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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Nice updateee!!!
Love the interior design of the mansion n MR. Bad boy is being a goody goody n taking care of his precious love... How sweeet! ROfl Mr Vadhera stop cheating ok..: Lolol that scene was cuteee seducing her but thn bam dropped her on reality... Man... Someone push his button n turn him on...poor manvi...playing with her feelings :p
Now action game start now? Go for it wanna see face off really Looking forward to it...
Update soon when u r freee

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roshreb

@roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

superb update..loving virat as the caring husband.. but still he doesn't want to admit that he loves her.. after that ice cream scene when he carried her to the bedroom ..me too didnt expected him to move back..but i think for that we have to wait moreee... and nw another twist..manvi in danger.. eager to know who is after her life and abt which file she was referring ... im sure she will be back safe as virat will turn the world upside down to find her.. waiting for nxt part..

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anamica5

@anamica5

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

fab update shilpa!!
nd who kidanapped her
omg plzz contine soon!!

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Anaida

@iamanaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Awesome update...after a real long time... eager to read the next...how will Virat manage to save Maanvi... thx Shilpa...

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mkkpb_fan

@mkkpb_fan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

thanx for the update dear... seriously 1 day of waiting seems to be not less than 1 week...😆

the update was amazing.. Virat taking care of Manvi❤️... but guess it would take some more time for them to be more close to each other😳

nd maanvi is kidnapped😲... nice twist... eager to know how will Virat find Manvi...

continue asap

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paddu503

@paddu503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

awesome update...loved virat care for manvi...hope he cannot deny his love for her so long...both were lucky for eachother...every part of the update was amazing...always u end the part with some twist...its exciting...continue soon...take care...

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Awesome update shilpa !!!!👏👏👏 really superb !!! loved every bit of it ❤️ awwieee caring virat !!! :DDD the way he took care of manvi !!! hayye the staring hospital scene !!! my god 😳😳 virat kissed her the way she did !!! maar dalaa🤢🤢 virat is still confused !!! love hogayaa usse !! par he is juz not realizing !!! 😛 Virat carries manvi !!! 😉 the ice cream scene !!! such a amazing scene !!! ❤️ Oh god !!! manvi got kidnapped😲 n wat is the file manvi talking abt ??? is it karan doing all this?? this is really interesting !!! can't wait for next part !!! continue soon if possible shilpa !!! thanks for the pm in advance :D

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Awesome Update..!! Virat is a complete different person now...bt he isn't ready to accept his feelings but loved it that by end Maanvi is kidnapped atleast he would get a glimpse to what he feels for his wife...Sanjay is seriously a sweet brother...Eager for next to how Virat has plotted against Karan..!!! Superb Update Shilpa..!!!

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

super and lovely update...

virat is so caring...

plzzz update it quick...

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

awesome update again & it was really long
hope to get such lengthy updates in the future
loved it
loved virat-maanvi closeness & his care for her
last bit was scary
hope maanvi is fine