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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was one marvellous piece of write up...m rarely reading anything theae days..nd m glad I chose to read this!

As short as it is it has utna hi bada impact... uve portrayed a big social evil in a very dignified way also showcasing how sometimes a meeting at painful events can become a meeting of a lifetime. ..

I dont know if ive been able to express myself well... but in short m touched and moved by ur story...u express kamm words mein very effectively!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: megsy

This was one marvellous piece of write up...m rarely reading anything theae days..nd m glad I chose to read this!

As short as it is it has utna hi bada impact... uve portrayed a big social evil in a very dignified way also showcasing how sometimes a meeting at painful events can become a meeting of a lifetime. ..

I dont know if ive been able to express myself well... but in short m touched and moved by ur story...u express kamm words mein very effectively!


thanks megha-----and as for kam words mein effec tive---haath dukh raha tha yaar😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome OS!!!
you portrayed the message perfectly in your story!!
an absolutely amazing job!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS. I liked the concept of SwaRon never having met before. It was a very nice read.😊Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its simply wonderfull and such a impactfull piece of work..Just loved the way u showed the big evil and the consequences occured in a living of a girl in todays society..I really like the concept,that was realistic and most beautifull..The potrayel of the message with the character of SwaRon is just perfeclty written..It was short but brilliant one shot..Great work keep it up..
Truly,i never read u'r work before,but after reading this,i just say u are brilliant writer..Keep going..

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Its simply wonderfull and such a impactfull piece of work..Just loved the way u showed the big evil and the consequences occured in a living of a girl in todays society..I really like the concept,that was realistic and most beautifull..The potrayel of the message with the character of SwaRon is just perfeclty written..It was short but brilliant one shot..Great work keep it up..
Truly,i never read u'r work before,but after reading this,i just say u are brilliant writer..Keep going..

Prateek


thank you so much prateek----and especially thanks for letting me know. people mostly just come across, read---and leave. but yeah---thumbs up for my buddies---they are the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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medha it was an awesome os
the thought of writing the os was something impressive n spreading awarness
loved the os a lot
but i wished u would have given a proper end n atleast continued till 2nd part but as the topic suggest the end was appropriate
but in all it was an amazing os
keep writing more
thanx for the pm

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