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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Loved it so much. Khushi as a bully was interesting. Nice that she watches Iss Pyaar too. 😆

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chaitali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Aww that was cute. Bholu. .haha lol while she's kissing she remembers dat barun also sd i lv u damn it. ...pagal

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Your every story has got a refreshing concept. I love it the most when Arnav is not projected in a stereotypical role of an arrogant business tycon (modelled after a typical Mills and Boons hero). Khushi's role as the primary school teacher is great.

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

= Part 1 =

The DM sounded so stern and strangely funny when he stuck at "Sir".

The scene where Khushi thought that "Chhote" was a cute, little kid was the most hilarious. 🤣

Bholu. 🤣

The last line where Arnav said that the note was actually for Khushi, was brilliant.

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

= Part 2 =

This part was so, so romantic.

I loved the way both of them confessed about their love for each other. It was so surreal.

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

I'm glad that I came across your Index and got to read your amazing stories.

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Wow, this was such a cute and adorable two shot.

Loved all the dialogues you used, they complemented the updates perfectly.

The updates were written brilliantly and a wonderful read,

Loved the two shot, awesome writing and a pleasure to read xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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Abi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Wow! so good... love it so much!

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Khushi bullying Arnav 🤣
And behti naak wala Bholu 🤣
It was funny and cute :)

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

amazing ts... So cute... Aww khushi used to bully arnav and now they love each other.. So cute... Some scenes made me nostalgic as it reminded if IPK and khushi the way khushi used ti bully arnav again reminded of the way khushi used to prank on arnav... Very well written.. Loved it