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cutebreeze

@cutebreeze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Really an emotional update, happy 4 arshi

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

loved the update

awesome one

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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@nidhu18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Awesome update ! Beautifully written, loved the last part when you mention what matter most that they were sorry for their flaws.

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@--MISHTEE--

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Loved d update

beautifully written

nd well described

pls update soon

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dolly477

@dolly477

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

love it
very nice update

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

super perfect and awesome part!!

I just loved it!!

Cool all in all!!

Please carry on soon!!

I loved this chapter very much because of their heart felt apologies from both!!

Carry on soon!!

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

loved it...!!!!!!!!!
u have penned it down very nicely...
u r ri8...every human is to error..
w8ng for the big climax..!!

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

i don't understand in initial updates u showed Arnav as one of the best and didn't gv much description abt Shyam but nw u give a character sketch of Shyam as all positive and good,lost and some1 who deserve sympathy while listed none of Arnav's positives...if he was so very good y wud Khushi's buaji reject him and choose Arnav over him...
and even in this update u tried 2 show Shyam all innoscent and Anita 2 b on wrong side for breaking up with him...Shyam had cheated her,played with her emotion and used her trust on him yet u tried 2 describe in a way that Shyam gets sympathy...
please clear our confusions...
anyway loved that finally Arnav's confession brought them closer than never before...
update soon...

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Just loved it and finally he bursted out his feelings for her. Feeling pity for anita and shyam . So they are back and hope their feeling for each other would get more strong . Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.