Kria & Rey FF #3 (Ch 3 ,P 4 , Pg20)

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Di seriously in first part I somewhere felt kriya played with him but reading this one and knowing her P.O.V I am moved. Very much!!! Di please ek update mil sakta hai iska??? I can't wait more!!! A painful yet beautiful lovestory!!! yeah beautifull... I am sure you are gonna make it one

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

ohhh god i never ever thought k ye past tha unka...

its actually a painful story...

Kriya's pain and suffering described beautifully...

and her dad he is seriously a chepster...i mean how could he...

i really can't wait for the next part...

plzzz try to update soon... (:

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Anjori

@anjoriii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

firstly...what to say ..

ummm ...sucha looonnnggg chapter

i luved it

it was just amazing

just waiting t know what will happen in the future ...

ur stories are just amazing and this one is mind blowing

will be waiting

please update soon

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Amazing update...

Loved the way u described their emotions...

Why does Kriya's dad do this??? Doesn't he love his daughter??

Plzzz update soon!!!:):)

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

such a bas***d her dad is 😡

i just loved dis part a lot <3

Edited by Arshaholic - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

CoNGRATS 4 d new thread di. . . .
Awsome update. . . . .

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

congrats 4 d new thread
awsome update
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

amy... do you know.. how much we love ur stories ... 🤗

gosh... this is such an ammmaazziiinnnggg concept... 👏

poor kriya.. her dad is 🤬indeed.. & so as the society... womenizers 😡

awesome.. unexpected.. she had that guts to pull a stranger like this 😆

awww... my dancing angels 😛

this cafe part is so beautiful.. they just met & this perfect connection between them.. 👍🏼

whoa.. Its hot as always...☺️

but more than that... its full of love.. u've done a gr8 job.. pouring out her emotions in this 👏

arrgghh.. her dad.. is he for real?? 😡

achhi bhali lovestory jam rhi thi ... saara rayta faila diya 🤢

no wonder.. why rey is so adamant on taking revenge from her

he must be shattered... he was rethinking abt his london studies... ohh 😳

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prinum

@prinum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awesome update...
Poor kriya ..she had to bear so much...hate her father..
Dint expect da ending part...
Beautifully written...
Thnx for da pm...

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Jily

@Jily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

i recently discovered your FF's and i am glad that a new chapter started just when i found your amazing work!!!

coming to update...

that cannot be her dad😡😡

bas***d...forcing his daughter to do this was just out of a father's context...but maybe she is his adopted daughter..

kriyansh...i really want to see the mystery unfolding...rey i think hates her after this but he will find out why she did this...

waiting for next update and thanks for the PM

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