|| Awakening || *KR SS* [COMPLETED]

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|| Awakening ||



Its been a while, Since i wrote a new OS.. Nai?😳
Merko bhi esa hi lag raha tha.. so here i am again!⭐️
Back to eat your head!!😃
I honestly don't know how it is..😕
Just saw ArSha IV and... don't know..
It just inspired me so much that i couldn't help but post it!😳
If you want me to continue just shower you interest and ponder your comments!🤗And no power in the world can stop me from updating! Too filmy? I know..🤪
Anyways, Don't forget to hit the tab!😉
And well, i don't like tomatoes and eggs, i prefer chappals!😎





Index

Chapter One : keep scrolling..

Chapter Two : pg 8
Chapter Three : Page 18

Chapter three : Pg 14
Chap 4 - Page 18
Chap 5 - Page 24
Chap 6 : Page 26
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1:The Whispers


Kriya, Kriya Kriya

She heard the whispers again, every night she would get this dream, this dream--this weird dream. Actually not a dream, its just whispers she heard them all the time! Each and every night, and then her eyes would open with a start! As she tried to come out of her bed she felt a hand pulling hers fiercely causing her veins to pain as her arm turned red with the marks. She sat on her bed, straight--not at all in motion. She picked up her pen and marked the space where she got that mark, there were six marks in total, since a week, she had been bearing these dreams which caused her nothing more than pain as she struggled not to listen to the mysterious yet beautiful voice.

Six days, since she quitted taking her anti-anxiety pills--that is a six days, she had been bearing this dusky repetition of her name, numerous times. She pulled her nightstand, from it she fished out the bottle of anxiety pills, She opened the bottle, before that she glanced at the clock.

4 Am.

Too early for morning dose and too late for night's, she threw the bottle back into the blue nightstand, glancing at it partially. One pill, just one pill and she would get rid of these haunts, totally. But then, she would fail to do what she had been trying --to prove that she didn't require these pills now.

She felt she latch of her room being clutched, she sank into her blanket and switched off her lamp, she saw a shadow stepping in and in an instant she understood who it was--her mom.

'Honey?' she heard her warm voice.

'Mhmm' she replied.

Sweden has been worried, since days Kriya has been engrossed in herself, she didn't like to talk much, had dark, dark circles around her hazel eyes, she didn't eat much, Kriya looked as though she had been doing drugs. No matter how late she steps into kriya's room she always found her awake, today was one of those days when she heard her loud voices, not exactly voices-cries, and would come to check. She never knew why she was this insecure, but initially felt it was a cause of concern.

'Honey, are u still up?' Sweden asked gently moving towards her bed.

'Hmm.. you know i can't sleep, don't you?' she heard her voice

'Is something going on with you?' she asked switching on the lamp beside her bed.

"There's something wrong with this room, wrong with this bed, wrong with my eye lids, wrong with my sleep, wrong with my brain, Something's just WRONG! Wrong with ME!!!" she wanted to shout but then she simply replied.

'I'm fine mom'

'Are you sure?' Sweden asked her looking straight into her eyes as if she could read her mind.

'Very sure' she replied, And then the question she hated the most occurred.

'Did you take your medicine?' Sweden asked.

She clutched the sheet down her hand, she had been lying, continuously lying, but she had to do this.

'Honey, Did you take the pills?' Sweden asked

Gulp.

She simply nodded, telling her that she did-well, she did try to.

Sweden sighed and then said 'Good, You can come to my room if you feel like it okay?'

She knew she couldn't, she knew it was nothing more than a formality, she knew Sweden didn't mean it, but somehow she opened her mouth and said

'Yeah' and then Sweden left shutting the door behind her.


Aage ke Chapters ka wait karo.. bahut time lagega update hone me.. 😛 😃

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res😳

unres

woww amazing start👏👏

loveedd ittt😊

continue soon😊

waiting for d nxt part😃
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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la lalala...

what is this...

itna bda OS kyu likha hai...

mujhe pta hai kitna time lga padne me...🥱
Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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swet n short chpter
love it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Roop..

la lalala...

what is this...

itna bda OS kyu likha hai...

mujhe pta hai kitna time lga padne me...🥱


Abhi pura OS thori na update kiya ha..

Wait kariye Aage ke updates ka..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its so amazing! ^_^
:D


Update the rest parts soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reswa :-D
uneswa :-D. . . .
Aaiyee -haiyee rashi ji. .
Ek aur OS. .wow. . .
I lovd dis part. .
Madam plz kripya kerke nxt part jaldi update kerna.
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashi_d3


Abhi pura OS thori na update kiya ha..

Wait kariye Aage ke updates ka..



wait jyada lamba mat khinch dena...

BTW i loved this part... (:

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update
kria ko hamesha kuch marks milte he body pe
thats stange
n
she cant sleep
poor girl
her mother is also wierd for her
love the concept of this os
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago

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