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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Loving the concept :-) can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
wowww...
ur story is juz reminding me my fav Vampire diaries...
nd u wrote truly well..
plz plz plzzz update soon..
nd if possible send a pm to me whnvr u update..
juz eagerly waiting to read moree..😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
update update updateee...
meko na iska update chahiye..
rashiii...
plz update ds one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tune ska update nahi kiya na toh dekh lena
I WON'T TALK TO YOU !!!!
Gandi !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Had hi hogayi...!! Karungi na update..
exams khatam hone tak toh chain se betho..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Had hi hogayi...!! Karungi na update..
exams khatam hone tak toh chain se betho..!!



hum chain se nhi baithne waley
nahi tumhey chain se baith denge..
we want update.. dat too asap..
juz aftr ur exm finishes..😃😃
u hve really greedy nd demanding readers..😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3: Our Own Little Secret


She sat resting her head on her palms. Eating French fries one by one as her thoughts were fixed on only him. how mysterious he looked, so immensely beautiful yet so dark and painful. His perfectly toned muscles, beautifully carved face, miraculous smile and so hot eyes. She was totally hooked. She sat on the desk looking endlessly, her eyes having a faraway look, as she thought about only him. Until she felt her shoulders shaking, she knew it wasn't possible until earthquake attack, but really, was Tina any less than Earthquake?

Tina shook her shoulders, hard. Real hard. Just to make sure she was out of her dreamland.

'What's wrong with you toway?' Aveek asked while chewing a French fry clearly not able to speak well.

'You've been lost the whole day!' Tina almost yelled

'Nothing's wrong, you guys are dreaming!' she exclaimed.

'Till yesterday, you were a pale little whiny kid complaining you can't sleep and now you seem like a zombie in love!' Aveek said

'I can't sleep guys, something is wrong with my room' she said

Tina gave Aveek a horrified look then both of them looked at her in disgust.

'You mean, u too?' Aveek asked his face turned as though he'd just seen a ghost.

'what me too?' she asked

'You don't know the past behind your house, right?' Tina asked.

'No! but who gives a damn' she suppressed a laugh but soon realized both her friends were hell serious. 'W-whats wrong guys?'

'A boy was killed in your house' Aveek said looking partially at both of them.

'What!? My place? No! the landlord said it was all a rumour' she exclaimed.

'Kriya, people have seen him' Tina said He was killed right in your bath tub'

'You guys are kidding right? This is all a joke!' she said hoping for them to laugh at her anytime now.

'Kriya, he's there, people say, the boy is still there' Aveek said

'What do you mean?' Kriya asked

'His dad killed him, people say he's still somewhere there' Tina said In your house'

'I don't believe it!' Kria snapped

'We are not asking you to start believing it, we just want you to stay alert and safe' Aveek said

'Kriya got up from the stairs they were sitting on, looking back at them and saying 'I guess I should leave'

The words echoed in her ears. 'His dad killed him' then again 'He's still there'

Gulp.

By the time she ringed the bell she was close to tears. She wanted to know everything about him now! Right from the start. But for that she first needed to sleep.

Sweden opened the door welcoming her in. 'You're early today?' she asked

'Yes, I had no classes, so, I thought I'd catch some sleep. Quite tired' she said stretching her arms.

'Good. go upstairs, change and get some sleep, call me if you need anything'

'Sure' Kriya smiled before rushing upstairs.

As she closed the door of her room, she found him standing behind her bed, a little smirk playing on his lip and oh, those beautiful pair of orbs, she wanted to kiss him, badly now, but was afraid that he'd find it rude, he was standing there, waiting for her, looking at her. She took a minute to gain back her senses, but was finally out of her love-land!

'don't tell me I'm sleeping' she said

'You're not!' he replied

She threw the bag on the couch moving towards him, little by little, when she was close enough she just knew what to do.

'K-Kriya?' he stammered

She kept a hand near his heart and found no beat. She held his hand up and found no pulse, she moved near his nose and surprisingly found no, seriously, no breath.

'Who are you?' she hushed breathing heavily.

'Rey' he said looking into her chocolaty eyes.

She looked at the huge wound he had on his forehead, it wasn't bleeding but it wasn't healed, it was widely spread on his entire forehead.

She brushed her hand against it and his expression turned into a pained one.

'I'm sorry, does it still hurt?' she asked.

'Yes, it does' he said a lot'

She brushed her hand on his cheek gently, until she felt his hand on her waist, pulling her tightly against him, not leaving a chance his hand moved up to her spine, parting her hair so that he could get a clear path on her back.

'What you doing?' she giggled feeling his warm touches on her back.

'You'll find out, soon enough' he said

She smiled then looked behind at the mirror, it seemed as though she was standing alone, there was no, actually no sign of him there. This realization disturbed her more, she looked back at him.

'Who are you?' she asked

He took a moment then said 'If i tell u, You'll run away'

'I won't' she replied.

He nodded looking at her furiously until she pulled him on her bed grabbing his arm.

'Kriya.. what u doing?' he said but before he could object He fell next to her, silently with a thud, running his hands through her dark hair, he took a sigh, she looked at him and then said

'It feels so right with you, you know, I think you're the one for me..' she stopped sensing his hesitation.

'whats wrong?' she hushed.

'I know, but, it's just that i have something which you won't like to hear' he said

'Your dad killed you?' she asked

'No, he wasn't my dad, he was my moms boy friend, I was always against him, he used to come home late at night then use my mother and then walk away' he took a pause 'one day not different from others, he came, he was a criminal, I was not young, I could understand what's happening wasn't good, so I called the police as soon as he arrived, and in return after beating my mother badly, he stabbed my head'

Kriya had a horrified look on her little face, she looked at him with amazement then said 'And?'

'And I died that day Kriya,' he said with a pained expression on his face and his crystal eyes shouting for attention, demanding affection and love like that of a three year old.

She moved closer to him, and just before touching him she said 'I don't care whatever you may be as long as you're with me, I just like you the way you are' and then she kissed him while he just pulled her closer to him, with his hands studying her elegant figure precisely.

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Hola!

Ha! it feels so good after updating seriously!

Thanks to miss Arya i had to Spam the last page ! Like seriously.. itna late comment? -_-

ANyways.. i know i know.. im not good..

the chapter was lame and maybe that is because of the decreasing likes.. 🤔

*Sigh*

Do hit the tab..

Hope u like the chapter..

And and and.. Thank Sargam for update. she spammed my entire scrapbook for this update P

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Orchid's Comment..

hello nesi ji..
apney sach mein update ki??
i truly cnt blve??
finally meri itney sarey spamming ka result mila.. :D
thnk u ji.. for d meherbani.. :D
but seriously.. its so so sooo short!!!!!!!!
itna chotu prt kyun??
ek toh itney dino bad update milta hain upar se itna sa :(
by d way, vampires ke images sach mein hote hain ya nhi?? any idea gal?? as i read both conceptions nd as u knw my love towrds vamp toh mujhey janna hain.. lol :P
waisey yeh kya twst hain..
sum1 killed rey..
seems more suspense on d way..
update soonish.. :D
nd thnkiee for keeping the 'res'..
abhi update "savage awakening"... u see.. i'm too demanding.. now be ready for getting spams for SA... ;)
t.c.. luv ya.. <3

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Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
That was a lovely update...
mujhe kii series ya movie ki yaad dilata hai..

though i don't remember which.. 😆]

loved the was you showed it...

amazingly written.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome...
Rey's father was so cruel.
U write superb...
Hope sb sahi ho jaye

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