Kria & Rey FF #3 (Ch 3 ,P 4 , Pg20)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Res

unres

d update was mindblowing👏

the way u portrayed d emotions of both kria and rey was amazinggg👏

totally lovedd ittt😊

hope rey finds d real reason of y kria left him😳

waiting for d nxt part😊

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awww that was amazing...

I mean the way you showed the emotions...

That was beautiful...,..

I really loved the way you showed the complexities of the industry and the way you showed her persona was amazing...

And then how rey is believing his inner instincts is amazing... how he is not totally moved by the public opinion and is trying to seebeneath her...

I also love the inner feelings and turmoil you are showing for both of them... unfazed by time sort of...

Awesome as usual... :-)

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

awsum & beautiful update

luv it

thanks for d pm

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

loved the update bt really confused wht rey is trying to do 😕

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chetna

@crazysky

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

its superb

really loved it

i am loving the personality of kria in this ff

i loved the way u had shown how a celeb's life is

loved it

the update was awesome

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

res

unres

finally iska update mila

the update was superb 👍🏼

i simply loved it

the personality and character you hvae given to kriya is mid blowing

im loving it ❤️

thank you so much for the PM

please update soon

and do PM me

P.S. i really am in love with your works 😳

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

BEautifull update

very well well well written

update soon plz plz plz

plz update soon next chp 😃😃😃

plzzz

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wonderful update
loved it
waiting for nexr..

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

that was superb as usual...

m loving this kriya...

she is bold confident yet soft...

and rey was really harsh...

but at least now he is also considering his inner voice to know about real kriya...

not that aryan's ex wife or model or actress...

i just loved the chapter...

plz update soon... (:

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Thanx... I was waiting for it... 😃

Poor kriya... she's still struggling...😭

& rey is still humilating her in front of every man in the universe...😡

He's burning in the fire of revenge... made on his assumptions...

Ufff... assunptions are the mother of all goof-ups ...

But... I'm glad he reconsidered his thoughts about her...😊

& she truly managed to change it... thanks to her confidence...

Awwiiee... he still care for her...🤗

True... wat should she do... thank him or be angry...😳

He kissed her... ... I can see the things getting better now...