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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
ths part was awesome....jus 2 gud..keep it up....gosh..both of em ve too much attitude....but ths still sweet... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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veryyyyy nice...lolz.z...wwooooaaaah what attitude man..hehehehe...sujal's rulez hehehehe....so the entrie world is kind of marofying on sujal and kashish lolz.....hope they marofy for each other soon..lolx...so much attitude in one house hehehehe 😆 😛 ...continue sooon 👏

hope you did well in your soccer game 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1

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veryyyyy nice...lolz.z...wwooooaaaah what attitude man..hehehehe...sujal's rulez hehehehe....so the entrie world is kind of marofying on sujal and kashish lolz.....hope they marofy for each other soon..lolx...so much attitude in one house hehehehe 😆 😛 ...continue sooon 👏

hope you did well in your soccer game 😉

Thankx..We came 1st 😉 ....Continue tomoz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 6


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Review...LOTZZ..Of Attitude!!!!

Preview-No More Previews..Folks! 😉
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Kashish enters the party(which is still not over!..He..He!)

She goez racing to the bar

K-Waiter!..A WINE!(sorry dont noe N E Wine Names!)

Waiter-W

W-Yes..Maam!

A Voice yells out Kashish'z Name!

V-Kashish!

Kashish Turns around!..and she seez Anjali!

Anjali goes close to kashish

A-Maine Tume Kya Kaha Tha?

K-Urrrggh!...Bhabhi I Have to..This Guy!..

Anjali Interupts!

A-I Dont care..Common Im Leaving for home..The baby seems to feel Egatated!

K-What?..Iz Everything ok?

A-Haan..Come On!

K-Yah Letz Go!..I Myself dont want to stick around here!(I Wunder why? 😉 😆 )..

Simone Yells out from the back!

S-Kashish!

K-Ab Yeh Kyon Hai?

They turn around!

A-Arey Tu?

S-Haan Vo Di!..I Also want to come wid u!

A-Haan Vo Thoo Aja..Likin Tuje Kitne Bar Kaha Hai Kai Peechai Se Avaaz Nahin Mara Karo!

K-Oh..Common..Di!...Dont belive this shit!..its all crap!

S-Yah!

Then All 3 Of em!..Leave!

They come out in the parking lot...and Sujal is still there..both of em see eachother and Ignore eachother!

They Start! Walking...and so does Sujal..Hez walking into the party..but there(Simone,Anjali etc.)..are walking out of the party..

And all of sudden!..Sujal drops something!...and he goes to pick it up..and when he picks it up..and starts walking again..He Bumps into Anjali ...And She falls on the ground(that mustve been a hard hit!..Sujall 😡 )...

A-Aaah!

Sujals all shocked!

And Kashish And Simone quickly go to pick her up..Becuz It looks like shez having pains in the stomach(she is pregant!)...

K-BHABHI!!!..BHAHBI!! 😭 !..OMG!..SOME1 HELP!

and then sujal and simone and kashish help get anjali into the car..and once everything is set...Kashish goez upto Sujal

S-Thank-you Kainee kee Koi Zaroorat Nahin Hai!

AND THEN KASHISH SLAPPPPS HIM


Waaaaaakkkkkhhhhh!!

K-Main Tume Thank-you Kahonge??....Agar..mujhse badlaa lenha tha..to mujhse lethay!...Meri bhabhi ki aur uske batchai ka kya kasoor?

Sujal is still holding his cheek!

and then Kashish Leaves!!!

and gets into the car!..and there off!...and Sujal is still standing there



S-How Dare She!!.....Mein Tume Nahin Choruga..Kashish Virani!!..Kabhi Nahin...Tumne Sujal Garewal Par Haath Utaya Hai!!....AB BUKTO!!

And he also leaves!!



Thats it for today!!

