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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: group_1223
nice part......the story z goin gr8....i cudn't see a pic of wut she d b lookin like....will b waitin 4 da nxt part....gud job..

Thankz!..But why coodnt u see the pic..I Uploaded it..who noez!.. 😉

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#22

PART 4!..

Recap-Kashish Iz Ready for the party!!

Preview-What happens at the party! 😉

She is ready and she comes downstairs!..

Tulsi-Are Jalidi Kur!

K-Aye Mama!

She finally gets downstairs 😆 .(in her high high heals!hehe)

They enter the party and its a great mansion!

Mihir gets busy with His Business buddies..and so does Kavya..and Tulsi..finds sum of her friends..and goes there..and now its only Anjali and her!

Anjali-Are aa..Simone ko doondthe hain

K-Haan..Chaallo!

They leave..and then Anjali whispers to her!

A-Kashish..Promise me u wont drink!...after all we are at a high status party!!

K-Ok.Ok..Bhabi Dont you worry!

Simone Comes upto them!

Simone-S

S-Hey!!..Di!..hey kashish

K&A-Hey,Simone!!

A-Ok U Guyz Chill..Im going to go see what!..Kavya is upto!

S&K-Okiez!

So they start chilling!..and Kashish sees 2 hott guys and mentions it 2! Simone!

And those 2 hott guyz are Sujal And Prithvi-From KYPH..And Mathan in KSBKBT!

k-Are thek!

S-Kya!

K-Wahaan!..Mann there soo hott!..

S-Yaar!..Vo Ek Tho Teek! Hai!..Pur doosra(by doosra she means Sujal)..Man Iz He Seriouse,Short Tempered,and Egoistic..thoo uske chakaar mein nahin par!

K-Are,Every guy forgets all those,When they see me! 😉 ..

S-Yah W.e...Letz Goo!..and by the wai..the one im telling you about has a girl-friend..His Mom Doesnt noe..that they like eachother..but she thinks there good friends..who noez if she'll agree to the marrige..but I Dont think Sujal.Will Care what she thinks!

K-Sujal?

S-Yah Thats His Name!..And the other is Prithvi..his best friend..and Business partner.

K-IC!,I Dont care..Letz go upto them!

Kashish Goez Upto..Sujal Noeing that he has aa girl friend and ask him..

K-Wanna Dance!

Sujal was looking towards Prithvi!

S-Me?

K-No Your mom!

S-Excuse me?

K-Oh No Nothing,yes u! 😳 (I Did mention before that Kashish is a playa..shez not in luv or anything..but just making sure..that every guy..wants her 😉 )

S-With you,No!

K-Excuse Me?.........What did u say?.......You dont want to dance with me(still not getting it through her head)..Kashish Virani?...Jispe Har Lardka martha hain?....(She goes veerrry close to him..and starts touching his face...with her finger!)..U Must be joking!..dont be shy!..She says real close to him..and in a slow,soft voice)

Sujal Moves her away!..and walks away!!
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K-Omg!(Thinking to herself)...WTF..Iz This Guyz Prollem?
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Kashish Follows him...and goes upto him...And She pulls..His Arm...where he turns around

K-What did u say!!!(She says in a angry..but cute waa).......Or why didnt you say N E thing.,.....She says confused..

Sujal starts walking upto her..and says....Slowly!

S-Excuse Me..Cant u understand!..I Dont want to dance with you!....get it through your brain!..Now Leave me alone

Know she grabs his collar(Shez getting to hyper..for getting rejected for the first time)

K-Dont,Worry Your girl-friend..wont find out!..why u so scared?
Now Sujal Getz A Bit Angry,Like,Kitni Batameiz or Spoiled hai yeh(He thinks to himself)..and he starts walking again!

Then kashish Tells him to halt..and she grabs his collar

K-You get something through your head..you egoistic,desperate...fool!..no one rejects Kashish Virani!!!...Oh W.e..Dont think Your great becuz you turned me down..there will be millions like you!!...

(Or will there?? 😉 )

She leaves there!..and everyone starts stairing at Sujal!

S-What the hell!!..What are you looking at!!..carry on with your party!! 😡 ..He Yells!..And He fixes his collar...and goes after Kashish!!

Thats it for now...plzz comment..don just read..it encourages me to write betta..thanx! 😃

Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago

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surbhi

@*~sur~*

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#23

👏 gr888 goin plzz cont soon 😃

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group_1223

@group_1223

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

nice part....jus luved it...keep it up...

