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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Dii...

Is there a need to tell that i am speechless after reading the OS.. ?

Yes I am!

You always render me awestruck with your works..

The OS was not only beautiful but it also mirrored as the hard reality ..with a very gentle note and in appealing manner.

Hats off to u for handling such sensitive matter ..so aptly..

Being a girl..could really connect to the content of the OS And the message..the writer wants to show.

No doubt..ur writing enhanced the righteousness of the OS..you are one such wonderful writer..!

Keep writing..!

Love,

Ria

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing.

The concept and plot is so realistic :)

Fabulous OS 👏

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Regina.Phalange

@Regina.Phalange

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Seriously ..what an amazing piece of work👏

so realistic ..loved it ...i hope there more people like swayam in the world.

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome... I'm speechless...👏 You are as talented as your name suggests... You just wrote what is fearing each n every girl in this country n made it into a beautiful love story of two soul mates... Kudos to you on this one...👏

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

It was written beautifully and more importantly about a worthy issue.It is chilling to see how nonchalant our society has become to such disgusting crimes.These women end up becoming just another paragraph in the morning paper that people forget about once breakfast is done.
I would like to commend you for the way you kept this incident on centrestage and didn't let SwaRon's love story overshadow it.

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Gud...?..such a small word ...iski insult ho jayegi... 😆
It was awechummm...superb fascinating and whatnot...!!
I really consider myself lucky ...that i got to read such a beautiful os...
A very important social issue...worth and dignity of a women..were beautifully dealt...with..
Comming to swaron...their lifes and daily routines beautifully explained...
Tittle quiet justified...
everything was perfect...
i myself have read and written many os about swaron's romance...
But not even once did i honestly bother to u know think about this beautiful theme ...
Really i mean ur wonderful girl ...ye jo concept aapke dimag mein aaya...
It can make a valuable difference in the mind of many readers...
Really totally enchanting os...
U deserve alot of appreciation for it...
👏 👏 👏
Love,
Anandita ..

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
Medha...first of all grt concept...eve teasing is growing like hell in r society and top of that no strong measures are taken for it...I too have many female friends and I know how sum low level ppl degrade their respect and independence...

thank u for not just writing abt this grt concept bt also I love swayam dialog after he saves Sharon...

head off to u girl . ..

amit bhaiyya thank u so much---and also :D thank you for your head----i could really do with a CA's head right now! hat ke saath dimaag free.😛

but really thanks

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

it was simply beautiful

the concept that you choose

and the way it was written

beautiful 👏👏

i mean one of the best OS's i have ever read on society problems

well done

thanks for the PM

do write more

and do PM me

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Medha🤗

u are one talented girl..seriously..in such a simple and dignified manner..u not only told the story of 2 stranger who met over one unfortunate event but also showed how difficult it is to stand straight for a girl in this male dominated society ...swayam came to her rescue just like an angel..actually change in mind set can change so many things...about their bonding over frequent meetings and final realization was pleasant read...real..beautiful..flawless 👏👏👏

Love the way u write 😳

Luv
Deep

thanks deepu----and u're right