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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: deepti1906
You are going to be death of me...😆
This was so cute Komal...
You know what my fav. part is? When Khushi mentioned Barun's and Sanaya's name...:D
I thought it was an OS but you made it a TS. Pehli baar kuch accha kaam kia tune..😛 After all roz roz thodi behti hui naak wala Arnav dekhne ko milta hai...🤣

It was awesome...👏 Wonderful...😃

And before you say I love you to me (which I know you wouldn't 😆)
Hum bhi aapse I love you DAMMIT...❤️❤️

@bold haww, gandi bachhi😆

Muahsss<3

missing u so much😭

Love u so so so much<3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Lalaland222
Hahaha! That was funny and extremely cute! ^_^
Loads of love doll! :)

thank you:)

Originally posted by: drashtimeetu
awsome update
loved it
finally both confess their feelings

thank you:)

Originally posted by: sushna
woww...nice...
loved it...
cute one...
thankx for pm...😃

thank you:)

Originally posted by: arshi-sugi-ipk
Awesome update 😊

thank you:)

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesome cute part

thank you:)

Originally posted by: MISTIE
amazing

thank you:)

Originally posted by: niksh
awesum one...!!!!

thank you:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..
Awesome lovely update
Loved it totally !! 😃😳

Thanks Gunjan

Originally posted by: kajribarunsobti
ohzzz that was awsm...aha bholu,...kya baat chori mil gyi

Hey KBS, main likhu aur chhori na mile aisa ho sakta hai kya??😉

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-
awww...so adorable

thank you:)

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the os a bully khushi so cute loved their confession she is totally nut thanks for the pm'

glad u liked it...

aww lovely pic:)

thank you:)

Originally posted by: 1rocks
Aww...😳

The whole TS was very cute...

Arshi are just so adorable...❤️

thank you so much:)

Originally posted by: HUMII10592
awesome loved iyit

thanks huma:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: sana11
awww...that was awesome👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thank you:)

Originally posted by: kuts
Awww.. It was a cute one..
<3<3

thank you so much Shraddha:)

Originally posted by: pooja102
hahhahah beautifuully written

thank you:)

Originally posted by: nirmal1992
wow!!...supercute!!...loved it...😳

thank you:)

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan
good one❤️

thank you:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb
A really great end Komi 🤗 Keep it up and do keep writing.

Glad to see you wrote part 2. 😃 The ending was really sweet :)

My Favourite scene was the end where Khushi talks about Barun and Sanaya and Arnav is like "Who is Barun and what is Rabba whatever?" 🤣 Love your dialogues.

Hey Manji

glad u liked it:)

lol...Dunno from where did I get that idea😆

muahs<3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: LuvArnavKhushi

Signed in, saw your PM, read your story, fell in love!!!!!!!! :D

Believe me this is how I was for most of it: lol...ur crazy

So finally the bully-turned-victim and the victim-turned-bully fell in love!! So cute how Arnav always loved her. Childhood loveee! (I can just imagine a little Arnav with a love letter in his hand and Khushi just daunting him)

"Of course I love you damnit!" These words can never get old! Never ever

He asked her to put oil in her hair!! 🤣

And her reference to the show was too good. INCEPTION! 😆

*sigh* A great start to my day Cheeni!

P.s. Thank you for linking my story at the bottom. So sweet of you. You've got a heart of gold!! How dare u thank me Farah, apne toh hume pal bhar me paraya kar diya(This is how ur fav hindi movies' actress' talk😉)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bs1224
LOVED IT ...

FINALLY THEY CONFESSED ...

THANKS FOR PM...

IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE ...

thanks:)

Originally posted by: devishree
i loved it dammit

thank you so much dammit😉

Originally posted by: mobina_m19
That. was amazing update just love it
Now table is turn and this time was bully and khushi was a poor soul
Love the update

yup, tables turned now. thanks Mubi:)

Originally posted by: wiwy

Superb! 👏Everything about the story...the idea, the humour, the dialogues, the reference to Barun n Sanaya was mind blowing! 👏
Never ever stop writing Komal!!⭐️🤗❤️

Wiwiy di, Muah<3

OMG my one of the fav writers says not to stop writing...me faintwa😆

OKAY??lol

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: chavvi16
so he was bullying her too
but his way was so cute
and it got them confessing
hey that was bound to happen right
so funny that was for sure

thank you so much for reading:)

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
That was so cute

thank you:)

Originally posted by: ASR6262
loved it

thank you:)

Originally posted by: Gul_malik
wow cheeeni
amazing.
Ak dum jakas.

Khushi said
farak phadta hai dammit bcoz ilove u.
N
i love u sir.lolz

he wrote love letter in 2nd grade.

Barun and sanaya mentioned.

Wow raabaa ve hai rabaaa ve.

hayee meri sasu ma khush aur kya chahie😉

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Oye chatterbox...I scraped you a link

Check kar...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Lily2011
nice

thank you:)

Originally posted by: please6
Love the update and the lol it was funny and lovely anyways loved it and plzzz write a new writing piece soon

thank you:)

Originally posted by: -Sadi-
Awesome :D

thank you:)

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
lovely confession... lovely TS 😳

thank you:)

Originally posted by: ArshiAms
awesome update cheeni cum🤗

thank you Ams:)

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun
loved it komal di
khushi was arnav's first crush and he loved her but he wanted to be sure of her feelings...his closeness affected her...and the last part where they confessed was so cute
superb os cheeni di
waiting for your more os to come
thanks for pm

thank you so much Gaggu.

M so glad u liked it:)