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rajeev1

@rajeev1

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#25

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wwoooow...great story...just caught up with the last parts....great work..heheheh kashish is such a ...lol...hehehehehe....ya so now sujal's following her hehehe...great stuff.....keep it up and continue soonn 😳 and sooo sorry for commenting late..... 😃 😳 😛

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rajeev1
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wwoooow...great story...just caught up with the last parts....great work..heheheh kashish is such a ...lol...hehehehehe....ya so now sujal's following her hehehe...great stuff.....keep it up and continue soonn 😳 and sooo sorry for commenting late..... 😃 😳 😛

No Worriez!..And Yup She is such a...Wierdo! 😉 .....And ill continue..Tomoz!...Just gott bak from my soccer game 😉 ..AND EVERYONE ELSE ..THANX FOR COMMENTING...I APRECIATE IT! 😃

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Parvathi

@Paru6

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

just caught up with ur fan fic 😊very nice effort 👏 loved it 👏 dono ki gussa 😆 😆 😆 will get along very well 😆 😆 😆 so plz cont soon 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#28

please continue soon..me will be waiting... 😃

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#29

PART 5!..

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments..I REAAALLLLLYY apreciate it...So Keep Posting!..and the fan-fic..will keep going to its best! 😉

N.E Wayz!

Recap-Kashish freaks out for getting rejected!..for the first time😲...and after she spazzes at Sujal..He follows her to the parking lot!

Prievew-Some More Attitude! 😡

Kashish runs into the parking lot..and after!....Sujal gets mad...and he comes after her!

Sujal-S Kashish-k

S-Hey!!,Hey You!..(he yells while trying to catch upto kashish)

Kashish turns around surprised..and yells

K-Tum!!

Sujal catches upto Kashish

He starts going closer and closer..until Kashish Iz Leaning on a hood of a car..and Sujal has his hands on either side of Kashish

S-Mein..Daroon Ga??..Vo Bee..Meri Girlfriend sai..Ek Larki sey!..Im Not scared of my girlfriend...BUT..The real reason I Didnt dance with you is that..I'm Scared of my reputation getting hurt..being seen with ppl like you!(OoOoH...What a burn..Kashish u going to take that? 😆 )

Kashish is just staring at him...and when he says the last words...she trys to push him off of her!..

K-urg..Get off me!..How dare u!! 😡

S-ah..Ah..Ah!...Sujal Garewal sey Batameizi nahin(he says in a soft slow voice..and then it gets louder...SUJAL GAREWAL SEY BATAMEIZI NAHIN!...

K-W.e...(and gives him a discusted look)

S-Sssshhh...Ab Jo Bhi Tumne Andar Kiya Hai...Mujhe to lagtha hai..kai...ab tume darna chaiye!

Kashish looks confused..and is like what is he going to do to me!

Sujal comes closer,closer,,closer,until there 1cm barely away!...He grabs Kashish Hand!...Tightly!

And It Hurts Kashish

K-Aannh!...Your hurting me!

S-If I Didnt want to hurt..you...would I Be doing this?(Good Point! 😉 )

Sujal comes closer closer until Kashish Starts to turn her face to the side!

S-What are you doing!...Sujal Garewal ke saath Waqt Guzaar ne kayliey lardkian marthi hai!

Kashish Sayz To Herself(Yah Right)

S-No Relly!..

K-What!

S-O Nothing...

So Then kashish starts to turn her face..and Sujals Lips are a inch close to Kashish'z Cheek!

They Both..Stop for a second..Kashish Starts Getting tingly from inside( 😆 )

And all of a sudden...Sujal leaves her!!

And Kashish is standing in the same position!..for like 3 secs..after he lets her go..and then slowly starts to turn her head towards Sujal

S-Meney Kaha Tha Key Mein Is Thara Ke Loko Kein Moon Nahin Lagtha!

And he leaves...And Kashish Iz Left Standing there!!

Kashish to herself..who does he think he is??...Well WHo ever he thinks he is..cant be less..than N E 1!..Looser...Some ppl can be so stuck up!!(..Ya 😆 )..Agar Tumare saath waqt guzaar neh key liye Lardkian marthi hai..Tho Kashish Virani ke Saath Guzaar neh keyliey Lardkai Marthain Hein..UNDERSTOOD MR.SUJAL GAREWAL....

And she leaves to go get a drink!..(she got too worked up! 😆 )

Thats it for today..I Now It was Short...But Im Aking From my soccer game!..sorry...Pllzzzzz Comment!..Ill Continue sooon!..pyc out yall! 😉

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#30

toooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.... very damn intresting... i love the attitude which sujal ,kashish have......they characters totally rock... 👍🏼
please try & continue soon... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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