Plz Comment!..I Know it was short..and plzz tell me if my parts are to short..from other fan-fics..cuz...Ill make it longer than! 😃 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
i hoep anjali's baby z alrite......nice part....oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!!! sujal got smacked....bechara....i wonder wut he ll do 2 kash now.... can' wait 4 da nxt partt....keep it up n gud job.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
toooo goodddddddddddddddd....... i loved it....keep up the good work... 👏
par yeh kashish ne sujal ko thappad kyun maara.... 😡
now me want to know sujal kya karega us thappad ka badla lene ke liye.... 😉 ab please jaldi se continue karna me will be waiting.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
just caught up with ur fic. its gr8.
just love the way u have potrayed our 2 dear sweethearts...their fights.
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
PART 7

Recap-Anjali Bumps into Sujal..and then Kashish slaps Sujal!


They reach the hospital..and Anjali is taken to the emergency room!....and Kashish and Simone...phone Mihir on his cell..telling him to send Kavya ergently down!....Mihir,Kavya,Tulsi...Quickly come to the hospital

Kavya-KA

KA-Kashish...What happened..is she ok...who did this??.....(he quickly asks her!)

k-Bro!..Bro!..Shez inside...the doctor hasnt come out yet!!...

KA-Ok..But how did this happen?

Kashish tells him everything...

K-Main Use Shordu Gee Nahin!

KA-Common Kashish...Im sure he didnt mean..to..and you slapped him?..what was his name

K-Ya!..I Dont care..but who ever messes with my bhabhi..i cood kill!

KA-Kashish tum mera jawab do(gets kinda irratated..and tells her to answer fast!)..what was his name

K-Umm....It was Su..Sujal.Garewal!

KA-....YOU SLAPPED SUJAL GAREWAL!..Shit!...tum jantee ho vo kitna powerful banda hai...it will effect us so much in business!

K-Shut-up Kavya..your wife is in the hospital..cuz of that man!

KA-But just becuz of that..doesnt mean you stop being reasonable!!

K-ya ya

Mihir gets irrated at the both..and sighs...to go see the doctor!

Tulsi-T

T-Ab Tum Jagra Band Karo!

Then Mihir comes there with the doctor!

Doctor-D

KA-How is she?..and the baby?

D-Dont worry Mr.Virani she and the baby are both fine..but she needs to stay here for another day..becuz we need to take some tests!..

K-Can we meet her?

D-Yes Go Ahead!

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All of them walk in...

Mihir and Tulsi..both sit on either side of Anjali


T-Beta Kaisi Ho?

A-Mama..Im Fine

M-Beta you should be more careful next time especially..when your carrying!

A-Jee Papa..Vo..

KA-Vo Kya?...Agar tume kuch ho jata(he says from were he was standing..in the back)

A-Kuch Nahin Hoga..Jab Tak Tumari Bahen(sister)...mera bodygaurd bunke merai saath hamesha goomai gee..kuch nahin hoga mujhe

Kashish smiles a bit

They sit there talking and laughing..for like 20 minutes!

And now its like 12midnight

T-Ab Tum lokh jahoo..mein yahaan pey rethi hoon...kafi raath ho gahi hai

KA-Nahin Mama Mey Retha Hoon

M-No Kavya we have a very important meeting tomoz!

KA-Oh Haan!

K-Mama!..Main Rahoon gee!..

T-No Kashish!

K-Plzzzzzzzzz Mom!

A-Mama...Rehnai Do Issey

T-Hamesha Uska Saath Deti Ho...Thats why shez so spoiled

A-Common Mom!

T-Ok!

T-Simone Come..Hum Tume Ghar Shor Detai Hain

S-Jee..Shoti Maan!

All of them leave..and Kashish And Anjali Start talking..and Talking...when someone knocks at the door!

Who?..Find out in the next part...Plz..Comment! 😃



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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
gud job .....da story z goin gr8....agian...i m da1st one 2 comment.....lolz loll........i m glad anjali n her baby z fine...i think kavya shud b more considerate....n shud b more careful abt his family instead of his busines....n i think dat the guy hu jus knocked is sujal...he prob came 2 c anjali.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
too good...very nicely written...keep up the good work... 👏
anjali & kashish's rishtha is very sweet & cute... 😳
i think the person at the door is the great sujal garewal yani ki humare hero... 😉
please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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