TS:Bully Khushi, Note page 25:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG that was sooo cute CC...
dedication pd kar meri aakhon mein Khushi ke aanso the...



Even I Love u a lot Astha Di... 🤗

U r simply an amazing writer bacha...
Start to end a perfect piece of writing...
Simply flawless...

Arnav was sooo rude in d beginning n Khushi had to lie to him... 😆

Adhya was cute... 😃

Khushi thought Chotte was a kid... 🤣 🤣 🤣

I cant believe Khushi used to bully ASR when he was a kid... 😲 😲 😲

well only our Khushi can do this with him... 😆

Arnav likes her...dat was cute but wat abt Khushi?????

dont u dare say that u will not continue dis OS...
I will kill u if will not post d next part...

CC u gave Astha Di her Arnav wat abt me???? 😭

A completely refreshing n mast OS... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
hatts off 2 ur writing CC...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
What the...



Was tht 4 me??????



Tht ws indeed THE BEST SURPRISE EVER...

I'm so overwhelmed at d moment that I'm falling short of words ryt nw...

U consider me as u elder sis, I knew bt I nvr knw tht I meant sooo much 2 u...

I'm truly honoured... 😭 😭 😭 (Khushi k aansu..)

4 those who dsnt knw abt dis, d character belong 2 my real life. Ashu is my nick name, I'm a Primary Teacher n Aadhya is my fav student... Only ppl who were fictitious were Anjali n MY ASR... Ohhh!!! I'm so longing 2 hv him in my lyf... (Basicallly, waiting 4 my ASR) 😉

I wnt say THANK YOU 2 U as I will insult ur emotions doing tht... So, I wud jst say dese few lines...

Tera Mujhse hai pehle ka nata koi, Yuhi nhi dil lubhata koi...

Jane tu ya jaane na, Maane tu ya maane na...

U r a swthrt CC n I Luv U, Avni n Pooji... U guys r my oxygen... 😆

All I cn gv u is dis at d moment...


Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
res for pooji:)

edited...

bully khushi🤣
u r amaing yar 😃😃
jab dkho kuch naya 😉😉
damn yar yahan sab kuch alag hai
hamesha arnav pareshan krta hai iss bar khushi lolll😆😆
u scared me in school encounter 😲😲

me need a second part jaldii😡😡

lappy kharab hai so itna mein adjust kar 😆😆

love u cc ji
2 oh awesum nikli re👏👏⭐️☺️
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for dhanno:)

comment of Dhanno...

again basanti rocked...as usual dhanno shocked😲😆😆

back to back os...i m loving it...yesss😃😃

fantastic...fabulous...fantabulous...😆😆

back to the os...after reading the title i just thought...wow this khushi is my 2nd ver...u know thoka thoki...🤣
but she is cute...so damn cute...
she was watching IPK😆...hyyy ...she also got lost in sobti's eyes...just like us...😳☺️
inspection...ya ya aise hi hota hai...u know when i was in school teachers always said"today is inspection day...so plz aj class mein tik k baith jana"🤣
poor khushi...😆...sobti ka craze hum sab ko kaha le ke jaye ga?😆
khushi and anjali are frnds...trust me basanti...the chotte part was hilarious...i m laughing like a idiot damn it😆😆
specially this line
"Humne socha nai tha ke Chhote itne bade honge"
crazy gal😆😆😆...they knew each other?...wow...bholu😆...
last line was awesome basanti...
"By the way, Khushi, that note was for you not for your bench mate"
awesome...damn good...
as usual

awww gime hugsss...tight wali...

i love u re...

but i m not done yet...i want more...more...more...more se bhi thora aur
🤣
plzzz

i know my pout is not cute like bebo...but phr bhi😆
i know its all purana maal...but take it...dhanno aj kal kangaal hai🤣
hmmm kya kahu aur...are haan jiju is also so happy...after all his shrimati is giving back to back os
😉😆🤣...ye daikh

i know but pagalpanti bhi zaruri hai...🤣
love u basanti...urs only dhanno😳
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Wow...beautiful work👏

U said u r not a good writer😲

But u write so well...at least better than me😆



Edited by JalebiGirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Res
Unres
Fab OS komal loved it😃
So it is based on astha real story its amazing😃
khushi is ashu and arnav is DM of college
First day he scold khushi and then she meet him through anjali
Poor khushi, she thought chote is little kid🤣
Outstanding story loved it👏
Make 3-4 parts of this Os wanted to read more😆😆
Update next part soon😛
Edited by Nickysweet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Me in second page 😭

oh that was cute
specially the last line
I so loved this story 😊
Khushi bullying Arnav, that is different, loved it
Edited by ajoop - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg! It was very sweet!!!!!! Keep the good work up!
I specially love this line:
By the way, Khushi, that note was for you not for your bench mate
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Loved it ...
It was all together a different story
And way khushi made fun of arnav's name chotte...
And the way he boss her was so funny...
And as a coincidence he was anjali's chotte...
Well done
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
oh wow.
New os.
Amazing
bahuria rani.
Loved it.
Naak har waqt behti reti ti.sir par chameli ka tell lolz.
Hey cheeni are u gng to continue it.

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