#5:VIRMAN FF*kyu DARD hai itna*IMP NOTE AT 98 - Page 18

fabulous...👏

OMG ! Manvi kidnapped I am sure it has something to do with Karan's father. Hopefully Virat reaches and saves her .. A very interesting Update... gave me Goosebumps reading it towards the end ..

God! what an update... really interesting hopefully nothing bad happens to Manvi...You are simply amazing Shilpa...

in d start I thought d surprise will be the confession...but u are a genius in giving twists arnt u ;) ...manvi suddenly In a death situation is scary ...will love to know how virat will save her...please don't include a gunshot on virat n stuff like dat ...instead harm manvi...lol ;) atleasr virat will understand his love n CONFESS...gosh I'm so obbsessed with confession in your story...d day u started writing only confession fills my mind...well coming to the update ...loved d way u described d scene when virat picks her up outside d hospital...also loved it when he smiled looking at her eating icecream...these cute moments n expressions are fably written...it makes me go awww...I hv always commented dat I love this virat so I won't write it again in dis comment :););):)...instead il write I love manvi...d killer will definately be karan...n I'm dead sure dat virat will.kill him...a very possessive husband he is as u know ...will wait eagerly for the next update...please continue soon :):):):):);););););););) n dare you think to discontinue dis ff ...its one of the best stories on if ...or maybe the best ...thanx for d pm...:):):):):):)

It was marvelous updt...the last part was scary...she is in a trouble...but wat file she is having...i think there r some proves against mrs.singhania...that dam related info...ehahahaah...my fvrt virat n karans amna-samna...omgoshhh cant imagin...this time virat will not leave his easily...but i think karan is even not aware abt manvis whereabout...its may b his dad this time...lets c...cont soon shilpa

awesome update shilpa...

Is it Karan or his father??? Since she said she has file, i doubt it is karan's father

Omg...awesome update as usual
Manvi kidnapped 😲
Which file she had
Now what virat wl do...it's freaking awesome seriously
👏 👏 👏
Eagerly waiting for next

nice update he taking so much care of her
he know that he was developing feeling for her
but still he trying to Dennie that feeling toward her
and some body kidnap her now how will he find her
update soon

Hello shilpa...the update was amazing...tk care...