awww feel bad for both
they love each other in such away, their own happiness doesn't mean to them
hope manvi is fine
love the whole update
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update without her he was feeling restless
and otherside she was alone and want to become strong
for her baby but want happen her updaate soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an emotional update! loved it... what happened to manvi? will virat find her?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omggg
im so excited now after reading this
ufff karan is so cruel he needs to get a life
he deserved that punch n much more too
hope virat gets to manvi now n shes safe
Very eager now
plzzz update quickly 😉

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