Kria & Rey FF #3 (Ch 3 ,P 4 , Pg20)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

that was an amazing chapter

so the whole past in one go... amazing...

poor kria.. she has gome thru a lot...

poor she...

and then rey... he was sweet...

but anyone wud feel that way... given the circumstances...

they have so many folds on them...

wonder how they r gonna get rid of it...

I just loved hoq u described everything...

awesome update...

thank you again... :-)

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

amazing update love it krias father is so rude n bad love each n every scean of kr

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMG... ye kya tha...???? 😲

u started off all this with a banggg yarrr...

Kria... Rey... Kria's moron dad... 😡

Rey Kria liking each other...

baap re.. me still stuck in shock..!!!! 😲

okay well.. i loved the coffee part no doubt...

and.. make out.. lol... 😳

but uske baad... Kria ne apne dad ki baat kyu suni..??? *sar deewar pe marring* 😡

poor Rey... 😭

but in all... A dhamakedaarrr Start...

i just loved it...

waiting for future updates...

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Frst f all congos di...

Fabulous start

Could never have imagined such a past.

I hate nahi LOATH kriya's dad..

D coffee part was too good.

But the end was horrible.

Please update soonish ! *battling eyes*

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awsum part it is i luved it alooot

Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Congratulations for the new thread 😃...

About the part , it was Superb ...

So this is what happened 9 years ago - The reason of Rey's ajeeb wala behavior...

Kria's Dad is a 🤬..

'Dad' k naam pe dhaba hai woh , how can he force his daughter to do such a thing 😡...

(Or maybe he isn't her real Dad 😳)...

Wow!! KR ki first ever meeting kafi interesting thi...

What Kria did was quite daring , ese the Hunk-Reyaansh Singhania ko collar se kheench kar le jana N upar se declaring herself his GF , kya baat hai 😉...

Then Rey behaving like a 'Lost Lover' 😆 , doing whatever his heart says , asking Kria for a coffee , getting comfortable with her , hearing her wish ,'getting lost in her N then the Kiss 😳 , was Awesome..

Then the rest Romance follows ☺️...

Too much to handle in a day 😆...

Phir bomb phoota ...

Kria actually thanked Rey for the beautiful night she experienced , So y the hell did she agree to what her father said 🤔...

No wonder he was so rude with her , even after so many years...

Well!! I'm loving this story ❤️...

Will be waiting to know what happens next...

N thanks for the pm 😊

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

great update
really hate kria's dad..
poor rey
thnx 4 da pm

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome...kriya 's father kya kahu uske baarey mem???? eagerly waiting 4 next part...

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

this update was awesome

i really loved it

the way u showed the relationship that kria's dad n she shares was terific

n the way rey felt uncomfortable at the party was awesome

kria's n rey's convo while having coffeee was truely mindblowingly plotted

then when rey n kria sleeps together , their each se* action was awesomly done

there was tenderness n comfortableness in each line unlike other ff

i just loved it

i really liked how u portrayed their kiss , like it was so..what to call??

like it was so beautiful n blissfull

just i wished to have my first kiss that way

but i didnt get one thing like kria bagged the assignment in rey's dad company then what was need of her to sleep with him, n if she was emotionally felt attached to rey then why did she left rey, why didnt she left her number

please clarrify in next chapter

and also include the part what wud have happened if kria disagree to follow her father's instructions

he wud beat her or what?

anyway

the chapter was awesome n long one

n i loved it

update soon

n please update DOL